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You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. Mwgn9
A community is built so that people can live together with a blissful life while having the necessary facilities and benefits. To decide upon the one thing that I should focus on to bring a change to the community is a hard nut to crack. If I get a chance to work for a couple of hours to improve the community, I will provide free food and shelters to the people who are in dire need of these basic amenities. To begin with, I believe that when a person's daily needs are met, that person can live a happy life. During this pandemic, many people have lost their jobs as the companies were trying to cut short a large number of employees to save money. In fact, they directly sent them an email without any further notice or meeting and the reason behind was awful enough that people start panicking because they were shocked how they will meet their basic necessities. For instance, I have seen many people begging in the street for money with a heavy mind as they badly need that money for feeding their kids. In this heartbreaking situation government came forward to help with benefits but unfortunately, those were not even enough to even pay their rent despite they were having a long list of bills. I saw many people could not come forward to get some help but could not help themselves as they were ashamed of their situations. I felt really sad but I had fewer opportunities to help others while the pandemic hit hard because I also lost my job. I tried my best to be there to mentally support others with the same situation. I only could help with a small amount of money to some people and sometimes I also brought groceries for them. But I felt this was not enough. In addition, I could not work as a single person to provide benefits to every people who are in need. As the pandemic is still ongoing, I feel I should spend several hours a week with other volunteers who have the same goal of helping these people. I have already built a valid website with the help some broad-minded friends of mine with the goal of a big project through which we can reach every corner of my community. In fact, we have started getting donations from our near and dear ones who are trying to encourage us to go ahead and make the scheme possible. To conclude, I am ready to give my hundred percent to make any improvements of my community possible by working several hours a day. Even If It is only me to work hard to reach my goal, I am ready to do it anytime.
A
community
is built
so
that
people
can
live
together with a blissful life while having the necessary facilities and benefits. To decide upon the one thing that I should focus on to bring a
change
to the
community
is a
hard
nut to crack. If I
get
a chance to work for a couple of hours to
improve
the
community
, I will provide free food and shelters to the
people
who
are in dire
need
of these basic amenities. To
begin
with, I believe that when a person's daily
needs
are met
, that person can
live
a happy life. During this pandemic,
many
people
have lost their jobs as the
companies
were trying to
cut
short
a large number of
employees to save
money
. In fact, they
directly
sent them an email
without any
further
notice or meeting and the reason behind was awful
enough
that
people
start
panicking
because
they
were shocked
how they will
meet
their
basic necessities
.
For instance
, I have
seen
many
people
begging in the street for
money
with a heavy mind as they
badly
need
that
money
for feeding their kids. In this heartbreaking situation
government
came forward to
help
with benefits
but
unfortunately, those were not even
enough
to even pay their rent despite they were having a long list of bills. I
saw
many
people
could not
come
forward to
get
some
help
but
could not
help
themselves as they
were ashamed
of their situations. I felt
really
sad
but
I had fewer opportunities to
help
others while the pandemic hit
hard
because
I
also
lost my job.
I
tried my best to be there to mentally support others with the same situation.
I
only
could
help
with a
small
amount of
money
to
some
people
and
sometimes
I
also
brought groceries for them.
But
I felt this was not
enough
.
In addition
, I could not work as a single person to provide benefits to every
people
who
are in
need
. As the pandemic is
still
ongoing, I feel I should spend several hours a week with other volunteers
who
have the same goal of helping these
people
. I have already built a valid website with the
help
some
broad-minded friends of mine with the goal of a
big
project through which we can reach every corner of my
community
. In fact, we have
started
getting donations from our near and dear ones
who
are trying to encourage us to go ahead and
make
the scheme possible.
To conclude
, I am ready to give my hundred percent to
make
any improvements of my
community
possible by working several hours a day. Even If It is
only
me to work
hard
to reach my goal, I am ready to do it anytime.
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IELTS essay You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

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