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My news story which I saw lately.

My news story which I saw lately. dD6g2
Last week, I heard a piece of sad news for me. It was that Bob Saget died at 65 because of being shocked his peers and fans. Last night, he stood on the comedy stage in front of the audience. At that time, his look was good. He was known as an actor in a drama and a comedian or host of America’s Funniest Home Videos. As you know, he was the main character in the TV show FULL HOUSE which was broadcasted from 1987 to 1995 in the US. In that drama, he played the role of the father of the big family. He raised up three beautiful daughters and extremely famous person, not only in the US but also in Japan because it was serialized in my country. A lot of people couldn’t hide sadness and astonishment. His friends were also shocked and confused because this accident couldn’t be expected by anyone. Cameron Bure who was his oldest daughter in the TV show said, “I couldn’t say anything. Bob was one of the best human beings I have ever known in my life. I loved him so much. I thank him he was my father”. Olesen siblings who were not only his friends but also his nieces commented, “We are extremely saddened that we expected he would lead us by our side. He is our second father in my life. ”. Recently, Full house was remade as a Fuller House for the first time in twenty-first years on Netflix. Tanner's family gathered again. It was just the last time that I had seen him. When I was a young girl, I saw a return of this drama several times with my mother. At that time, I didn’t understand the meaning of the movie. On the contrary, I could realize the importance of family from this. Until I understand the meaning of it, I was a mean and violent girl. I had been always scolded by my grandmother and mother. Every time they were angry with me, I felt that I didn’t need my family and wanted to talk with them forever. In such a case, I found this drama by chance. Then, I watched it again after a long time. I was made to think about my bad actions to my family because it was just the right age to understand the content. When I finished watching it, I felt sorry for them and apologized for my worse attitude and behavior. Even if this happened in fights in the family, they are sure to apologize. I considerably feel people should watch this movie because it has enabled us to take notice that family is necessary for human beings. The family must take care of each other and be unassuming as possible we can. In addition to that, I think the most important thing to build comfortable relationships with my own family is to become an honest person by myself. I believe that this drama will be a textbook that can tell us the importance of family from now on. I also want to be a kind woman with keeping in mind what I learned from Danny Turner.
Last week, I heard a piece of sad news for me. It was that Bob
Saget
died
at 65
because
of
being shocked
his peers and fans. Last night, he stood on the comedy stage in front of the audience. At that
time
, his look was
good
. He
was known
as an actor in a
drama
and a comedian or host of America’s Funniest Home Videos. As you know, he was the main character in the TV
show
FULL
HOUSE
which
was broadcasted
from 1987 to 1995 in the US. In that
drama
, he played the role of the father of the
big
family
. He raised up three
beautiful
daughters and
extremely
famous
person, not
only
in the US
but
also
in Japan
because
it
was serialized
in my country.
A lot of
people
couldn’t
hide
sadness and astonishment. His friends were
also
shocked and confused
because
this accident couldn’t be
expected
by anyone. Cameron
Bure
who was his oldest daughter in the TV
show
said, “I couldn’t say anything. Bob was one of the best human beings I have ever known in my life. I
loved
him
so
much. I thank him he was my father”.
Olesen
siblings who were not
only
his friends
but
also
his nieces commented, “We are
extremely
saddened that we
expected
he would lead us by our side. He is our second father in my life. ”. Recently, Full
house
was remade as a Fuller
House
for the
first
time
in twenty-
first
years on Netflix. Tanner's
family
gathered again. It was
just
the last
time
that I had
seen
him. When I was a young girl, I
saw
a return of this
drama
several
times
with my mother. At that
time
, I didn’t understand the meaning of the movie.
On the contrary
, I could realize the importance of
family
from this. Until I understand the meaning of it, I was a mean and violent girl. I
had been always
scolded by my grandmother and mother. Every
time
they were angry with me, I felt that I didn’t need my
family
and wanted to talk with them forever. In such a case, I found this
drama
by chance. Then, I
watched
it again after a long
time
. I
was made
to
think
about my
bad
actions to my
family
because
it was
just
the right age to understand the content. When I finished watching it, I felt sorry for them and apologized for my worse attitude and behavior. Even if this happened in fights in the
family
, they are sure to apologize. I
considerably
feel
people
should
watch
this movie
because
it has enabled us to take notice that
family
is necessary for human beings. The
family
must
take care of each other and be unassuming as possible we can.
In addition
to that, I
think
the most
important
thing to build comfortable relationships with my
own
family
is to become an honest person by myself. I believe that this
drama
will be a textbook that can
tell
us the importance of
family
from
now
on. I
also
want to be a kind woman with keeping in mind what I learned from Danny Turner.
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