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We have been living in the nuelear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

We have been living in the nuelear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. What are the benefits and risks associated with its use? V03k3
Technology in general can be hypocritic according to its usage. Is it a good thing or not? It is all up to the one who will use this, the human. The first usage of Nucler energy is for the wars. After the discovery of nuclear power and atomic bomb, the profound goverments built their nuclear centrals in a hurry. It was for both a defend mechanism and superiority match. Human, naturally is hungry for power. The one who gets a special superiority is always counted as powerful. I would like to present two examples from the past. The first one is the Disaster of Nagazaki in ww2. Atomic bombs used in a unbearable way to stop the war. It is true that it ended the on-going on war, however its effects on the land and its habitants is inevitably the worst. It is said that the effects on the land and people are still active; the fields are not productive and people are born disabled. Einstein, who is the inventer of atomic bomb, wished to never have been invented such an energy, after seeing its consequences. The first example was the intentionally usage of nucler technology. The second one is the unintentonally usage of the same energy: The Chernobill Disaster. The one of the biggest Nuclear Cental of its time located in Russia, and it is exploded as a result of an accident. The consequences were devastating and the same as Nagazaki. If you travel today, the city of Chernobill, it is a place where nobody lives and ruined. Because of this accident both the region and its locals were omitted. After seeing its outcomes, human is kind of back off from nuclear enery use in this way. We need to accept that the nucler technology is not harmfull all the time. In later years it is become very popular in some certain areas of medicine and pharmology. It showed a good way of treating the undefeatble disases. Both in operations and medicines, its usefullness is proved. In the last 10 years, the earth is changing and facing many problems, because of people's faulthy use of substances which harms the planet. There are many activist and citizens whow are trying to point out these problems with the slogan " There is no planet! ", which is completelly correct. We all know that the nuclear technology is one of the powerful (the most powerful for now) energy in the world. As a source of energy, nuclear technology could be a hope for the future of earth. It can replace with the consumable energy sources in the future. To live a longer and healthy life and for the sake of our earth, the nucler technology is a must. Nuclear Tehcnology is still a huge fear for manny people. But after seeing what happened in the past, I assume that no one will ever trying to kill his/her own habitant, the earth, again. Because each intercention causes a big diasaster. People, nowadays in the mind of saving our world with the help of nuclear energy. The iritary is on the good.
Technology
in general
can be
hypocritic
according to its
usage
. Is it a
good
thing or not? It is all up to the one who will
use
this, the human. The
first
usage
of
Nucler
energy
is for the wars. After the discovery of nuclear power and atomic bomb, the profound
goverments
built their nuclear centrals in a hurry. It was for both
a defend
mechanism and superiority match. Human,
naturally
is hungry for power. The one who
gets
a special superiority is always counted as powerful. I would like to present two examples from the past. The
first
one is the Disaster of
Nagazaki
in ww2. Atomic bombs
used
in a unbearable way
to
stop
the war. It is true that it ended the
on-going
on war,
however
its effects on the land and its habitants is
inevitably
the worst. It
is said
that the effects on the land and
people
are
still
active; the fields are not productive and
people
are born
disabled. Einstein, who is the
inventer
of atomic bomb, wished to never have
been invented
such an
energy
, after seeing its consequences. The
first
example was the
intentionally
usage
of
nucler
technology
. The second one is the
unintentonally
usage
of the same
energy
: The
Chernobill
Disaster.
The
one of the biggest Nuclear
Cental
of its time located in Russia, and it
is exploded
as a result
of an accident.
The
consequences were devastating and the same as
Nagazaki
. If you travel
today
, the city of
Chernobill
, it is a place where nobody
lives
and ruined.
Because of this
accident both the region and its locals
were omitted
. After seeing its outcomes, human is kind of back off from nuclear
enery
use
in this way. We need to accept that the
nucler
technology
is not
harmfull
all the time. In later years it
is become
very
popular in
some
certain areas of medicine and
pharmology
. It
showed
a
good
way of treating the
undefeatble
disases
. Both in operations and medicines, its
usefullness
is proved
. In the last 10 years, the
earth
is changing and facing
many
problems,
because
of
people
's
faulthy
use
of substances which harms the planet. There are
many
activist and citizens
whow are
trying to point out these problems with the slogan
"
There is no planet!
"
, which is
completelly
correct. We all know that the nuclear
technology
is one of the powerful (the most powerful for
now
)
energy
in the world. As a source of
energy
, nuclear
technology
could be a hope for the future of
earth
. It can replace with the consumable
energy
sources in the future. To
live
a longer and healthy life and for the sake of our
earth
, the
nucler
technology
is a
must
. Nuclear
Tehcnology
is
still
a huge fear for
manny
people
.
But
after seeing what happened in the past, I assume that no one will ever trying to kill his/her
own
habitant, the
earth
, again.
Because
each
intercention
causes a
big
diasaster
.
People
, nowadays in the mind of saving our world with the
help
of nuclear
energy
. The
iritary
is on the
good
.
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IELTS essay We have been living in the nuelear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

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