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The chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in the last 3 years, between 3 to 5 years or not within the previous 5 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making relevant comparisons.

The chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in the last 3 years, between 3 to 5 years or not within the previous 5 years. a13rG
The given chart shows the proportion of people who have changed their house in past 5 years. It is evident from the chart that most of the people in every age groups preferred to shift their house in last 3 to 5 years ago. Also some individuals decided to stay back at their own home in last 5 years. In detail, the teenagers and adults made a decision to change their house 3 to 5 years ago. Also, older people thought the changes was necessary. So all these 3 age groups who made their decision in last 3 to 5 years recorded in a range of 40 to 45 percentage. people in age groups 40 to 49 was most interested in the new change in last 3 to 5 years. The percentage has shot up to 55. Interestingly, as compared to the statistics given in the graph individuals who have moved in between 3 to 5 years. Till age group 50 is balanced between 30% to 35%. Infact 42% of older people decided to stay back and was not willing to leave their old house in the last 5 years.
The
given
chart
shows
the proportion of
people
who have
changed
their
house
in past 5 years. It is evident from the chart that most of the
people
in every
age
groups
preferred to shift their
house
in last 3 to 5 years ago.
Also
some
individuals decided to stay back at their
own
home in last 5 years. In detail, the
teenagers
and adults made a decision to
change
their
house
3 to 5 years ago.
Also
, older
people
thought
the
changes
was necessary.
So
all these 3
age
groups
who made their decision in last 3 to 5 years recorded in a range of 40 to 45 percentage.
people
in
age
groups
40 to 49 was most interested in the new
change
in last 3 to 5 years. The percentage has shot up to 55.
Interestingly
, as compared to the statistics
given
in the graph individuals who have
moved
in between 3 to 5 years. Till
age
group
50
is balanced
between 30% to 35%. Infact 42% of older
people
decided to stay back and was not willing to
leave
their
old
house
in the last 5 years.
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