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Development of Tarnagul over 100 years

Development of Tarnagul over 100 years MwYM9
The maps illustrate the changes in the town called Tarnagul near Melbourne from 1900 to 2000. There is noticable amount of change that has happened in and around the town in the span of a century. In this essay, I'll compare the changes occured in first 5 decades and the next 5. In the 1900s the town was more focused on farming of Oranges and Mandarins and also gave importance to diary farming. There were Orange farms on Northen side of the Town and Mandarins farm on South and a Diary farm across the River side, Which were later replaced by Orange farms on south and Diary farms by lemon and Grapefruit farms. We can also see the establishment of Packing Sheds on the West. In the next 5 decades the farming of the oranges was stopped and the land remained unused. While the Leamon and Grapefruit farms were replacved by Wildlife Sanctuary. We see that the town grew constructing Park and a Local Museum opposite to Craft market. A tourist Shop was also setup to attract tourism to the town.
The maps illustrate the
changes
in the
town
called
Tarnagul
near Melbourne from 1900 to 2000. There is
noticable
amount of
change
that has happened in and around the
town
in the span of a century. In this essay, I'll compare the
changes
occured
in
first
5 decades and the
next
5. In the 1900s the
town
was more focused on farming of Oranges and Mandarins and
also
gave importance to diary farming. There were Orange
farms
on
Northen
side of the
Town
and Mandarins
farm
on South and a Diary
farm
across the River side, Which were later replaced by Orange
farms
on south and Diary
farms
by lemon and Grapefruit
farms
. We can
also
see
the establishment of Packing Sheds on the West. In the
next
5 decades the farming of the oranges was
stopped
and the land remained unused. While the
Leamon
and Grapefruit
farms
were
replacved
by Wildlife Sanctuary. We
see
that the
town
grew constructing Park and a Local Museum opposite to Craft market. A tourist Shop was
also
setup to attract tourism to the
town
.
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