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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power. is encouraged is this trend a positive or negative development?

Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power. is encouraged is this trend a positive or negative development? RWMgM
I think that the use of alternative sources of energy (also known in some cases as 'green' energy) is a positive trend of development, and indeed their use should be encouraged further. As the demand for energy worldwide is increasing especially in developing countries, the strains on the existing and already limited resources also increase. To solve this problem, we must consider two issues; how to better use the existing, limited fossil fuel resources and how we can encourage the use of alternative energy sources. It is universally acknowledged that there is a limitation on the use of fossil fuels, especially coal and oil. Some countries are rich in oil deposits like OPEC, whereas China is rich in coal deposits and Russia in natural gas. Others, such as Japan and Germany, are completely dependent on the import of resources. For all countries - resource rich versus resources poor, alternative energy should be encouraged and utilized to reduce the dependence on fossil fuels as well as to keep the global environment in balance and "healthy'. The only way is to turn to other sources to get energy supply. Wind power and solar power are at present feasible alternatives. France is one country which has the advanced technology needed to produce extremely efficient solar panels to store energy from the sun. Both kinds of power can reduce a country's dependence on fossil fuels. Furthermore, they do not pollute the environment and in turn help keep the ecosystem stable. While fossil fuel resources are diminishing, the demand for energy continuous to increase year on year. It is a positive trend to develop other alternative to replace these traditional energy resources. Experiences should be shared and promoted, technology shared and exchanged to limit or even reduce the greenhouse effect. If this switch to alternative energy is encouraged early enough, then we may yet avoid the pending energy crisis.
I
think
that the
use
of
alternative
sources of
energy
(
also
known in
some
cases as 'green'
energy)
is a
positive
trend of development, and
indeed
their
use
should
be encouraged
further
. As the demand for
energy
worldwide is increasing
especially
in developing
countries
, the strains on the existing and already limited resources
also
increase. To solve this problem, we
must
consider two issues; how to better
use
the existing, limited
fossil
fuel resources and how we can encourage the
use
of alternative energy sources. It is
universally
acknowledged that there is a limitation on the
use
of
fossil
fuels,
especially
coal and oil.
Some
countries
are rich in oil deposits like OPEC, whereas China is rich in coal deposits and Russia in natural gas. Others, such as Japan and Germany, are completely dependent on the import of resources. For all
countries
-
resource
rich versus resources poor,
alternative
energy
should
be encouraged
and utilized to
reduce
the dependence on
fossil
fuels
as well
as to
keep
the global environment in balance and
"
healthy'. The
only
way is to turn to other sources to
get
energy
supply. Wind power and solar power are at present feasible
alternatives
. France is one
country
which has the advanced technology needed to produce
extremely
efficient solar panels to store energy from the sun. Both kinds of power can
reduce
a country's dependence on
fossil
fuels.
Furthermore
, they do not pollute the environment and in turn
help
keep
the ecosystem stable. While
fossil
fuel resources are diminishing, the demand for
energy
continuous to increase
year on year
. It is a
positive
trend to develop other
alternative
to replace these traditional
energy
resources. Experiences should
be shared
and promoted, technology shared and exchanged to limit or even
reduce
the greenhouse effect. If this switch to alternative
energy
is encouraged
early
enough
, then we may
yet
avoid the pending energy crisis.
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