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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. GW7B2
It is common to see a great number of employees work even if they are ill as this helps them to accomplish vital tasks. It is however argued that the situation is vulnerable for both those who do this and those around them, and hence they should abstain from work when they are ill. I too agree to the opinion to a greater extent. The first reason behind my argument is because of the fact that productiveness of an employee is directly related to his physiological and psychological wellbeing. To be precise, if an employee is either physically ill or disturbed at his mind, it can actively or passively affect his performance at work. For example, those who are physically ill might have limitations at work, and they naturally have to strain to their extremes to compensate their weakness. This extra effort which they deliver at work is most likely would result in both physical and mental exhaustion, and eventually they would become more sick. The second reason why I am against going to work when an employee is not well is because they are highly potential of making his co-workers unwell. To be clearer, an employee is mostly in touch with his work chain, which includes his superiors, colleagues and subordinates. It is almost clear that there would be higher chances of spreading the disease causing organisms to others, when an employee is infected. Therefore, his presence at work not only is harmful to himself, but also vulnerable to those around him. I need to admit that there are employees who are ill, for example, with cardiac problems and obesity are able to work longer and safer even if they are ill. This happens in job situations which are highly demanding, stressful or with a sense of commitment. To conclude, though there are situations which employees can work even if they are ill, I think in most cases, it is an unwise idea as it proves detrimental for both those who do that and to those who are in touch with them at work.
It is common to
see
a great number of
employees
work
even if they are
ill
as this
helps
them to accomplish vital tasks. It is
however
argued that the situation is vulnerable for both those
who
do this and those around them, and
hence
they should abstain from
work
when they are
ill
.
I too
agree
to the opinion to a greater extent. The
first
reason behind my argument is
because of the fact that
productiveness of an
employee
is
directly
related to his physiological and psychological
wellbeing
. To be precise, if an
employee
is either
physically
ill
or disturbed at his mind, it can
actively
or
passively
affect his performance at
work
.
For example
, those
who
are
physically
ill
might have limitations at
work
, and they
naturally
have to
strain to their extremes to compensate their weakness. This extra effort which they deliver at
work
is most likely would result in both physical and mental exhaustion, and
eventually
they would become more sick. The second reason why I am against going to
work
when an
employee
is not well is
because
they are
highly
potential of making his co-workers unwell. To be clearer, an
employee
is
mostly
in touch with his
work
chain, which includes his superiors, colleagues and subordinates. It is almost
clear
that there would be higher chances of spreading the disease causing organisms to others, when an
employee
is infected
.
Therefore
, his presence at
work
not
only
is harmful to himself,
but
also
vulnerable to those around him. I need to admit that there are
employees
who
are
ill
,
for example
, with cardiac problems and obesity are able to
work
longer and safer even if they are
ill
. This happens in job situations which are
highly
demanding, stressful or with a sense of commitment.
To conclude
, though there are situations which
employees
can
work
even if they are
ill
, I
think
in most cases
, it is an unwise
idea
as it proves detrimental for both those
who
do that and to those
who
are in touch with them at
work
.
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IELTS essay High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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