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Why you wish to pursue the education in management and what is your career plan(s)?

Why you wish to pursue the education in management and what is your career plan(s)? qQ7O5
I want to do an MBA because management and business are where my interest, skills and goals, both short term and long term align. I come from an Engineering background and my specialization is in Mining Engineering. After graduation, I was placed in Gainwell Commosales Pvt Ltd. (GCPL) and for the past 2. 5 yrs, I am working in this organisation. I was inducted as GET and after a year I was designated as Engineer-Mining Sales and assigned to work along with senior colleagues in the mine site/HEMM performance study and the tender participation. To date, I was involved in various other mine sites/HEMM performance studies and have also done the groundwork in various other tender participation processes. Now I feel that I am ready to take up higher responsibility for which a formal education in management will be helpful. There were times when I felt constraints in carrying out the assigned work as I learned only from the experience and the perspective of my seniors. All these years I executed the work by the analytical and technical skills that I developed during graduation, and feel that a formal education in management would help me to carry out those tasks with lesser effort. By pursuing MBA I will also get an appreciation of various other functions like marketing, finance, HR, Operations etc. which will broaden my outlook. Although, I have an inclination towards pursuing MBA in finance. The idea of pursuing an MBA in finance strike me when I started my investment journey. I was fascinated by how few people like Warren Buffet, Rakesh Jhunjunwala and many others predict the upcoming successes of companies. And my pursuit to succeed and excel like them has led me to pursue MBA in finance. As it will provide a structured course helping me gain unique insights, valuable lessons and knowledge about the finance domain. It will also provide exposure to business topics and problems which were not covered during my engineering. It will provide a platform to interact with people from diverse backgrounds and build good connections and relationships. This will in turn help me grow and build myself to achieve my goals. My short term goal is to acquire world-class management education from a top-rated Business School, like IIM Indore and launch my career in the finance industry where I can deploy the skills and techniques learned to create value for the organisation. After working in the industry for at least five years and with all the execution skills that I have learned over the years and all the learnings from the MBA I would like to lead an organisation from the forefront. If possible after at least 10 years in the industry I would like to turn into an entrepreneur and start my own business. An MBA from IIM Indore would be more valuable because of the eminent faculty, diverse peers and inputs from Industry Leaders. Apart from this, immense opportunities for corporate projects and summer internships would provide me with ample chances to apply my knowledge on a practical level.
I want to do an MBA
because
management
and business are where my interest,
skills
and goals, both short term and long term align. I
come
from an Engineering background and my specialization is in Mining Engineering. After graduation, I
was placed
in
Gainwell
Commosales
Pvt Ltd. (
GCPL
) and for the past 2. 5 yrs, I am working in this
organisation
. I
was inducted
as
GET
and after a
year
I
was designated
as Engineer-Mining Sales and assigned to work along with senior colleagues in
the mine site
/
HEMM
performance study and the tender participation. To date, I
was involved
in various
other
mine sites/
HEMM
performance studies and have
also
done the groundwork in various
other
tender participation processes.
Now
I feel that I am ready to take up higher responsibility for which a formal education in
management
will be helpful. There were times when I felt constraints in carrying out the assigned work as I learned
only
from the experience and the perspective of my seniors. All these years I executed the work by the analytical and technical
skills
that I developed during graduation, and feel that a formal education in
management
would
help
me to carry out those tasks with lesser effort. By pursuing MBA I will
also
get
an appreciation of various
other
functions like marketing,
finance
, HR, Operations etc. which will broaden my outlook.
Although
, I have an inclination towards pursuing MBA in
finance
. The
idea
of pursuing an MBA in
finance
strike me when I
started
my investment journey. I
was fascinated
by how few
people
like Warren Buffet, Rakesh
Jhunjunwala
and
many
others predict the upcoming successes of
companies
. And my pursuit to succeed and excel like them has led me to pursue MBA in
finance
. As it will
provide
a structured course helping me gain unique insights, valuable lessons and knowledge about the
finance
domain. It will
also
provide
exposure to business topics and problems which were not covered during my engineering. It will
provide
a platform to interact with
people
from diverse backgrounds and build
good
connections and relationships. This will in turn
help
me grow and build myself to achieve my goals. My short term goal is to acquire world-
class
management
education from a top-rated Business School, like IIM Indore and launch my career in the
finance
industry
where I can deploy the
skills
and techniques learned to create value for the
organisation
. After working in the
industry
for at least five years and with all the execution
skills
that I have learned over the years and all the learnings from the MBA I would like to lead an
organisation
from the forefront. If possible after at least 10 years in the
industry
I would like to turn into an entrepreneur and
start
my
own
business. An MBA from IIM Indore would be more valuable
because
of the eminent faculty, diverse peers and inputs from
Industry
Leaders. Apart from this, immense opportunities for corporate projects and summer internships would
provide
me with ample chances to apply my knowledge on a practical level.
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