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Why you chose uk. Advantages and discuss?

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Introduction I am Kotadiya Hemangkumar Vijaybhai, an Indian resident, currently living with my family in Khambha (Gir) Village in district Junagadh in the state of Gujarat in India. I am putting forward this application for pursuing the course of MSc Finance and investment (with Sandwich) from Heriot-Watt University, UK. Family Background To begin with, there are 4 members in my family including me. My mother Mrs Shilpaben Vijaybhai Dhanani, is a Housewife. My father, Mr. Vijaybhai Dhirubhai Dhanani, is the cornerstone of our family and works hard to win the bread for our family. He is a great mentor for all of us. He is a farmer. My Education Background I completed my 10th standard from Gujarat Secondary and Higher Secondary Education Board in March-2016 with 77. 33% and 12th standard with Commerce stream from Gujarat Secondary and Higher Secondary Education Board in March-2018 with 71. 52%. After my schooling, I completed Bachelor of commerce in June-2021 with CGPA 5. 78 out of 10 from Gujarat University, Ahmedabad. Detailing about my 5th semester project, I had completed Smart residency System project in Software Development Project. Topic of our project is Smart E-residency System. I had taken active part in it and worked on front end designing and working model. I had also worked as a group leader. As English language proficiency is required, so I had appeared for PTE Academic examination on September 14, 2021. I managed to secure an overall score of 57 (Listening: 55, Reading: 56, Speaking: 52, Writing: 67). Why not Study in India? I had many choices in India to pursue my master course from universities such GLS University, Maharaja Sayajirao University, Parul University, and so on, yet as I have finished my Bachelor in India, I wanted to gain some expertise knowledge that provides work integrated learning that will helpful in my professional life. Studying abroad provides quality of education. In this way, I have explored a lot on web, and took suggestions from my friends and relatives; I made my mind to seek after my Master certificate from abroad, as universities in developed nations have wide assortment of courses and worldwide acknowledgment of both the degree and college. By doing this, I won't just have worldwide degree, yet in addition have global introduction, by this I mean to say that I will learn new culture, new way of life, grow better relational abilities, networks and I can learn cooperation on a worldwide stage with students all over the globe. Why I Chose to Study from UK? UK culture is more diverse and lively. It is considered peaceful and a safe country. Being a country of immigrants from all over the World, different perspectives are respected and learning together is encouraged. Considering from academic context, UK is the one that has variety of courses being offered by different colleges and universities. Tuition fees and living expenses are also in favor of UK when compared to other countries with equally good education system. UK has become a landmark for quality education. Many of the UK universities are present in reputed international rankings and a recent educational strategy attracts a greater number of foreign students. Students can pleasantly combine an enriching academic life with diverse and entertaining leisure activities. British universities are better placed when it comes to the best of curriculum and high standards of world class learning environment that it creates. The classroom environment in a university from UK is incredibly friendly; professors here are the guides who help students become independent learners. Some of the reasons why the university system from UK is considered quite successful are the career-focused programmed, curriculum adapted to current events and the needs of the job market and graduate’s high employ ability rate. Humanity indeed is to be appreciated of the British and I will feel proud to be a part of this rapidly increasing community where there is no prejudice for any caste or creed. All these favorable factors motivate me to choose UK for my higher study. Why University of Hertfordshire? The University of Hertfordshire is a modern university. I have a placement option to gain work experience during the programme, and also previous students have worked for organizations such as Bosch, Eisai Pharmaceuticals, and Canada Life. Hertfordshire Business School is very well connected and hosts regular business networking events with large organizations such as BT, Tesco, and Ocado. University graduates work as Business Developers, Senior Managers, and Commercial Operation Managers in organizations including Royal Mail, Network Rail, and BT. University of Hertfordshire is ranked 601 in World University Rankings by Times Higher Education and has an overall score of 4. 3 stars, according to student reviews on Study portals, the best place to find out how students rate their study and living experience at universities from all over the world. The University holds the prestigious Gold Teaching Excellence Framework award which showcases University quality of teaching and commitment to the overall student experience of both our domestic and overseas students. Why MSc International Business (with Sandwich)? I have completed my bachelors in computer application and now I want to study International Business Management because I want to explore the international business market. Since computer applications need a global platform for its trade, International Business Management will help me with a better global exposure. And, also In International Business Management I will learn about the trades that are conducted on an international level and allow me to interact with foreign buyers. This way I can expand my business and trades providing details to the requirements of the consumers applications and therefore I want to study International Business. MSc International Business (with Sandwich) is one of the most popular Masters Course offer by University of Hertfordshire. The two-year MSc International Business (Sandwich) program offers me the opportunity to work on a placement as part of your degree as well as my academic studies. This follows your first year’s study when I will have the opportunity to explore international business in a number of areas, including economics, finance, strategy, marketing, management, human resource, and supply chain management. There will also be the opportunity to conduct an independent major research project in my area of interest. The following are my course modules: The Global Economy International Business Strategy International Supply Chain Management Finance for International Business Marketing Across Cultures International and Comparative HRM Preparation for the Workplace Work Placement Portfolio Professional Work Placement MSc IB Major Placement Business Research Methods Global e-Business Leadership and Management in International Business My Future Career Plan After completion of my Master’s degree from University of Hertfordshire, I will get chance to work on post study work visa, which will help me to gain experience of working in international market which will become my plus point to secure position on higher post in MNCs in India such as Tata PVT LTD, Reliance industry, Larsen &Turbo LTD and also some highly reputed companies. Once I will come back to my home country, I will look forward to work in my field. I plan to return to my home country after gaining International work experience and I will be getting good work opportunities as I will be having an International degree and experience and behind it my utmost reason is always my parents as it will be my responsibility to take care of my parents. Another reason is my work. I believe that after completing this course and gaining some experience, I will be getting good job opportunities and in a span of 4-5years I will be able to recover my cost of education that I will be investing now for my master studies. Also, the thinks which I grasp now on seeing the opportunities in IT field in India after pursuing an abroad degree If you require any further details, please contact me on my Email ID: rutvikdhanani241120@gmail. com Mobile Number: +91-6359432732 Sincerely, Rutvik Vijaybhai Dhanani
Introduction I am
Kotadiya
Hemangkumar
Vijaybhai
, an Indian resident,
currently
living with my
family
in
Khambha
(
Gir
) Village in district
Junagadh
in the state of Gujarat in India. I am putting forward this
application
for pursuing the
course
of
MSc
Finance and investment (with Sandwich) from
Heriot-Watt
University
, UK. Family Background To
begin
with, there are 4 members in my
family
including me. My mother Mrs
Shilpaben
Vijaybhai
Dhanani
, is a Housewife. My father, Mr.
Vijaybhai
Dhirubhai
Dhanani
, is the cornerstone of our
family
and works
hard
to win the bread for our
family
. He is a great mentor for all of us. He is a farmer. My
Education
Background I
completed
my 10th standard from Gujarat
Secondary
and Higher
Secondary
Education
Board in March-2016 with 77. 33% and 12th standard with Commerce stream from Gujarat
Secondary
and Higher
Secondary
Education
Board in March-2018 with 71. 52%. After my schooling, I
completed
Bachelor of commerce in June-2021 with CGPA 5. 78 out of 10 from Gujarat
University
, Ahmedabad. Detailing about my 5th semester
project
, I had
completed
Smart residency System
project
in Software Development
Project
. Topic of our
project
is Smart E-residency System. I had taken active part in it and worked on front
end
designing and working model. I had
also
worked as a group leader. As English language proficiency
is required
,
so
I had appeared for PTE
Academic
examination on September 14, 2021. I managed to secure an
overall
score of 57 (Listening: 55, Reading: 56, Speaking: 52, Writing: 67). Why not
Study
in India? I had
many
choices in India to pursue my
master
course
from
universities
such GLS
University
,
Maharaja
Sayajirao
University
,
Parul
University
, and
so
on,
yet
as I have finished my Bachelor in India, I wanted to gain
some
expertise knowledge that provides
work
integrated learning that will helpful in my professional
life
. Studying abroad provides quality of
education
. In this way, I have explored a lot on web, and took suggestions from my friends and relatives; I made my mind to seek after my
Master
certificate from abroad, as
universities
in developed nations have wide assortment of
courses
and worldwide acknowledgment of both the
degree
and college. By doing this, I won't
just
have worldwide
degree
,
yet
in addition
have
global
introduction, by this I mean to say that I will learn new culture, new way of
life
, grow better relational abilities, networks and I can learn cooperation on a worldwide stage with
students
all over the globe. Why I Chose to
Study
from UK?
UK culture
is more diverse and lively. It
is considered
peaceful and a safe
country
. Being a
country
of immigrants from all over the World,
different
perspectives
are respected
and learning together
is encouraged
. Considering from
academic
context, UK is the one that has variety of
courses
being offered
by
different
colleges and
universities
. Tuition fees and living expenses are
also
in favor of UK when compared to other
countries
with
equally
good
education
system. UK has become a landmark for quality
education
.
Many
of the UK
universities
are present in reputed
international
rankings and a recent educational strategy attracts a greater number of foreign
students
.
Students
can
pleasantly
combine an enriching
academic
life
with diverse and entertaining leisure activities. British
universities
are better placed when it
comes
to the best of curriculum and high standards of world
class
learning environment that it creates. The classroom environment in a
university
from UK is
incredibly
friendly; professors here are the guides who
help
students
become independent learners.
Some of the
reasons why the
university
system from UK
is considered
quite successful are the career-focused programmed, curriculum adapted to
current
events
and the needs of the job market and graduate’s high employ ability rate. Humanity
indeed
is to
be appreciated
of the British and I will feel proud to be a part of this
rapidly
increasing community where there is no prejudice for any caste or creed. All these favorable factors motivate me to choose UK for my higher study. Why
University
of
Hertfordshire
? The
University
of
Hertfordshire
is a modern
university
. I have a
placement
option to gain
work
experience
during the
programme
, and
also
previous
students
have worked for organizations such as Bosch,
Eisai
Pharmaceuticals, and Canada
Life
.
Hertfordshire
Business
School is
very
well connected
and hosts regular
business
networking
events
with large organizations such as BT,
Tesco
, and
Ocado
. University graduates
work
as
Business
Developers, Senior Managers, and Commercial Operation Managers in organizations including Royal Mail, Network Rail, and BT. University of
Hertfordshire
is ranked
601 in World
University
Rankings by Times Higher
Education
and has an
overall
score of 4. 3 stars, according to
student
reviews on
Study
portals, the best place to find out how
students
rate their
study
and living
experience
at
universities
from all over the world. The
University
holds the prestigious Gold Teaching Excellence Framework award which showcases
University
quality of teaching and commitment to the
overall
student
experience
of both our domestic and overseas students. Why
MSc
International
Business
(with Sandwich)? I have
completed
my bachelors in computer
application
and
now
I want to
study
International
Business
Management
because
I want to explore the
international
business
market. Since computer
applications
need a
global
platform for its trade,
International
Business
Management
will
help
me with a better
global
exposure. And,
also
In
International
Business
Management
I will learn about the trades that
are conducted
on an
international
level and
allow
me to interact with foreign buyers. This way I can expand my
business
and trades providing
details
to the requirements of the consumers
applications
and
therefore
I want to
study
International
Business.
MSc
International
Business
(with Sandwich) is one of the most popular
Masters
Course
offer by
University
of
Hertfordshire
. The two-year
MSc
International
Business
(Sandwich) program offers me the
opportunity
to
work
on a
placement
as part of your
degree
as well
as my
academic
studies. This follows your
first
year’s
study
when I will have the
opportunity
to explore
international
business
in a number of areas, including economics, finance, strategy, marketing,
management
, human resource, and supply chain management. There will
also
be the
opportunity
to conduct an independent major research
project
in my area of interest. The following are my
course
modules: The
Global
Economy International
Business
Strategy International Supply Chain
Management
Finance for
International
Business
Marketing Across Cultures International and Comparative HRM Preparation for the Workplace Work
Placement
Portfolio Professional
Work
Placement
MSc
IB Major
Placement
Business
Research Methods
Global
e-Business Leadership and
Management
in
International
Business My Future Career Plan After completion of my
Master’s
degree
from
University
of
Hertfordshire
, I will
get
chance to
work
on post
study
work
visa, which will
help
me to gain
experience
of working in
international
market which will become my plus point to secure position on higher post in
MNCs
in India such as Tata PVT LTD, Reliance industry, Larsen
&Turbo
LTD and
also
some
highly
reputed
companies
. Once I will
come
back to my home
country
, I will look forward to
work
in my field. I plan to return to my home
country
after gaining
International
work
experience
and I will be getting
good
work
opportunities
as I will be having an
International
degree
and
experience
and behind it my utmost reason is always my parents as it will be my responsibility to take care of my parents. Another reason is my
work
. I believe that after completing this
course
and gaining
some
experience
, I will be getting
good
job
opportunities
and in a span of 4-5years I will be able to recover my cost of
education
that I will be investing
now
for my
master
studies
.
Also
, the
thinks
which I grasp
now
on seeing the
opportunities
in IT field in India after pursuing an abroad degree If you require any
further
details
,
please
contact me on my Email ID:
rutvikdhanani241120@gmail
.
com
Mobile Number: +91-6359432732
Sincerely
,
Rutvik
Vijaybhai
Dhanani
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