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What is a quality education? Are you getting a quality education? Why do / don’t you think so? Is it the professor’s responsibility to provide you with a quality education? Is it your own responsibility? Is it someone else’s responsibility? What can you do to improve your education?

What is a quality education? Are you getting a quality education? Why do / don’t you think so? Is it the professor’s responsibility to provide you with a quality education? Is it your own responsibility? Is it someone else’s responsibility? What can you do to improve your education? 5Xn
I think that a quality education is not only studying subjects but also learning communication skills and so on. That is because studying subjects for example to know the way of writing letter or doing a calculation are necessity for the life. However, skills of talking, understanding his ideas or making friends are not necessity for the life but if you consider that I want to improve my life, you have to obtain the skills of that. In addition, a quality education is necessary for adults. That is because they are needed to work with people who has several background and character. Now, I feel I am able to get a quality education because I can go to school and study something not only subject. All children who live in Japan can take good lessons thanks to Japanese systems. However, there are a lot of children who are not able to take an education, much more so on a quality education. I consider that this is so big problem. We must change this situation. If we could change and improve this, it is related to the equality world. Providing you with a quality education is responsibility for government. To provide it is related to the nation’s prosperity. To provide a quality education needs so much money, but this is not waste money. According to take a lot of money, people who live in the nation can get a quality education and they obtain the skills to get a good relationship with others. Besides they will be able to transform present society into much better society to give a quality education because they are able to consider many problems more than people who does not give a quality education. Therefore, I think to provide a quality education is connected with nation’s prosperity so this responsibility for the government. Next, I think I want to consider what you can do to improve your education. I think there are a lot of ways. First, you have to make good situations and thinking. If you live in the develop country, provably you want to study hard without working. Therefore, you have to have an emotion of appreciation toward the situation around you. Second, you could not improve all your situation of education but you can change your mind. If you have mind that you study hard, you will be able to get good score. This will become your confidence. In result, I think this could say that you improve your education. Third, you have to try learning voluntary. Learning is so hard but if you have interest in learning something, you can learn easy and funny. Finally, a quality education is so a difficult topic. However, to think about and understand it is important for you to improve this society and world. I hope everyone who live in the earth obtain a quality and equality education. If they are able to get it, this world will become more good world and the war or conflict will finish. I wish it.
I
think
that a
quality
education
is not
only
studying subjects
but
also
learning
communication
skills
and
so
on.
That is
because
studying subjects
for example
to know the way of writing letter or doing a calculation are necessity for the life.
However
,
skills
of talking, understanding his
ideas
or making friends are not necessity for the life
but
if you
consider
that I want to
improve
my life, you
have to
obtain the
skills
of that.
In addition
, a
quality
education
is necessary for adults.
That is
because
they
are needed
to work with
people
who
has
several background and character.
Now
, I feel I am
able
to
get
a
quality
education
because
I can go to school and study something not
only
subject. All children
who
live
in Japan can take
good
lessons thanks to Japanese systems.
However
, there are
a lot of
children
who
are not
able
to take an
education
, much more
so
on a
quality
education
. I
consider
that this is
so
big
problem. We
must
change
this
situation
. If we could
change
and
improve
this, it
is related
to the equality
world
. Providing you with a
quality
education
is responsibility for
government
. To provide it
is related
to the nation’s prosperity. To provide a
quality
education
needs
so
much money,
but
this is not waste money. According to take
a lot of
money,
people
who
live
in the nation can
get
a
quality
education and
they obtain the
skills
to
get
a
good
relationship with others.
Besides
they will be
able
to transform present society into much better society to give a
quality
education
because
they are
able
to
consider
many
problems more than
people
who
does
not give a
quality
education
.
Therefore
, I
think
to provide a
quality
education
is connected
with nation’s prosperity
so
this responsibility for the
government
.
Next
, I
think
I want to
consider
what you can do to
improve
your
education
. I
think
there are
a lot of
ways.
First
, you
have to
make
good
situations
and thinking. If you
live
in
the develop
country,
provably
you want to study
hard
without working.
Therefore
, you
have to
have an emotion of appreciation toward the
situation
around you. Second, you could not
improve
all your
situation
of
education
but
you can
change
your mind. If you have mind that you study
hard
, you will be
able
to
get
good
score. This will become your confidence. In result, I
think
this could say that you
improve
your
education
. Third, you
have to
try
learning
voluntary.
Learning
is
so
hard
but
if you have interest in
learning
something, you can learn easy and
funny
.
Finally
, a
quality
education
is
so
a difficult topic.
However
, to
think
about and understand it is
important
for you to
improve
this society and
world
. I hope everyone
who
live
in the earth obtain a
quality
and equality
education
. If they are
able
to
get
it, this
world
will become more
good
world
and the war or conflict will finish. I wish it.
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TA
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IELTS essay What is a quality education? Are you getting a quality education? Why do / don’t you think so? Is it the professor’s responsibility to provide you with a quality education? Is it your own responsibility? Is it someone else’s responsibility? What can you do to improve your education?

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