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Mental Health Awareness shouls begini

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In my opinion, I agree to these speakers about the mental health issues, because I have seen many people near me also suffer from mental health. Mental health is a really serious problem that needs to be finish by all people together. They became a very quiet person and don’t want to talk to others about their story. But, from that kind of activity, they start to hurting themselves and cry at night, which makes them fall deep into the mental health. When I hear about the world mental health awareness, I think it will really makes changes to many people, so that they feel better day by day, because now they realized that they have many people around them to tell and share their story of sadness and happiness. In this big society, it is actually very hard to express their feelings, due to judgement of people near them. But now, they can express their feelings more often, in social media or chat and calls with their closest friend and family. In addition, I think from this socialization awareness, more people were also understand about the struggle for some people around them. So that they can find a way together, and also cheered their friend if there was a big problem on their life. Moreover, it makes people to be more open minded and not judging everyone only by their looks, because lik this mental health cannot be seen from the physical. If this awareness gain more and more every year, people will be more happy in their lives.
In my opinion, I
agree
to these speakers about the
mental
health
issues,
because
I have
seen
many
people
near me
also
suffer from
mental
health
.
Mental
health
is a
really
serious problem that needs to be finish by all
people
together. They became a
very
quiet person and don’t want to talk to others about their story.
But
, from that kind of activity, they
start
to hurting themselves and cry at night, which
makes
them fall deep into the
mental
health. When I hear about the world
mental
health
awareness, I
think
it will
really
makes
changes
to
many
people
,
so
that they feel better day by day,
because
now
they realized that they have
many
people
around them to
tell
and share their story of sadness and happiness. In this
big
society, it is actually
very
hard
to express their feelings, due to judgement of
people
near them.
But
now
, they can express their feelings more
often
, in social media or chat and calls with their closest friend and family.
In addition
, I
think
from this socialization awareness, more
people
were
also
understand about the struggle for
some
people
around them.
So
that they can find a way together, and
also
cheered their friend if there was a
big
problem on their life.
Moreover
, it
makes
people
to be more
open minded
and not judging everyone
only
by their looks,
because
lik
this
mental
health
cannot be
seen
from the physical. If this awareness gain more and more every year,
people
will be more happy in their
lives
.
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IELTS essay Mental Health Awareness shouls begini

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