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Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. with this opinion? gqO3l
For me, it is enormously difficult to talk about gender differences in any type of aspect. Generally, society view toward female and male opportunity, we can divide three main groups: first – who think that men are stronger than women and they are only true leaders in important events, the second group has the same idea but in this case central figure is women and we call them feminists and final, the third group where gathering critical individuals who think that – it is not important which gender will be the leader but it is essential how can she or he manages and leads jobs. Some people from these groups think that from history it is clear that male leaders led us into violence and conflict and now it is a turn for females to live in a peaceful world. There are some details where agree and where disagree with this statement. We know from history that most leaders were males and this tendency is similar in the modern world. For example, in Georgian history, we had only one female king, King Tamari. She was an extremely clever, strong, and good leader, and this is clear from the description of this period. I agree above view on one point, that women have various ways of managing and it is essential for development to have both gender in parliament, authority, etc. But for the peace we need to check the experiences and characteristics of candidates and only after this make the decision who will be a good leader. Sometimes victory will be for males and sometimes for females. To sum up, I want to say that a female leader is not a guarantee of peace and it comes from the right choice. In the other words, choosing the right person for the right position and development will be clear.
For me, it is
enormously
difficult to talk about gender differences in any type of aspect.
Generally
, society view toward
female
and male opportunity, we can divide three main
groups
:
first
who
think
that
men
are stronger than
women and
they are
only
true
leaders
in
important
events
, the second
group
has the same
idea
but
in this case
central figure is
women and
we call them feminists and final, the third
group
where gathering critical individuals who
think
that
it is not
important
which gender will be the
leader
but
it is essential how can she or he manages and leads jobs.
Some
people
from these
groups
think
that from history it is
clear
that male
leaders
led us into violence and conflict and
now
it is a turn for
females
to
live
in a peaceful world. There are
some
details
where
agree
and where disagree with this statement. We know from history that most
leaders
were
males
and this tendency is similar in the modern world.
For example
, in Georgian history, we had
only
one
female
king, King
Tamari
. She was an
extremely
clever, strong, and
good
leader
, and this is
clear
from the description of this period. I
agree
above view on one point, that women have various ways of managing and it is essential for development to have both gender in parliament, authority, etc.
But
for the peace we need to
check
the experiences and characteristics of candidates and
only
after this
make
the decision who will be a
good
leader
.
Sometimes
victory will be for
males
and
sometimes
for females. To sum up, I want to say that a
female
leader
is not a guarantee of peace and it
comes
from the right choice. In the other words, choosing the right person for the right position and development will be
clear
.
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