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There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it

There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it KgRmk
Dear Sir or Madam, With due respect, I am a regular customer of your bus services and take a bus to and from my office on weekdays. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to a critical issue that I and a few travelers are facing, and need your intervention to resolve this. At the onset, let me explain the situation, since a couple of weeks your buses are making recurring delay to arrive at the Nanda Station, Mumbai and this is impacting our travel to workplaces badly. Additionally, a few buses are not coming from the past week, and as a result, we have to wait for the next bus to come or hail a taxi for our offices. Furthermore, sometimes buses arriving at Nanda station are full and have no capacity to take more passengers. As a result, either we have to adjust in the congested bus, standing all the way to our work stations or take a cab. This is making a hole in our pocket as taxi drivers charge more when they notice buses are full and can not entertain more passengers. Finally, I would like to request you to kindly take this matter on a serious note and make the buses to run on time. Also, please add a few buses on the route so that it can accommodate the passengers. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Surinder
Dear Sir or Madam, With due respect, I am a regular customer of your bus services and take a bus to and from my office on weekdays. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to a critical issue that I and a few travelers are facing, and need your intervention to resolve this. At the onset,
let
me
explain
the situation, since a couple of weeks your buses are making recurring delay to arrive at the
Nanda
Station, Mumbai and this is impacting our travel to workplaces
badly
.
Additionally
, a few buses are not coming from the past week, and
as a result
, we
have to
wait for the
next
bus to
come
or hail a taxi for our offices.
Furthermore
,
sometimes
buses arriving at
Nanda
station are full and have no capacity to take more passengers.
As a result
, either we
have to
adjust in the congested bus, standing all the way to our work stations or take a cab. This is making a hole in our pocket as taxi drivers charge more when they notice buses are full and can not entertain more passengers.
Finally
, I would like to request you to kindly take this matter on a serious note and
make
the buses to run on time.
Also
,
please
add
a few buses on the route
so
that it can accommodate the passengers. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
,
Surinder
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it

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