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Some people think that hobbies should be linked with technology, while others believe that it is not necessary for hobbies to be involved with technology. Discuss, what is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Some people think that hobbies should be linked with technology, while others believe that it is not necessary for hobbies to be involved with technology. Discuss, what is your opinion? 03OLO
In modern era, technology play a mian role to every individuals life. Therefore, Some masses think that link of appiled science like computer, with our hobbies should be necessary. on the other hand, certain individual feel that it is not comparsary to all involed technology with hobbies. As my point of view people should linked personal skills with auto motion and in upcoming paragraph i will discuss both views my relative example To began with, Some points to relative to the formar views of individuals, they think that because massive can help form the technology to earn some extra money. However, every individual want to earn some money to spend his life easily for that they can used the hobbies with the computers to earn money. For example, In modern techno era Social media like Facebook, instagram, Youtube and so on are become a popullar in every nation, so if massive have good hobbies they can easily generated money form them. Also, Individuals has a chance to become popullar on it. Therefore, Massive should linkied hobbies with the modern technology. To the flip side, Certain individuals feel that is not necessary to involved hobbies in the modern science because the it is not compulsary to every people can get earn money form the technology. To explain it, on the technology era every massive used the moden science products like computer, cellphones and others but there is a large competition in achiving sucess in social media. Moreover, most of individuals want to private there life in modern era and become popullar in social media can be increase the risck of personal life distrubition. For example, In resent time period there are many case come in indian nation that many popullar person suscied because of personal life distrube. by other persons. In conclude, Technology has be an depressing maginitued. For that, it provied positive and negative effect of involed hobbies in technology. Therefore, individuals can involed it in best ways
In
modern
era
,
technology
play a
mian
role to every
individuals
life
.
Therefore
,
Some
masses
think
that link of
appiled
science like computer, with our
hobbies
should be necessary.
on
the other hand, certain
individual
feel that it is not
comparsary
to all
involed
technology
with
hobbies
. As my point of view
people
should
linked
personal
skills
with auto motion and in upcoming paragraph
i
will discuss both views my relative
example
To began with,
Some
points to relative to the
formar
views of
individuals
, they
think
that
because
massive
can
help
form the
technology
to
earn
some
extra
money
.
However
, every
individual
want to
earn
some
money
to spend his
life
easily
for that they can
used
the
hobbies
with the computers to
earn
money
.
For example
, In
modern
techno
era
Social media like Facebook,
instagram
,
Youtube
and
so
on
are become
a
popullar
in every nation,
so
if
massive
have
good
hobbies
they can
easily
generated
money
form them.
Also
,
Individuals
has a chance to become
popullar
on it.
Therefore
,
Massive
should
linkied
hobbies
with the
modern
technology. To the flip side, Certain
individuals
feel
that is
not necessary to involved
hobbies
in the
modern
science
because
the it
is not
compulsary
to every
people
can
get
earn
money
form
the
technology
. To
explain
it, on the
technology
era
every
massive
used
the
moden
science products like computer, cellphones
and others
but
there is a large competition in
achiving
sucess
in social media.
Moreover
, most of
individuals
want to private there
life
in
modern
era
and become
popullar
in social media can be increase the
risck
of personal
life
distrubition
.
For example
, In resent time period there are
many case
come
in
indian
nation that
many
popullar
person
suscied
because
of personal
life
distrube
.
by
other persons. In conclude,
Technology
has
be
an
depressing
maginitued
. For that, it
provied
positive
and
negative
effect of
involed
hobbies
in
technology
.
Therefore
,
individuals
can
involed
it in best ways
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