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The most developing sphere in all countries is tourism.discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for all-sides development.

The most developing sphere in all countries is tourism. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for all-sides development. RPG
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, internayional tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Today the world is more connected than any time before and people from all over the countries can arrive at their destination within 24 hours. However, while this possibility permits to millions of indivuduals to encounter different cultures every year, the phenemenom of the international tourism brings also conflicts between people with different habits and costumers. To begin, tourism creates isolation more than integration. In fact tourists prefer to look at different places, costumers and habits like sitting in front of the television screen, watching documentary, more than sharing time with the indegenous population. Furthermore, tourists do not respect foring habits and cutures often because they do not understand it. For example they throw the litter on the ground or even worse they do not respects their hosts' religion. Local people also often end up disliking foringners. Visitors may mistakenly art contrary to local norms or they may just be plain offensive, as many drunken British holiday makers must seem to the Spanish. Global tourism can lead to hostility from the native people, who may feel their traditional way of life is under thereat. Additionally, the relative welthe of the foring visitors can cause envy and resentment. In conclusion, I would say that I largely agree with the agrument that global tourism creates misunderstanding between people from different cultures and that the differences are often a cause for conflict rather than celebration
Nowadays, international
tourism
is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately,
internayional
tourism
creates tension
rather
than understanding between
people
from
different
cultures.
Today
the world is more connected than any time
before
and
people
from all over the countries can arrive at their destination within 24 hours.
However
, while this possibility permits to millions of
indivuduals
to encounter
different
cultures every year, the
phenemenom
of the international
tourism
brings
also
conflicts between
people
with
different
habits and costumers. To
begin
,
tourism
creates isolation more than integration. In fact tourists prefer to look at
different
places, costumers and habits like sitting in front of the television screen, watching documentary, more than sharing time with the
indegenous
population.
Furthermore
, tourists do not respect
foring
habits and
cutures
often
because
they do not understand it. For
example they
throw the litter on the ground or even worse they do not
respects
their hosts' religion. Local
people
also
often
end
up disliking
foringners
. Visitors may
mistakenly
art contrary to local
norms or
they may
just
be plain offensive, as
many
drunken British holiday makers
must
seem to the Spanish. Global
tourism
can lead to hostility from the native
people
, who may feel their traditional way of life is under thereat.
Additionally
, the relative
welthe
of the
foring
visitors can cause envy and resentment.
In conclusion
, I would say that I
largely
agree
with the
agrument
that global
tourism
creates misunderstanding between
people
from
different
cultures and that the differences are
often
a cause for conflict
rather
than
celebration
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