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The graph below shows the cinema attendance of people on different days of the week in 2003, 2005 and 2007.

The graph below shows the cinema attendance of people on different days of the week in 2003, 2005 and 2007. 16W
The presented graph indicates, people, who went to cinema in different days, to given period between 2003 and 2007. Overall, The highest conjunction in cinema on weekends. There is not so much variation between all years. It is manifest from the graph, Monday the percentage of went for movie, which was reduced followed by 2003 to 2007. it was between 7% and 5%. Additionally, on Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday had almost 10% people attend a cinema, While Exactly 10 % people viewed a movie by 2007. However, The percentage of went to cinema rose from Friday, It had surprised because all years share same percentage for went to cinema. On Saturday, All the years of percentages had reached a peak of the top. It was between a quarter and roughly one-third. Sunday 22% people viewed cinema in 2003, whilst pitfall 1 % for 2005 and 2007.
The presented graph indicates,
people
, who
went
to
cinema
in
different
days, to
given
period between 2003 and 2007.
Overall
, The highest conjunction in
cinema
on weekends. There is not
so
much variation between all years. It is manifest from the graph, Monday the
percentage
of
went
for movie, which was
reduced
followed by 2003 to 2007.
it
was between 7% and 5%.
Additionally
, on Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday had almost 10%
people
attend a
cinema
, While Exactly 10 %
people
viewed a movie by 2007.
However
, The
percentage
of
went
to
cinema
rose from Friday, It had surprised
because
all years share same
percentage
for
went
to
cinema
. On Saturday, All the years of
percentages
had reached a peak of the top. It was between a quarter and roughly one-third. Sunday 22%
people
viewed
cinema
in 2003, whilst pitfall 1 % for 2005 and 2007.
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