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III. Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with?

III. Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Mwd2e
Adulthood is the period in our lives when our characters and personality are formed. The environment where young adults grow up influences their behaviors. The roles of family, school, friends are important factors that affect young adults. I believed very strongly that the family is the most important influence on young adults rather than others. The first reason is that the family is the most important thing in our life, where young adults grow up young adults spend most of their lives with family members. So through this time children get familiar with their parents ideologies, theories about the people, society, events take place around us. They indicate us what is worth doing and what is not, , help us discover our talents and flourish them. For example I was born in a family in the countryside. So we have a big farm. There have fields of corn, vegetables, . . . A lot of cows, chickens, pigs and goats were raised here. I love everything in my family’s farm. The second reason is that family can show you what is wrong or good. Family members are the ones with whom we grow up, they teach us how to see the world we live in. They bring up and support us both intellectually and financially as we develop from infant to young adult, so it logically leads to being greatly dependent on family members. In addition, they know us well enough to give a guidelines on major decision in life. For example when I decided to go to university at that age, my brother told me how good I am at always designing and encouraging me to be a fashion designer. On the other side friends will influence on our immediate life style for example what to have for fun, our clothing styles or help us in the course of life. Inclusion, I think the family is the important influence on young adults rather than friends.
Adulthood is the period in our
lives
when our characters and personality
are formed
. The environment where
young
adults
grow up
influences
their behaviors. The roles of
family
, school, friends are
important
factors that affect
young
adults
. I believed
very
strongly
that the
family
is the most
important
influence
on
young
adults
rather
than others. The
first
reason is that the
family
is the most
important
thing in our life, where
young
adults
grow up
young
adults
spend most of their
lives
with
family
members.
So
through this time children
get
familiar with their parents ideologies, theories about the
people
, society,
events
take place around us. They indicate us what is worth doing and what is not,
,
help
us discover our talents and flourish them. For
example I
was born
in a
family
in the countryside.
So
we have a
big
farm. There have fields of corn, vegetables
, .
.
.
A lot of
cows, chickens, pigs and goats
were raised
here. I
love
everything in my
family’s
farm. The second reason is that
family
can
show
you what is
wrong
or
good
.
Family
members are the ones with whom we grow up, they teach us how to
see
the world we
live
in. They bring up and support us both
intellectually
and
financially
as we develop from infant to
young
adult,
so
it
logically
leads to being
greatly
dependent on
family
members.
In addition
, they know us well
enough
to give
a guidelines
on major decision in life.
For example
when I decided to go to university at that age, my brother
told
me how
good
I am at always designing and encouraging me to be a fashion designer. On the other side friends will
influence
on our immediate life style
for example
what to have for fun, our clothing styles or
help
us in the course of life. Inclusion, I
think
the
family
is the
important
influence
on
young
adults
rather
than friends.
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