III.	Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? 
III. Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Mwd2e
Adulthood is the period in our lives when our characters and personality are formed. The environment where young adults grow up influences their behaviors. The roles of family, school, friends are important factors that affect young adults. I believed very strongly that the family is the most important influence on young adults rather than others.
The first reason is that the family is the most important thing in our life, where young adults grow up young adults spend most of their lives with family members. So through this time children get familiar with their parents ideologies, theories about the people, society, events take place around us. They indicate us what is worth doing and what is not, , help us discover our talents and flourish them. For example I was born in a family in the countryside. So we have a big farm. There have fields of corn, vegetables, . . . A lot of cows, chickens, pigs and goats were raised here. I love everything in my family’s farm.
The second reason is that family can show you what is wrong or good. Family members are the ones with whom we grow up, they teach us how to see the world we live in. They bring up and support us both intellectually and financially as we develop from infant to young adult, so it logically leads to being greatly dependent on family members. In addition, they know us well enough to give a guidelines on major decision in life. For example when I decided to go to university at that age, my brother told me how good I am at always designing and encouraging me to be a fashion designer.
On the other side friends will influence on our immediate life style for example what to have for fun, our clothing styles or help us in the course of life.
Inclusion, I think the family is the important influence on young adults rather than friends. 
Adulthood is the period in our 
lives
 when our characters and personality 
are formed
. The environment where 
young
 adults
 grow up 
influences
 their behaviors. The roles of 
family
, school, friends are 
important
 factors that affect 
young
 adults
. I believed 
very
 strongly
 that the 
family
 is the most 
important
 influence
 on 
young
 adults
 rather
 than others.
The 
first
 reason is that the 
family
 is the most 
important
 thing in our life, where 
young
 adults
 grow up 
young
 adults
 spend most of their 
lives
 with 
family
 members. 
So
 through this time children 
get
 familiar with their parents ideologies, theories about the 
people
, society, 
events
 take place around us. They indicate us what is worth doing and what is not,
 ,
 help
 us discover our talents and flourish them. For 
example I
 was born
 in a 
family
 in the countryside. 
So
 we have a 
big
 farm. There have fields of corn, vegetables
, .
 .
 .
 A lot of
 cows, chickens, pigs and goats 
were raised
 here. I 
love
 everything in my 
family’s
 farm.
The second reason is that 
family
 can 
show
 you what is 
wrong
 or 
good
. 
Family
 members are the ones with whom we grow up, they teach us how to 
see
 the world we 
live
 in. They bring up and support us both 
intellectually
 and 
financially
 as we develop from infant to 
young
 adult, 
so
 it 
logically
 leads to being 
greatly
 dependent on 
family
 members. 
In addition
, they know us well 
enough
 to give 
a guidelines
 on major decision in life. 
For example
 when I decided to go to university at that age, my brother 
told
 me how 
good
 I am at always designing and encouraging me to be a fashion designer.
On the other side friends will 
influence
 on our immediate life style 
for example
 what to have for fun, our clothing styles or 
help
 us in the course of life.
Inclusion, I 
think
 the 
family
 is the 
important
 influence
 on 
young
 adults
 rather
 than friends. 
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