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Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it does not have to rely on imports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it does not have to rely on imports. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Xpgww
Nowadays, with help of globalization, we could have apples from the United States of America for breakfast and tasty wine from Spain in our dining table. Teens and adults could have a choice to choose from wide varieties of clothing and fashion products. Globalization could bring everything to our doorstep, however, I strongly agree that the country's development depends on how the country produces everything possible in-house. Nations should become self-sufficient in producing goods which is required for their citizens. One of the greatest examples for self-sufficient production in India is the production of covid vaccines. India is one of the self-sufficient countries which has produced 50% covid vaccination in the world. India had utilized 70% of vaccine for its own citizens and supplied surplus production to other countries of the world. Even though Small scale industries in many countries produce goods for their local cities and towns, the products do not have global reach. Hence the government should encourage their citizens to produce goods with global standards for exporting surplus quantity. Most countries produce for their own needs by themselves to face any crisis which would happen in the future. India has a large amount of food production for their nation because India has good resource of soil, water and geography with better weather conditions which induce better growth of food crops. Local production will improve employment for the local people and develop country's economy. People get fresh vegetables and fresh fruits from local production where there might be additional preservatives in the imported vegetables and fruits from foreign nations. However, most developing countries do not have enough facility and infrastructure to produce their needs locally, hence they tend to import their basic needs from other countries. Two decades ago, middle east countries like United Arab Emirates and Saudi Arabia imported food products from other countries due to lack of infrastructure and weather condition, however their government invested in technologies and encourage their citizen for farming. These countries are now producing their 70% food needs locally using latest technologies. To conclude, I strongly agree that every country should produce their needs locally and reduce importing from outside countries.
Nowadays, with
help
of globalization, we could have apples from the United States of America for breakfast and tasty wine from Spain in our dining table. Teens and adults could have a choice to choose from wide varieties of clothing and fashion products. Globalization could bring everything to our doorstep,
however
, I
strongly
agree
that the country's development depends on how the
country
produces
everything possible in-
house
. Nations should become self-sufficient in producing
goods
which
is required
for their
citizens
. One of the greatest examples for self-sufficient
production
in India is the
production
of
covid
vaccines. India is one of the self-sufficient
countries
which has produced 50%
covid
vaccination in the world. India had utilized 70% of vaccine for its
own
citizens
and supplied surplus
production
to other
countries
of the world.
Even though
Small
scale industries in
many
countries
produce
goods
for their
local
cities and towns, the products do not have global reach.
Hence
the
government
should encourage their
citizens
to
produce
goods
with global standards for exporting surplus quantity. Most
countries
produce
for their
own
needs
by themselves to face any crisis which would happen in the future. India has a large amount of
food
production
for their nation
because
India has
good
resource of soil, water and geography with better weather conditions which induce better growth of
food
crops.
Local
production
will
improve
employment for the
local
people
and develop country's economy.
People
get
fresh vegetables and fresh fruits from
local
production
where there might be additional preservatives in the imported vegetables and fruits from foreign nations.
However
, most developing
countries
do not have
enough
facility and infrastructure to
produce
their
needs
locally
,
hence
they tend to import their basic
needs
from other
countries
. Two decades ago,
middle east
countries
like United Arab Emirates
and Saudi Arabia imported
food
products from other
countries
due to lack of infrastructure and weather condition,
however
their
government
invested in technologies and encourage their
citizen
for farming. These
countries
are
now
producing their 70%
food
needs
locally
using
latest
technologies.
To conclude
, I
strongly
agree
that every
country
should
produce
their
needs
locally
and
reduce
importing from outside
countries
.
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