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business from 2011 to 2018

business from 2011 to 2018 Mky8k

The chart on the right illustrate the trending of shops established and out of business from 2011 to 2018. Generally, both numbers of the two kinds of shops were going down. The initial number of openings was larger than that of closures. In the middle of 2011, however, the amount of shops closed turned more than that opened. Then in the following 2 years, the number of opening stores kept increasing while the number of closures decreased roughly to the number of openings. In 2014, the number dropped suddenly to less than 1, 000. In the same year, compare with closures, opening numbers turned from 6, 000 or so to 4, 000 and then rose a little in the next year. In 2015, the number of closures became larger than that of openings and during the last two years closures experienced slight decreasing and increasing. - tense; simple past or simple present - use exact numbers or not

The chart on the right illustrate the trending of shops established and out of business from 2011 to 2018.

Generally
, both numbers
 of the two kinds of shops were going down. The initial number
 of openings was larger than that of closures
. In the middle of 2011, however
, the amount of shops closed turned more than that opened. Then in the following 2 years, the number
 of opening stores kept
 increasing while the number
 of closures
 decreased roughly to the number
 of openings. In 2014, the number
 dropped suddenly
 to less than 1, 000. In the same year
, compare with closures
, opening numbers
 turned from 6, 000 or so
 to 4, 000 and then rose a little
 in the next
year
. In 2015, the number
 of closures
 became larger than that of openings and during the last two years closures
 experienced slight decreasing and increasing.

- tense; simple past or simple present
- use
 exact numbers
 or not

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IELTS academic business from 2011 to 2018

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