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The first chart show the population of England and Wales between 1700 to 2000. The second chart give the information about birth and death rate in the same country in the same period

The first chart show the population of England and Wales between 1700 to 2000. The second chart give the information about birth and death rate in the same country in the same period PGLV2
The supplied bar graph repres and the information about a population of England and Wales as well as the birth and death rate are per thousand of individual. On analysing the data it can be seen that, the population of England as well as was 100 millions in 1700. However, population was progressive increased from a small minority to above a quarter from 1800 to 1900. Shown the population double in 2000 exactly a half. Moving further to the remaining data it can be observed that, the birth rate in 1700 was under 10 per 1000 while death rate reach to 5 per 1000. The birth rate sharply increase in 1800 and reach to 25 per 1000. After that the birth and death rate in England and Wales gradually decrease between 1900 to 2000. Overall, it is lusted that the population was sharply uplift in 4 years. Moreover the birth rate was higher than the death rate.
The supplied bar graph repres and the information about a
population
of England and Wales
as well
as the
birth
and death
rate
are per thousand of individual. On analysing the data it can be
seen
that, the
population
of England
as well
as was 100 millions in 1700.
However
,
population
was progressive increased from a
small
minority to above a quarter from 1800 to 1900. Shown the
population
double in 2000 exactly a half. Moving
further
to the remaining data it can
be observed
that, the
birth
rate
in 1700 was under 10 per 1000 while death
rate
reach to 5 per 1000. The
birth
rate
sharply
increase in 1800 and reach to 25 per 1000. After that the
birth
and death
rate
in England and Wales
gradually
decrease between 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, it
is lusted
that the
population
was
sharply
uplift in 4 years.
Moreover
the
birth
rate
was higher than the death
rate
.
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