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Advertising Is a Major Industry

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Advertising supports the core principles that shaped our nation: free speech, competition, and democracy. Since colonial times, advertising has provided a source of vital information about our open, market-based economy. Two Nobel Laureates in economics, Dr. Kenneth Arrow and the late Dr. George Stigler, praise the value of advertising: “Advertising is a powerful tool of competition. It provides valuable information about products and services in an efficient and cost-effective manner. In this way, advertising helps the economy to function smoothly—it keeps prices low and facilitates the entry of new products and new firms into the market. ”Kenneth Arrow and George Stigler, paper for the Advertising Tax Coalition, quoted in House Subcommittee on Select Revenue Measures of the Committee on Ways and Means, Miscellaneous revenue issues: hearings before the Subcommittee on Select Revenue Measures of the Committee on Ways and Means, 103rd Cong. , 1st sess. , 1994, http: //www. archive. org/stream/miscellaneousrev02unit/miscellaneous rev02unit_djvu. txt (accessed February 4, 2009). U. S. advertising accounts for about 2. 5 percent of the country’s $14 trillion gross national product. American consumers rely heavily on advertising to influence how they spend some $9 trillion annually on various goods and services. A 1999 study by one of the country’s premier econometric modeling firms, the WEFA Group, and Nobel Laureate in economics Dr. Lawrence R. Klein further underscored this economic impact. The study found that advertising played a key role in generating 18. 2 million of the 126. 7 million jobs in the United States in that year. The report further concluded that advertising expenditures contributed between 12 and 16 percent of private sector revenues throughout the country, in rural as well as urban areas. A later study, conducted in 2005 by the financial analysis firm Global Insight, demonstrated that advertising helps to generate more than $5. 2 trillion in sales and economic activity throughout the U. S. economy annually. That represents 20 percent of the nation’s $25. 5 trillion in total economic activity. This economic stimulus provided support throughout the economy for more than twenty-one million jobs, or 15. 2 percent of the U. S. workforce. The purpose of the study was to quantify the economic and employment impacts of advertising. The study removed intervening effects (like consumers simply buying a product to replace an old one or a depleted one) to measure the role of advertising itself. Advertising plays a strong role in the economy: It provides useful information to consumers that tells them about product and service choices, as well as comparing features, benefits, and prices. With more complete information, consumers and businesses often choose to purchase additional products and services. It “causes an economic chain reaction that (a) generates a net gain in direct sales and jobs due to the promotion of the industries’ products and services, (b) generates indirect sales and jobs among the first level suppliers to the industries that incur the advertising expenditures, and (c) generates indirect sales and jobs among all other levels of economic activity as the sales ripple throughout the economy. ”Global Insight, “The Comprehensive Economic Impact of Advertising Expenditures in the United States, ” http: //www. naa. org/Resources/Articles/Public-Policy-The- Comprehensive-Economic-Impact-of-Advertising-Expenditures-in-the-United-States/Public-Policy-The-Comprehensive-Economic-Impact-of-Advertising-Expenditures- in-the-United-States. aspx (accessed November 1, 2007). Advertising also plays a significant role in the business cycle. As the broader economy shifts between periods of growth and recession, advertising shifts its focus. During downturns, like the one we’re in now, ads may focus on the price of a product or service. If one company curtails advertising in order to cut costs during a downturn, another company might boost ad spending to grab customers and grow its market share. Advertising helps stimulate economic growth. In a country in which consumer spending determines the future of the economy, advertising motivates people to spend more. By encouraging more buying, advertising promotes both job growth and productivity growth both to help meet increased demand and to enable each consumer to have more to spend. Economic Rationale to Create Advertising Companies spend money on advertising because it increases sales of existing products, helps grow adoption of new products, builds brand loyalty, and takes sales away from competitors. Although the exact return on investment (ROI) varies tremendously across industries, companies, campaigns, and media channels, studies have found that a dollar spent on advertising returns $3–20 in additional sales. To compete and grow in today’s diverse, ever-changing marketplace, businesses must reach their target customers efficiently, quickly alerting them to new product introductions, improved product designs, and competitive price points. Advertising is by far the most efficient way to communicate such information. Economic Rationale to Accept Advertising The economics of advertising extends to the media channels that depend on advertising revenues. Many forms of advertising support the creation of content and make that content available at a much lower price (or free). For example, roughly 75 percent of the cost of a newspaper is supported by advertising. If newspapers contained no advertising, they would cost four times as much to buy on the newsstand. Broadcast radio and TV rely exclusively on ads—people get news, music, and entertainment for free while advertisers get an audience. Forms of media that the public takes for granted would be extremely expensive to the reader or viewer or would simply be out of business without the revenues advertising produces. The demand created by advertising helps the economy to expand. S. William Pattis, Careers in Advertising (Blacklick, OH: McGraw-Hill Professional, 2004), 9. Advertising supports the arts. Advertisers need music that calls attention to the brand. Musical artists visit ad agencies to meet with directors of music and pitch songs to them that they can use in ads. They come to agencies because they know that companies spend tens of millions of dollars on media buys. “The major record labels don’t have that kind of money, ” says Josh Rabinowitz, senior vice president and director of music at Grey Worldwide. What’s more, “TV ads give you the kind of heavy rotation you can’t get on MTV anymore. In the very near future, some of the best bands will produce jingles. ”Cora Daniels, “Adman Jangles for a Hit Jingle, ” Fast Company, July 2007, http: //www. fastcompany. com/magazine/117/fast-talk-rabinowitz. html (accessed February 4, 2009). Video Highlight (click to see video) Yael Naim became an overnight sensation when her song “New Soul” was used in this MacBook Air commercial. For example, Jonny Dubowsky, lead singer and guitarist for Jonny Lives! uses corporate sponsorships to get exposure for his indie band. The band debuted a single on an EA video game and launched a video at nine hundred American Eagle stores. Cora Daniels, “Band Plays a Brand-New Game, ” Fast Company, July 2007, http: //www. fastcompany. com/magazine/117/fast-talk-dubowsky. html (accessed February 4, 2009). For those with (slightly) different musical tastes, it’s worth noting that “rock star” Barry Manilow wrote advertising jingles before he crossed over to recording songs. His credits include the Band-Aid song (“I am stuck on Band-Aid, cuz Band-Aid’s stuck on me”) and the theme for State Farm insurance (“And like a good neighbor, State Farm is there”). AllExperts, “Manilow, Barry, ” http: //en. allexperts. com/q/Manilow-Barry-511/Manilow-TV-jingles. htm (accessed July 17, 2008).
Advertising
supports
the core principles that shaped our nation: free speech, competition, and democracy. Since colonial times, advertising has provided a source of vital
information
about our open, market-based
economy
. Two Nobel Laureates in
economics
, Dr. Kenneth Arrow and the late Dr. George
Stigler
, praise the value of advertising: “Advertising is a powerful tool of competition. It provides valuable
information
about
products
and
services
in an efficient and cost-effective manner. In this
way
, advertising
helps
the
economy
to function
smoothly
—it
keeps
prices
low and facilitates the entry of
new
products
and
new
firms into the market.
”Kenneth
Arrow and George
Stigler
, paper for the Advertising Tax Coalition, quoted in
House
Subcommittee on Select
Revenue
Measures of the Committee on
Ways
and Means, Miscellaneous
revenue
issues: hearings
before
the Subcommittee on Select
Revenue
Measures of the Committee on
Ways
and Means, 103rd Cong.
,
1st
sess
.
,
1994,
http
: //
www
.
archive
.
org
/stream/miscellaneousrev02unit/miscellaneous rev02unit_
djvu
.
txt
(accessed
February 4, 2009). U. S. advertising accounts for about 2. 5
percent
of the
country’s
$14 trillion gross national
product
. American
consumers
rely
heavily
on advertising to influence how they
spend
some
$9 trillion
annually
on various
goods
and
services
. A 1999
study
by one of the
country’s
premier econometric modeling firms, the
WEFA
Group, and Nobel Laureate in
economics
Dr. Lawrence R. Klein
further
underscored this
economic
impact. The
study
found that advertising played a key
role
in generating 18. 2
million
of the 126. 7
million
jobs
in the United
States
in that year. The report
further
concluded that advertising expenditures contributed between 12 and 16
percent
of private sector
revenues
throughout the
country
, in rural
as well
as urban areas. A later
study
, conducted in 2005 by the financial analysis firm Global Insight, demonstrated that advertising
helps
to
generate
more than $5. 2 trillion in
sales
and
economic
activity throughout the U. S.
economy
annually
. That represents 20
percent
of the nation’s $25. 5 trillion in total
economic
activity. This
economic
stimulus provided
support
throughout the
economy
for more than twenty-one
million
jobs
, or 15. 2
percent
of the U. S. workforce. The purpose of the
study
was to quantify the
economic
and employment impacts of advertising. The
study
removed intervening effects (like
consumers
simply
buying a
product
to replace an
old
one or a depleted one) to measure the
role
of advertising itself. Advertising plays a strong
role
in the economy: It provides useful
information
to
consumers
that
tells
them about
product
and
service
choices,
as well
as comparing features, benefits, and
prices
. With more complete
information
,
consumers
and
businesses
often
choose to
purchase
additional
products
and services. It “causes an
economic
chain reaction that (a)
generates
a net gain in direct
sales
and
jobs
due to the promotion of the industries’
products
and
services
, (b)
generates
indirect
sales
and
jobs
among the
first
level suppliers to the industries that incur the advertising expenditures, and (c)
generates
indirect
sales
and
jobs
among all other levels of
economic
activity as the
sales
ripple throughout the
economy
.
”Global
Insight, “The Comprehensive
Economic
Impact of Advertising Expenditures in the United
States
,
http
: //
www
.
naa
.
org
/Resources/Articles/Public-Policy-The- Comprehensive-Economic-Impact-of-Advertising-Expenditures-in-the-United-States/Public-Policy-The-Comprehensive-Economic-Impact-of-Advertising-Expenditures- in-the-United-States.
aspx
(accessed
November 1, 2007). Advertising
also
plays a significant
role
in the
business
cycle. As the broader
economy
shifts between periods of
growth
and recession, advertising shifts its focus. During downturns, like the one we’re in
now
, ads may focus on the
price
of a
product
or
service
. If one
company
curtails advertising in order to
cut
costs during a downturn, another
company
might boost ad spending to grab customers and grow its market share. Advertising
helps
stimulate
economic
growth
. In a
country
in which
consumer
spending determines the future of the
economy
, advertising motivates
people
to
spend
more. By encouraging more buying, advertising promotes both
job
growth
and productivity
growth
both to
help
meet
increased demand and to enable each
consumer
to have more to spend. Economic Rationale to Create Advertising
Companies
spend
money on advertising
because
it increases
sales
of existing
products
,
helps
grow adoption of
new
products
, builds brand loyalty, and takes
sales
away from competitors. Although the exact return on investment (ROI) varies
tremendously
across industries,
companies
, campaigns, and
media
channels,
studies
have found that a dollar spent on advertising returns $3–20 in additional
sales
. To compete and grow in
today
’s diverse, ever-changing marketplace,
businesses
must
reach their target customers
efficiently
,
quickly
alerting them to
new
product
introductions,
improved
product
designs, and competitive
price
points. Advertising is by far the most efficient
way
to communicate such information. Economic Rationale to Accept Advertising The
economics
of advertising extends to the
media
channels that depend on advertising
revenues
.
Many
forms of advertising
support
the creation of content and
make
that content available at a much lower
price
(or free).
For example
, roughly 75
percent
of the cost of a newspaper
is supported
by advertising. If newspapers contained no advertising, they would cost four times as much to
buy
on the newsstand. Broadcast radio and TV rely exclusively on ads—
people
get
news
,
music
, and entertainment for free while advertisers
get
an audience. Forms of
media
that the public takes for granted would be
extremely
expensive to the reader or viewer or would
simply
be out of
business
without the
revenues
advertising produces. The demand created by advertising
helps
the
economy
to expand. S. William
Pattis
, Careers in Advertising (
Blacklick
, OH: McGraw-Hill Professional, 2004), 9. Advertising
supports
the arts. Advertisers need
music
that calls attention to the brand. Musical artists visit ad agencies to
meet
with directors of
music
and pitch songs to them that they can
use
in ads. They
come
to agencies
because
they know that
companies
spend
tens of
millions
of dollars on
media
buys
. “The major record labels don’t have that kind of money,
says Josh
Rabinowitz
, senior vice president and director of
music
at Grey Worldwide. What’s more, “TV ads give you the kind of heavy rotation you can’t
get
on MTV anymore. In the
very
near future,
some
of the best
bands
will produce jingles.
”Cora
Daniels, “Adman Jangles for a Hit Jingle,
Fast
Company
, July 2007,
http
: //
www
.
fastcompany
.
com
/magazine/117/
fast-talk-rabinowitz
.
html
(accessed
February 4, 2009). Video Highlight (click to
see
video) Yael
Naim
became an overnight sensation when her song
“New
Soul” was
used
in this MacBook Air commercial.
For example
, Jonny
Dubowsky
, lead singer and guitarist for Jonny
Lives
!
uses
corporate sponsorships to
get
exposure for his indie
band
. The
band
debuted a single on an EA video game and launched a video at nine hundred American Eagle stores. Cora Daniels,
“Band
Plays a Brand-New Game,
Fast
Company
, July 2007,
http
: //
www
.
fastcompany
.
com
/magazine/117/
fast-talk-dubowsky
.
html
(accessed
February 4, 2009). For those with (
slightly
)
different
musical tastes, it’s worth noting that “rock star” Barry
Manilow
wrote advertising jingles
before
he crossed over to recording songs. His credits include the Band-Aid song (“I
am stuck
on Band-Aid,
cuz
Band-Aid’s stuck on me”) and the theme for
State
Farm insurance (“And like a
good
neighbor,
State
Farm is there”).
AllExperts
, “
Manilow
, Barry,
http
: //en.
allexperts
.
com
/q/Manilow-Barry-511/
Manilow-TV-jingles
.
htm
(accessed
July 17, 2008).
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