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compare state and private education.

In many countries there are two types of schools: state and private. There is a big difference between state and private schools, and private schools are better. The first thing that l can emphasize about these two types of schools is that in state schools teachers' salary is paid by the government and in private schools by pupils' parents. In private schools salary is more than private schools and this condition couses to teaching quality. In addition, buldings of private schools are always repaired and modern, furnished well and has good opportunities. As well as budget of the republic doesn't allow to repair all schools and provide them with modern furnishings every year, buildings of state schools are in worse condition than private schools. Some more about aducation: the best point of private schools is in private schools untill the afternoon puoils learn subjects and after the afternoon they do their homeworks, they have breakfast, lunch and dinner at school. If they stay at school for night, they can have a rest in their free time and sleep at school's bedroom and go home at the weekends. In state school they can buy lunch if they want, should stay at school after the lessons for additional courses and have to do more exercises at home. In private schools pupils can choose their future profession and learn morethat subjects which they need. Chances to have a good job and become a specialist of state job is more in private schools. Of course, option to study in state or private schools is based on consumeright sosighting problems. I once again reaffirm my position and say, even private schools are expensive for some peoples, their educational sytem is much better than educational system of state schools.
In
many
countries there are two types of schools: state and private. There is a
big
difference between state and private schools, and private schools are better. The
first
thing that l can emphasize about these two types of schools is that in state schools teachers' salary
is paid
by the
government
and in private schools by pupils' parents. In private schools salary is more than private schools and this condition
couses
to teaching quality.
In addition
,
buldings
of private schools are always repaired and modern, furnished well and has
good
opportunities.
As well
as budget of the republic doesn't
allow
to repair all schools and provide them with modern furnishings every year, buildings of state schools are in worse condition than private schools.
Some
more about
aducation
: the best point of private schools is in private schools
untill
the afternoon
puoils
learn subjects and after the afternoon they do their
homeworks
, they have breakfast, lunch and dinner at school. If they stay at school for night, they can have a rest in their free time and sleep at school's bedroom and go home at the weekends. In state school they can
buy
lunch if they want, should stay at school after the lessons for additional courses and
have to
do more exercises at home. In private schools pupils can choose their future profession and learn
morethat
subjects which they need. Chances to have a
good
job and become a specialist of state job is more in private schools.
Of course
, option to study in state or private schools
is based
on
consumeright
sosighting
problems. I once again reaffirm my position and say, even private schools are expensive for
some
peoples, their educational
sytem
is much better than educational system of state schools.

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