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The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices.

The bar chart illustrates the comparation and also the cost of different kinds of electricity household devices per year.
Overall There are 16 types of devices. Therefore there are widely ranges and differences for each types. Spa which operate with pump and heater cost the greatest payment meanwhile electricity blanket is the cheapest.
Refrigerator and pool plump spend the money 83-125 but pool plump is more expansive with almost 125 per year and consume the electricity nearly 1500 kwh/year. However Spa is markedly pricey for more than 166 and this use above 2000 kwh, which is significant margin when compare with other devices.
The cost rate between 0-42 is electricity blanket, microwave oven, television which have a couple different numbers. Well plump is included in this rate with particularly highest cost for almost 42
The bar chart illustrates the
comparation
and
also
the cost of
different
kinds of electricity household devices per year.

Overall
There are 16 types of devices.
Therefore
there are
widely
ranges and differences for each
types
. Spa which operate with pump and heater cost the greatest payment meanwhile electricity blanket is the cheapest.

Refrigerator and pool plump spend the money 83-125
but
pool plump is more expansive with almost 125 per year and consume the electricity
nearly
1500
kwh
/year.
However
Spa is
markedly
pricey for more than 166 and this
use
above 2000
kwh
, which is significant margin when compare with other devices.

The cost rate between 0-42 is electricity blanket, microwave oven, television which have a couple
different
numbers. Well plump
is included
in this rate with
particularly
highest
cost for almost 42

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