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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. Oxm1N
Nowadays in Thailand, we have an increase percentage of youth crime than before. Mostly, happened from socialize and parenting environment. For example, a fight that include drugs and alcoholic substances. Which hurts some of innocent around that place. the crimes that happenned come from a local news. Each of youngster's crime mostly be a popular one so people takes attention to it. It's happenning continuously, especially a big fight that hurts other people. The reason of a crime can be cause not only by parenting but also some of friends. On the other hand due to weak laws, it can often happenning again and again. So some of youth criminal can do a crime over and over. From my point of view, a punishment should be similar to an adult but it can be decrease from case by case like if a criminal in age of 10-15 years doing a crime the punishment should be a fine and a life in prison 2-3 years. So there will be no one done the crime again. Lastly, in some of other countries they have a strong law that helps citizens not scared of a criminal cause of a strong law. Instead of Thai's laws are so weak that can't be judge a criminal cause it too weak. However, not only youth but also adult should not done a crime that can be harm an innocent.
Nowadays in Thailand, we have an increase percentage of youth
crime
than
before
.
Mostly
, happened from socialize and parenting environment.
For example
, a fight that include drugs and alcoholic substances.
Which
hurts
some of innocent
around that place.
the
crimes
that
happenned
come
from
a local news
. Each of youngster's crime
mostly
be a popular one
so
people
takes
attention to it. It's
happenning
continuously
,
especially
a
big
fight that hurts other
people
. The reason of a
crime
can
be cause
not
only
by parenting
but
also
some of friends
.
On the other hand
due to weak
laws
, it can
often
happenning
again and again.
So
some of youth
criminal
can do a
crime
over and over. From my point of view, a punishment should be similar to an adult
but
it can be decrease from case by case like if a
criminal
in age of 10-15 years doing a
crime
the punishment should be a fine and a life in prison 2-3 years.
So
there will be no one done the
crime
again.
Lastly
, in
some
of other countries they have a strong
law
that
helps
citizens not scared of a
criminal
cause of a strong
law
.
Instead
of Thai's
laws
are
so
weak that can't be
judge
a
criminal
cause it too weak.
However
, not
only
youth
but
also
adult should not done a
crime
that can be harm an innocent.
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