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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved.

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved. xQ8l9
Dear Editor, I am a freshman student from Electronics Technology department of Bicol University, East campus. I usually spent my lunch time at the University cafeteria because it is more convenient for me and there is a variety of different foods that they offer everyday. I also like how the canteen staff assist and accommodate each students. But unfortunately, what i found irritating was sometimes the food that they serve was not new, they just pre-heat it. And also most of the time their dishes was tasteless, over-cooked or not cooked properly even though it is given that they have a affordable price for their menu. In addition to this, the canteen is so hot, there is a shortage in functioning fans. I suggest that they should improve on how they cook their dishes very well to give a satisfaction for their customers. They have to ensure that they have enough time to cook and to avoid problems. Moreover, the canteen management should have to put more ventilation to make the customers more comfortable. I hope these concerns might be addressed. Yours sincerely, ECTORRESs Edna Carmelle Torres Student
Dear Editor, I am a freshman student from Electronics Technology department of
Bicol
University, East campus. I
usually
spent my
lunch time
at the University cafeteria
because
it is more convenient for me and there is a variety of
different
foods that they offer
everyday
.
I
also
like how the canteen staff assist and accommodate each
students
.
But
unfortunately, what
i
found irritating was
sometimes
the food that they serve was not new, they
just
pre-heat it. And
also
most of the time their dishes was tasteless, over-cooked or not cooked
properly
even though
it is
given
that they have
a
affordable price for their menu.
In addition
to this, the canteen is
so
hot, there is a shortage in functioning fans. I suggest that they should
improve
on how they cook their dishes
very
well to give a satisfaction for their customers. They
have to
ensure that they have
enough
time to cook and to avoid problems.
Moreover
, the canteen management should
have to
put more ventilation to
make
the customers more comfortable. I hope these concerns might
be addressed
. Yours
sincerely
,
ECTORRESs
Edna
Carmelle
Torres Student
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IELTS letter You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved.

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