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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved.

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved. xQ8l9

Dear Editor, I am a freshman student from Electronics Technology department of Bicol University, East campus. I usually spent my lunch time at the University cafeteria because it is more convenient for me and there is a variety of different foods that they offer everyday. I also like how the canteen staff assist and accommodate each students. But unfortunately, what i found irritating was sometimes the food that they serve was not new, they just pre-heat it. And also most of the time their dishes was tasteless, over-cooked or not cooked properly even though it is given that they have a affordable price for their menu. In addition to this, the canteen is so hot, there is a shortage in functioning fans. I suggest that they should improve on how they cook their dishes very well to give a satisfaction for their customers. They have to ensure that they have enough time to cook and to avoid problems. Moreover, the canteen management should have to put more ventilation to make the customers more comfortable. I hope these concerns might be addressed. Yours sincerely, ECTORRESs Edna Carmelle Torres Student

Dear Editor,

I am a freshman student from Electronics Technology department of Bicol University, East
campus. I usually
 spent my lunch time at the University cafeteria because
 it is more convenient for me and there is a variety of different
 foods that they offer everyday. I also
 like how the canteen staff assist and accommodate each students.

But
 unfortunately, what i found irritating was sometimes
 the food that they serve was not new, they just
 pre-heat it. And also
 most of the time their dishes was tasteless, over-cooked or not cooked properly
even though
 it is given
 that they have a affordable price for their menu. In addition
 to this, the canteen is so
 hot, there is a shortage in functioning fans.

I suggest that they should improve
 on how they cook their dishes very
 well to give a satisfaction for their customers. They have to
 ensure that they have enough
 time to cook and to avoid problems. Moreover
, the canteen management should have to
 put more ventilation to make
 the customers more comfortable.

I hope these concerns might be addressed
.

Yours sincerely
,

ECTORRESs
Edna Carmelle Torres
Student

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IELTS letter You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter -explain what you like about the cafeteria -say what is wrong with it -suggest how it could be improved.

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