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Some people say that now we can see films on our phone.there is no need to go to cinema.others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that now we can see films on our phone. there is no need to go to cinema. others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. G2o6m

Owing to advancement in technology, people prefer to Entertain themselfs with different kinds of gadgets. although certain masses prefers to Watch movies online, yet other believes that to enjoyed fully it can be seen in the cinema. Howrever, I support with the latter view which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. along with my opinion. On the one hand, watching films and movies for the entertainment and relaxation of mind on mobile phones saves the time as well as money. In addition, Flocks donot have plenty of time to watch movies. For example, some workers relaxed themselfs by seeing movies while Coming back from job. As a result, they gain Energy and also saves their precious time. On the other hand, cinema. plays a significant role to provide full clearity to the people. Certain families goes to cinemas during their weekends by visiting together, there bond also gets stronger. On mobile phones it is not possible for all members to watch jointly as it sometimes shows bad quality of picture and also sound. But in cinema, masses can watch 3 - dimensional movies. People's enjoys the first shows of their role model as it came late on internet. In conclusion, due to best quality and facilities, cinema provide a fully enjoyed movies as comparing to mobile phones movies.

Owing to advancement in technology, people
 prefer to Entertain themselfs with different
 kinds of gadgets. although certain masses prefers to Watch
movies
 online, yet
 other believes that to enjoyed fully
 it can be seen
 in the cinema
. Howrever, I support with the latter view which will be discussed
 in upcoming paragraphs. along with my opinion.

On the one hand, watching films and movies
 for the entertainment and relaxation of mind on mobile phones saves the time as well
 as money. In addition
, Flocks donot have plenty
 of time to watch
movies
. For example
, some
 workers relaxed themselfs by seeing movies
 while Coming back from job. As a result
, they gain Energy and also
 saves their precious time.

On the other hand
, cinema
. plays a significant role to provide full clearity to the people
. Certain families goes to cinemas
 during their weekends by visiting together, there bond also
gets
 stronger. On mobile phones it is not possible for all members to watch
jointly
 as it sometimes
shows
bad
 quality of picture and also
 sound. But
 in cinema
, masses can watch
 3 - dimensional movies
. People
's enjoys the first
shows
 of their role model as it came late on internet. In conclusion
, due to best quality and facilities, cinema
 provide a fully
 enjoyed movies
 as comparing to mobile phones movies
. 

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IELTS essay Some people say that now we can see films on our phone. there is no need to go to cinema. others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.

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