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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult sure h as Sahara or the antartic what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such place give reason for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult sure h as Sahara or the antartic what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such place give reason for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience. kkEdW
Today many tourist are visiting places where difficult conditions such as Sahara desert the antartic so from my view there are disadvantages are more than the advantages. I am giving some relevant point with example. On one hand, while moving to coldest continent such as antartica it makes more health issues. And a number of people not adapt cold weather conditions. So if they breath the cold air it create lung infection. Also while trucking in high cold mountain the oxygen rate is low than the normal level. It also affect our body condition. On addition, natural disasters will occurred there at any time. And the road was hide due to high snowfall. So if we Stuck there nobodybwill identify us. without knowing surveying techniques we cannot sustain their though it create numerous problems. Moreover, a number if places do not have enough food facilities. Also with out enough food facilities we cannot live thair. fir example, while going to coldest continent or deseart food facilities are limited opportunity to make food also. Food is essential for our body. We out this we cannot survivethere. So this trip has plathora if risk factors there. On the other hand treucki g gives advanture for teenagers and teenage people are wish to make her life advanture. Also they never mind about the risk factor so now a days touristers are higher in this places in addition research people and experties wish to visit the place for the research purposes and it helps to analyse the climate changes also helps to research old particles for instant currently research reveals the news that many ice rock has melt and the sea levels has increased. and new old locks are appears out side there unknown fungas and sediments in the rock for many years. Now we can see it. They make high pricautions with high proof jackets enough food to make research so with out pricautions it is hard to surview. In conclusions by makeing high pricautions we can visit this place but normal people's not able to go and survey there. It create risk for our life. So there is many disadvantages than advantages.
Today
many tourist
are visiting
places
where difficult conditions such
as Sahara desert
the
antartic
so
from my view there are disadvantages are more than the advantages. I am giving
some
relevant point with example. On one hand, while moving to
coldest
continent such as
antartica
it
makes
more health issues. And a number of
people
not adapt
cold
weather conditions.
So
if they
breath
the
cold
air it
create
lung infection.
Also
while trucking in
high
cold
mountain the oxygen rate is
low than
the normal level. It
also
affect
our body condition.
On
addition, natural disasters will
occurred
there at any time. And the road was
hide
due to
high
snowfall.
So
if we Stuck there
nobodybwill
identify us.
without
knowing surveying techniques we cannot sustain their though it
create
numerous problems.
Moreover
, a number if
places
do not have
enough
food
facilities.
Also
with out
enough
food
facilities we cannot
live
thair
.
fir
example, while going to
coldest
continent or
deseart
food
facilities
are limited
opportunity to
make
food
also
.
Food
is essential for our body. We out this we cannot
survivethere
.
So
this trip has
plathora
if
risk
factors there.
On the other hand
treucki
g gives
advanture
for
teenagers
and teenage
people
are wish to
make
her life
advanture
.
Also
they never mind about the
risk
factor
so
now a days
touristers
are higher in
this
places
in addition
research
people
and
experties
wish to visit the
place
for the
research
purposes
and
it
helps
to
analyse
the climate
changes
also
helps
to
research
old
particles for instant
currently
research
reveals the news that
many ice
rock has
melt
and
the sea levels has increased.
and
new
old
locks are appears
out side
there unknown
fungas
and sediments in the rock for
many
years.
Now
we can
see
it. They
make
high
pricautions
with
high
proof jackets
enough
food
to
make
research
so
with out
pricautions
it is
hard
to
surview
. In conclusions by
makeing
high
pricautions
we can visit this
place
but
normal
people
's not able to go and survey there. It
create
risk
for our life.
So
there is
many
disadvantages than advantages.
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