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Why I choose IT industry. Please explain your idea

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There are more reasons why I chose IT. Generally, I can say that the information technology is improving day by day and it is becoming our part of life. All IT companies, at multiple paths offer remote jobs and best salary offers at present. Moreover, each IT company provide with opportunities that working with worldwide team who are supportive and kind, it means, there is excellent networking at IT sphere. Additionally, it is easy to enter to this industry without any degrees like bachelor or certificate, if they have enough experience and knowledge. One good illustration can be that is Steve jobs who was owner of Apple, he even did not have any degrees, however it can be seen that Apple is the most successful and famous company over the world. From my point of view, every IT specialist desires to work at Apple. One more reason why I did choose IT can be that, when I was younger, I was really fallen in love with technologies like computer, phone and others. I used to break them and wanted to see what are the things inside, however it was not good idea. After couple of years when I was 3rd class, I started to build web sites with HTML technology, even I have no idea about web development, but my interest does not allow to stop me. Even I was young, I had interest in coding. To begin with, after getting good knowledge and get experience when I study at ITPU with skilled teachers, I planned to create some start-up projects and I want to make it the biggest IT park resident that work internationally. For instance, start-up projects that as EPAM, Click, Uber and more others like that. First of all, I want to create start-up that smart-booker app and website that includes booking flight, clothes with shipping, technologies like phone, laptop, moreover fast food which are pizza, hot dog and others. Second start-up that I want to do, is going to be shipping program that work trucks, air planes and cars. This start-up includes shipping any things to everywhere, over cities even over countries. So, these projects are only some examples. In the future, I have a bunch of start-up projects to do. Generally, I have skills that to make web sites front sides which are HTML, CSS, SASS and JavaScript. Nowadays, I am trying to become a freelancer at Up-work platform. So, to cut off, I do not want to ask my parents about money, and actually I wanted pay my scholarships fully, but right now I have no experience to get paid at any company, in order to pay may scholarship and that is why I want to get scholarship. After getting enough experience and more knowledge from ITPU professors then I will be able to create more start-up projects and get paid.
There are more reasons why I chose IT.
Generally
, I can say that the information
technology
is improving day by day and it is becoming our part of life. All IT
companies
, at multiple paths offer remote jobs and best salary offers at present.
Moreover
, each IT
company
provide with opportunities that working with worldwide team who are supportive and kind, it means, there is excellent networking at IT sphere.
Additionally
, it is easy to enter to this industry without any degrees like bachelor or certificate, if they have
enough
experience
and knowledge. One
good
illustration can be
that is
Steve jobs
who was owner of Apple, he even did not have any degrees,
however
it can be
seen
that Apple is the most successful and
famous
company
over the world. From my point of view, every IT specialist desires to work at Apple. One more reason why I did choose IT can be that, when I was younger, I was
really
fallen in
love
with
technologies
like computer, phone
and others
. I
used
to break them and wanted to
see
what are the things inside,
however
it was not
good
idea
. After
couple of
years when I was 3rd
class
, I
started
to build
web sites
with HTML
technology
, even I have no
idea
about web development,
but
my interest does not
allow
to
stop
me. Even I was young, I had interest in coding. To
begin
with, after getting
good
knowledge and
get
experience
when I study at
ITPU
with skilled teachers, I planned to create
some
start
-up
projects
and I
want
to
make
it the biggest IT park resident that work
internationally
.
For instance
,
start
-up
projects
that as
EPAM
, Click, Uber and more others like that.
First of all
, I
want
to create
start
-up that smart-booker app and website that includes booking flight, clothes with shipping,
technologies
like phone, laptop,
moreover
fast
food which are pizza, hot dog
and others
. Second
start
-up that I
want
to do, is going to be shipping program that work trucks, air
planes
and cars. This
start
-up includes shipping any things to everywhere, over cities even over countries.
So
, these
projects
are
only
some
examples. In the future, I have a bunch of
start
-up
projects
to do.
Generally
, I have
skills
that to
make
web sites
front sides which are HTML, CSS, SASS and JavaScript. Nowadays, I am trying to become a freelancer at Up-work platform.
So
, to
cut
off, I do not
want
to ask my parents about money, and actually I wanted pay my scholarships
fully
,
but
right
now
I have no
experience
to
get
paid at any
company
, in order to pay may scholarship and
that is
why I
want
to
get
scholarship. After getting
enough
experience
and more knowledge from
ITPU
professors then I will be able to create more
start
-up
projects
and
get
paid.
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