Check your IELTS writing task 1 and essay, this is a free correction and evaluation service.
Check IELTS Writing it's free
British CouncilIDPCambridge
IELTS Writing Answer Sheet
Barcode 3
Candidate Name:
Randhawa Noor
Center Number:
1
2
3
4
   
Candidate Number:
2
2
6
8
4
Module (shade one box):
Academic:
 
General Training:
Test Date:
1
D
4
D
   
0
M
3
M
   
2
Y
0
Y
2
Y
2
Y

Unawareness and Ignorance in Arab World

Unawareness and Ignorance in Arab World XwoX8
The Arab world has got a lot of conflicts since one cared to remember. Most of those conflicts, wars, and disasters could've been prevented by having an essential powerful thing, which is Education. Unfortunately, the Arab world got a lot of dangerous problems because of that issue. Nowadays, Ignorance is one of the major challenges that the Arab world face. Ignorance, and unawareness, absolutely leads to cultural backwardness. The lack of knowledge, focusing on silly matters, and the reluctance to read, for instance, reflect tremendously bad effects on people's lives, societies, and eventually, countries. One can easily notice how a lot of Arabs reacted to the global pandemic. It's a shame how ignorant people give bad images about their cultures through their idiocy and cluelessness on what's going on, giving unreasonable excuses, which is, of course, a result of their ignorance. Illiteracy is one of the results of bad situation that caused by Ignorance. Through simple search on Google, one can easily find out the miserable reality. "According to Arab League Educational, Cultural and Scientific Organization (ALECSO), 21% of the Arabs, or about 96 million people, are illiterate. This is such a huge proportion comparing to 13. 6% as a global average. " (Al-Ahmad, 2018). In Iraq, for instance, one in every five people is illiterate, which is a real disaster, if you ask me. Someone may argue that illiterate people aren't necessarily enjoyed that situation, rather than considering them as victims of inconvenient circumstances. This is partially true in some cases. However, those excuses are unacceptable, because Palestine, for instance, has gotten war and unstable situation for more than 70 years, yet the illiterate proportion is only 2%. So, there's no excuse! Everyone should at least get basic knowledge as long as he's alive. Also, there were those genius writers and authors who were blind, yet they left a lot of magnificent books. In addition, there are organisations and schools which offer programs to teach illiterate people. Ignorance may lead to destructive disasters, like wars, especially Civil Wars. Being unaware and ignorant about someone's beliefs, language, and points of view, leads you, of course, to be fearful of them. This is the real danger of Ignorance since it leads ignorant people to create certain images about others based on their illusions, not on facts, which lead eventually to a lot of misconceptions that probably lead to critical dangerous issues, like hatred and wars. "In 2003, the UNESCO Human Development Report indicated that every eighty Arabs read one book, while the European citizen read 35 books a year. In this context, the Human Development Report in 2011, issued by the Arab Thought Foundation, shows that the Arab citizen reads an equivalent of six minutes annually, while the European citizen reads two hundred hours annually" (Al-Ahmad, 2018). The very shocking truth is that the majority of the Arab world is Muslims who is supposed to read frequently since God's first order is to do so, as it is clear in chapter 96 of the Holy Qur'an: "Read in the name of your Lord Who created" (Qur'an 96: 1). The saying "Ignorance is a bliss" is wrong in many ways. I believe that all people should be aware about everything in their lives as much as they can. At least, ignorant people shouldn't be offended if someone called them "Ignorant", since it is true, and they should stay away from taking any serious decisions that affect the society. Instead, they should be followers, and try to understand others opinions and situations. So, ignorance leads to idiocy, wrong decisions, and weakness. The Egyptian poet, Hafiz Ibrahim, said: "Learn! Cause knowledge is the key of success, which opens all the doors towards happiness. Then, make it the source of your power! To be majestic is to be powerful by knowledge". Thus, being armored by Knowledge may solve all people's issues, or most of them. I see that Arabs or people in general could stave off the danger of Ignorance through simple significantly important habit in their lives which is Reading. Ignorance is an essential dangerous issue to be considered, especially in this century. It affects not only our present but also the coming generations. So, people should read, as much as they can. And for those illiterates, go to school or try to educate yourself. It doesn't matter what you read, when you read, or where you read. What matters is you read. Keep reading, using as much possible knowledge as you can get in order to make this world, or at least your world or your nation, better place to live.
The Arab
world
has
got
a
lot
of conflicts since one cared to remember. Most of those conflicts,
wars
, and disasters could've been
prevented
by having an essential powerful thing, which is Education. Unfortunately, the Arab
world
got
a
lot
of
dangerous
problems
because
of that
issue
. Nowadays,
Ignorance
is one of the major challenges that the Arab
world
face.
Ignorance
, and unawareness,
absolutely
leads to cultural backwardness. The lack of
knowledge
, focusing on silly matters, and the reluctance to
read
,
for instance
, reflect
tremendously
bad
effects on
people
's
lives
, societies, and
eventually
, countries. One can
easily
notice how a
lot
of Arabs reacted to the global pandemic. It's a shame how
ignorant
people
give
bad
images about their cultures through their idiocy and
cluelessness
on what's going on, giving unreasonable excuses, which is,
of course
, a result of their
ignorance
. Illiteracy is one of the results of
bad
situation
that caused by
Ignorance
. Through simple search on Google, one can
easily
find out the miserable reality.
"
According to Arab League Educational, Cultural and Scientific Organization (
ALECSO
), 21% of the Arabs, or about 96 million
people
, are
illiterate
. This is such a huge proportion comparing to 13. 6% as a global average.
"
(Al-Ahmad, 2018). In Iraq,
for instance
, one in every five
people
is
illiterate
, which is a real disaster, if you ask me. Someone may argue that
illiterate
people
aren't
necessarily
enjoyed that
situation
,
rather
than considering them as victims of inconvenient circumstances. This is
partially
true in
some
cases.
However
, those excuses are unacceptable,
because
Palestine,
for instance
, has gotten
war
and unstable
situation
for more than 70 years,
yet
the
illiterate
proportion is
only
2%.
So
, there's no excuse! Everyone should at least
get
basic
knowledge
as long as he's alive.
Also
, there were those genius writers and authors who were blind,
yet
they
left
a
lot
of magnificent books.
In addition
, there are
organisations
and schools which offer programs to teach
illiterate
people
. Ignorance may
lead
to destructive disasters, like
wars
,
especially
Civil
Wars
. Being unaware and
ignorant
about someone's beliefs, language, and points of view, leads you,
of course
, to be fearful of them. This is the real
danger
of
Ignorance
since it leads
ignorant
people
to create certain images about others based on their illusions, not on facts, which
lead
eventually
to a
lot
of misconceptions that
probably
lead
to critical
dangerous
issues
, like hatred and wars.
"
In 2003, the UNESCO Human Development Report indicated that every eighty Arabs
read
one book, while the European citizen
read
35 books a year. In this context, the Human Development Report in 2011, issued by the Arab
Thought
Foundation,
shows
that the Arab citizen
reads
an equivalent of six minutes
annually
, while the European citizen
reads
two hundred hours
annually
"
(Al-Ahmad, 2018). The
very
shocking truth is that the majority of the Arab
world
is Muslims who
is supposed
to
read
frequently
since God's
first
order is to do
so
, as it is
clear
in chapter 96 of the Holy Qur'an:
"
Read in the name of your Lord Who created
"
(Qur'an 96: 1). The saying
"
Ignorance is a bliss
"
is
wrong
in
many
ways. I believe that all
people
should be aware about everything in their
lives
as much as they can. At least,
ignorant
people
shouldn't
be offended
if someone called them
"
Ignorant
"
, since it is true, and they should stay away from taking any serious decisions that affect the society.
Instead
, they should be followers, and try to understand others opinions and
situations
.
So
,
ignorance
leads to idiocy,
wrong
decisions, and weakness. The Egyptian poet, Hafiz Ibrahim, said:
"
Learn! Cause
knowledge
is the key of success, which opens all the doors towards happiness. Then,
make
it the source of your power! To be majestic is to be powerful by knowledge
"
.
Thus
,
being armored
by
Knowledge
may solve all
people
's
issues
, or most of them. I
see
that Arabs or
people
in general
could stave off the
danger
of
Ignorance
through simple
significantly
important
habit in their
lives
which is Reading.
Ignorance
is an essential
dangerous
issue
to
be considered
,
especially
in this century. It affects not
only
our present
but
also
the coming generations.
So
,
people
should
read
, as much as they can. And for those illiterates, go to school or try to educate yourself. It doesn't matter what you
read
, when you
read
, or where you
read
. What matters is you
read
.
Keep
reading, using as much possible
knowledge
as you can
get
in order to
make
this
world
, or at least your
world
or your nation, better place to
live
.
Do not write below this line
Official use only
CC
5.5
LR
5.0
GR
6.5
TA
5.0
OVERALL BAND SCORE
5.5
Barcode 1
Barcode 1

IELTS essay Unawareness and Ignorance in Arab World

👍 High Quality Evaluation

Correction made by newly developed AI

✅ Check your Writing

Paste/write text, get result

⭐ Writing Ideas

Free for everyone

⚡ Comprehensive report

Analysis of your text

⌛ Instant feedback

Get report in less than a second

Copy promo code:PWd1K
Copy
Recent posts