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The diagram illustrates the process of producing of orange juice.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing of orange juice. mAL

The table provides information about the workforce in silk production in two countries, England and Wales, over a period of 50 years starting from 1851. It is clear that the total number of silk workers in the two countries declined over the period shown, and that significantly more women were employed than men in this industry. Also, the number of silk manufacturing factories increased over the 50-year period, despite fluctuations. In 1851, the silk workforce was largest with 130, 750 people, including 76, 786 females and nearly 54, 000 males. In contrast, there was the lowest number of silk factories, with only 272 factories, in 1851. However, ten years later, the number of silk manufacturers reached 761, nearly triple that of the first year while the total number of employees experienced a significant fall of over 20, 000 people. Over the following 41 years, the total number of female and male workers decreased gradually throughout the period, to 25, 567 and 13, 375 respectively, which contributed to the drop in the total number of employees at 38, 942 in 1901. Meanwhile, there was a slight decrease in the figure for factories, which was down to 623 by the end of the period.

The table provides information about the workforce in silk
 production in two countries, England and Wales, over
 a period
 of 50 years starting from 1851.

It is clear
 that the total
number
 of silk
 workers in the two countries declined over
 the period
 shown, and that significantly
 more women were employed
 than men
 in this industry. Also
, the number
 of silk
 manufacturing factories
 increased over
 the 50-year
period
, despite fluctuations.

In 1851, the silk
 workforce was largest with 130, 750 people
, including 76, 786 females and nearly
 54, 000 males. In contrast
, there was the lowest number
 of silk
factories
, with only
 272 factories
, in 1851. However
, ten years later, the number
 of silk
 manufacturers reached 761, nearly
 triple that of the first
year
 while the total
number
 of employees experienced a significant fall of over
 20, 000 people
.

Over the following 41 years, the total
number
 of female and male workers decreased gradually
 throughout the period
, to 25, 567 and 13, 375 respectively
, which contributed to the drop in the total
number
 of employees at 38, 942 in 1901. Meanwhile, there was a slight decrease in the figure for factories
, which was down to 623 by the end
 of the period
. 

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