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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. mrJpO
Public figures and celebrities are famous among the mankind. All people were followed by them. All human are very much concern about their lifestyle, interests and personal lives. According this, Television, Newspapers, Magazines and other media pay too much attention to personal lives of famous person. I totally agreed with this statement. In this essay I will examine the reasons and provide my overall opinion. To begin with, we all are humen beings. we all all have some secrets This is our priority to hide our secrects in public. But often journalists are very much trying to know the secrets of public figur and celebrities. when they any kinds of hide things about them the publish it newspaper, Magazines and brodcast on television Without taking her/his permission. This is a kind of violence and that probably made them embrassed. Secondly, A famous person or a Public figure cannot spent time in a cafe or a hotel independently. Because of mass media people when they found them they were trying to interact with them. This kind of behaviour also made them anger. A good illustrations of that, few days ago Shakib who is the famous cricketer in our country. He went a cafe and there he take some refreshment. some mass media people went there and eager to interact with him. But he didnot allowed them. But they are forcing, As a result, he lost his patience and began to quarrel with them. Meanwhile, Mass media people responsible for publised news. It is current is good that, they gives overview of our country and also the some news about famous people and public figure. But, they need to concern about their personal matters, family life, independce and will. This might be healthy, if they are aware. However, Every man wanted to breathe freely, spent some quality time with family and friend. This is does not dissimiliar about popular person. In conclusion, I strongly recommened that, Mass media people should be aware of paying too much attention of personallives of famous people. And this made healthy harmony between mass media people and famos person.
Public
figures and celebrities are
famous
among the mankind. All
people
were followed
by them. All
human
are
very
much
concern about their lifestyle, interests and personal
lives
.
According this
, Television, Newspapers, Magazines and other media pay too
much
attention to personal
lives
of
famous
person. I
totally
agreed
with this statement. In this essay I will examine the reasons and provide my
overall
opinion. To
begin
with, we all are
humen
beings.
we
all all
have
some
secrets This is our priority to
hide
our
secrects
in
public
.
But
often
journalists are
very
much
trying to know the secrets of
public
figur
and celebrities.
when
they
any kinds of
hide
things about them the
publish
it newspaper, Magazines and
brodcast
on television Without taking her/his permission. This is a kind of violence and that
probably
made them
embrassed
.
Secondly
, A
famous
person or a Public figure cannot
spent
time in a
cafe
or a hotel
independently
.
Because
of
mass
media
people
when they found them they were trying to interact with them. This kind of
behaviour
also
made them anger. A
good
illustrations of that, few days ago
Shakib
who is the
famous
cricketer in our country. He went a
cafe
and there he
take
some
refreshment.
some
mass
media
people
went there and eager to interact with him.
But
he
didnot
allowed
them.
But
they are forcing,
As a result
, he lost his patience and began to quarrel with them. Meanwhile,
Mass
media
people
responsible for
publised
news. It is
current
is
good
that, they
gives
overview of our country and
also
the
some
news about
famous
people
and
public
figure.
But
, they need to concern about their personal matters, family life,
independce
and will. This might be healthy, if they are aware.
However
, Every
man
wanted to breathe
freely
, spent
some
quality time with family and friend. This
is does
not
dissimiliar
about popular person.
In conclusion
, I
strongly
recommened
that,
Mass
media
people
should be aware of paying too
much
attention of
personallives
of
famous
people
. And this made healthy harmony between
mass
media
people
and
famos
person.
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