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Talk about a Toy You liked in Your Childhood

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Indeed I have had many toys since my childhood, remembering some of them make me feel nostalgic A blast from the past. In my point of view, toys have significant effects on a child's attitude in the future. because somehow, they forge their ethics, and even so some people believe, there is a connection with children's intelligence, and the toys they play with. In the good old days When I was little, my father bought me a robotic toy which was like a transformer movie's robots. It was red, very shiny with lots of lights and funny voices. the toy needs two batteries to start, and when the battery dried then I had to ask my father to buy new batteries. At my 7's birthday party, my father gives this present to me and never had I ever feel so happy in my entire life until that time. After that time I played this every day with my friends and cousins they were jealous of me all the time because it was very expensive and hard to effort. I remember one day that I took it outside and it felts on the water and broke somehow. because it was an electronic toy and water damaged it badly. If I wouldn't bring it outside then maybe it would work much longer. I had a special bonding with this toy and taught me that I need to more careful about the things that I love. I was quite possessive about my toy and never utilized to let anyone touch it. Time flies Still, I have it in my parents' home alongside my others toys kept safe in my old room.
Indeed
I have had
many
toys
since my childhood, remembering
some
of them
make
me feel nostalgic A blast from the past. In my point of view,
toys
have significant effects on a child's attitude in the future.
because
somehow, they forge their ethics, and even
so
some
people
believe, there is a connection with children's intelligence, and the
toys
they play with. In the
good
old
days When I was
little
, my father
bought
me a robotic
toy
which was like a transformer movie's robots. It
was red
,
very
shiny with lots of lights and
funny
voices.
the
toy
needs two batteries to
start
, and when the battery dried then I had to ask my father to
buy
new batteries. At my 7's birthday party, my father gives this present to me and never had I ever feel
so
happy in my entire life until that time. After that time I played this every day with my friends and cousins they were jealous of me all the time
because
it was
very
expensive and
hard
to effort. I remember one day that I took it outside and it felts on the water and broke somehow.
because
it was an electronic
toy
and water damaged it
badly
. If I wouldn't bring it outside then maybe it would work much longer. I had a special bonding with this
toy
and taught me that I need to more careful about the things that I
love
. I was quite possessive about my
toy
and never utilized to
let
anyone touch it. Time flies
Still
, I have it in my parents' home alongside my others
toys
kept
safe in my
old
room.
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