Some young people commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks. Some  people think they should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do  you agree or disagree?
Some young people commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks. Some people think they should be punished in the same way as adults.  VolOA
Whether minor criminals deserve the same punishment as adult convicts have been
in the spotlight all over the world. However, this essay will prove that people should
stop wavering between punishing these young criminals less seriously and imposing
the same treatment to them, while discussing minor outlaws over 14 or 15 years old
who violate laws severely. Namely, the existence of different treatments between
adult culprits and young offenders in this case does not make any sense.
Primarily, objectors assert that these young criminals might be instigated by others
to commit crimes, and their subjectivity of breaking laws is relatively limited.
Seemingly, they break the law unwillingly and involuntarily. In fact, most felonies are
committed premeditatedly with well-organized plans, and even schoolchildren can
easily estimate severe outcomes of these serious crimes with the common sense they
got from school and their parents. An instance in point is that there is no convincing
evidence to show that minor criminals who robbed a supermarket with guns have
less willingness to do so than an adult who does the same thing.
Additionally, another standpoint these objectors hold is chances are that young
culprits can be more easily remoulded. Nevertheless, the truth is that due to the
serious crimes those young culprits took part in, they are all sentenced to at least 8
or 10 years in prison. After serving their sentence in juvenile detention for 3 or 4
years, they of course would be transferred to ordinary jails because they become
adults. Thereafter, their new cell mates might tell them that how they felt when they
killed people they did not like. And the prisoner who they are weeding with could
help them analyze why they need a shotgun for robbing a bank rather than a rifle.
People could imagine what would happen if those young people return to our
society after a few years.
Forgiveness for wrong people is punishment for upright citizens, and consequently
young people with unforgivable behaviors ought to be imposed the same treatment
as adults to let them know what the crime cost is. 
Whether minor 
criminals
 deserve the same punishment as adult convicts have been
in
 the spotlight all over the world. 
However
, this essay will prove that 
people
 should
stop
 wavering between punishing these 
young
 criminals
 less 
seriously
 and imposing
the same treatment to them, while discussing minor outlaws over 14 or 15 years 
old
who
 violate laws 
severely
. 
Namely
, the existence of 
different
 treatments between
adult
 culprits and 
young
 offenders 
in this case
 does not 
make
 any sense.
Primarily
, objectors assert that these 
young
 criminals
 might 
be instigated
 by others
to
 commit 
crimes
, and their subjectivity of breaking laws is 
relatively
 limited.
Seemingly
, they break the law 
unwillingly
 and 
involuntarily
. In fact, most felonies 
are
committed 
premeditatedly
 with well-organized plans, and even schoolchildren can
easily
 estimate severe outcomes of these serious 
crimes
 with the common sense they
got
 from school and their parents. An instance in point is that there is no 
convincing
evidence to 
show
 that minor 
criminals
 who robbed a supermarket with guns have
less
 willingness to do 
so
 than an adult who does the same thing.
Additionally
, another standpoint these objectors hold is chances are that young
culprits
 can be more 
easily
 remoulded
. 
Nevertheless
, the truth is that due to the
serious 
crimes
 those 
young
 culprits 
took part
 in, they are all sentenced to at least 8
or
 10 years in prison. After serving their sentence in juvenile detention for 3 or 4
years, they 
of course
 would 
be transferred
 to ordinary jails 
because
 they become
adults
. Thereafter, their new cell mates might 
tell
 them that how they felt when they
killed
 people
 they did not like. And the prisoner who they are weeding with 
could
help
 them analyze why they need a shotgun for robbing a bank 
rather
 than a rifle.
People
 could imagine what would happen if those 
young
 people
 return to our
society
 after a few years.
Forgiveness for 
wrong
 people
 is
 punishment for upright citizens, and 
consequently
young 
people
 with unforgivable behaviors ought to 
be imposed
 the same treatment
as
 adults to 
let
 them know what the 
crime
 cost is. 
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