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reality world or in a virtual reality

reality world or in a virtual reality O1wM7
Humans are gradually approaching the peak of technology when the limit between reality and the virtual world is closer than ever. It will be wonderful when all our wishes come true. When we can do things that previously only occurred in the middle of our sleep. And of course, I asked myself the question: If I could live one more time in a place where anything is possible, would I really enjoy it? I understand that each option has its own pros and cons based on one's vision. And I believe in the truth, belief in the real world. First, I appreciate the fair value of the real world, which the virtual world doesn't seem to exist. People's value is determined by what they can do based on experience, knowledge, and skills. Which takes a lot of time and effort to get. Humans are higher animals, that rely on the process of growing and learning continuously over thousands of years, so it will be an imbalance for the ecosystem if all animals are the same. In addition, each person's intelligence is limitless but it will take a lot of time and effort to bring a dream into reality. Some people just dream but don't have the courage to take the first step, that's the biggest difference between the two worlds I can imagine. To be more precise about this view of life, Mr. Huan Rose once supported that: If you don't work but ask for food, you only eat soil and eat air. The world is flat and it doesn't allow us to dream much. On the one hand, some people tend to enjoy their life and have bigger ambitions. It's not a bad lifestyle when they have their own life goals, so what's the point? A lot of people create a virtual world for themselves where every dream in the "future" comes true. This stems from the human need to supply tin, but if not careful it is not only wrong thinking but rather a source of personal danger. For example, the consumer culture of Korean youth is reaching a period of excess crisis when they buy a lot of items but have no use value with upfront money. Which drives so many young people to suicide and default. To sum up, I want to emphasize that human beings have been and will always live with the true nature of the world, where all material and spiritual values ​​are determined through human actions. Believing in a virtual world where anything is possible is absurd to humans.
Humans
are
gradually
approaching the peak of technology when the limit between reality and the virtual
world
is closer than ever. It will be wonderful when all our wishes
come
true.
When
we can do things that previously
only
occurred in the middle of our sleep. And
of course
, I asked myself the question: If I could
live
one more time in a place where anything is possible, would I
really
enjoy it? I understand that each option has its
own
pros and cons based on one's vision. And I believe in the truth, belief in the real world.
First
, I appreciate the
fair
value
of the real
world
, which the virtual
world
doesn't seem to exist.
People
's
value
is determined
by what they can do based on experience, knowledge, and
skills
. Which takes a
lot
of time and effort to
get
.
Humans
are higher animals, that rely on the process of growing and learning
continuously
over thousands of years,
so
it will be an imbalance for the ecosystem if all animals are the same.
In addition
, each person's intelligence is limitless
but
it will take a
lot
of time and effort to bring a
dream
into reality.
Some
people
just
dream
but
don't have the courage to take the
first
step, that's the biggest difference between the two
worlds
I can imagine. To be more precise about this view of life, Mr.
Huan
Rose once supported that: If you don't work
but
ask for
food, you
only
eat soil and eat air. The
world
is flat and it doesn't
allow
us to
dream
much. On the one hand,
some
people
tend to enjoy their life and have bigger ambitions. It's not a
bad
lifestyle when they have their
own
life goals,
so
what's the point? A
lot
of
people
create a virtual
world
for themselves where every
dream
in the
"
future
"
comes
true. This stems from the
human
need to supply tin,
but
if not careful it is not
only
wrong
thinking
but
rather
a source of personal
danger
.
For example
, the consumer culture of Korean youth is reaching a period of excess crisis when they
buy
a
lot
of items
but
have no
use
value
with upfront money. Which drives
so
many
young
people
to suicide and default. To sum up, I want to emphasize that
human
beings have been and will always
live
with the true nature of the
world
, where all material and spiritual values ​​
are determined
through
human
actions. Believing in a virtual
world
where anything is possible is absurd to
humans
.
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