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My name is Hathairat Pinitsuwan, and I am a Work and Holiday Visa applicant

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Dear Immigration Officer My name is Hathairat Pinitsuwan, and I am a Work and Holiday Visa applicant. I am writing this travel plan to address my objective of going to Australia. I graduated from Srinakharinwirot University, Thailand. I have been doing an engineering position in Thailand for almost 5 years. I plan to travel around the world, which is my dream. I heard about the program two years ago from my friend who has been spending her life in Australia with a Work and Holiday Visa. I am interested in joining the Work and Holiday program in 2022 due to the fact a Work and Holiday Visa is a extremely inclusive program. I can travel around Australia for a year. I can have the possibility to work to cover my expenses. Finally, I can have a by-the-book experience combining travel and work. My rough schedule, I expect to get a visa around Nov 2022, and then I will land in Sydney around July 2023. I decide to stay in Sydney as my friend lives in Sydney with a student visa. I plan to stay in Sydney with my friend for the period of 1 year. In my first 3 months, I plan to take a language class like the General English course or the English for Business course. After class, I plan to find a part-time job, such as delivering food from restaurants to consumers using bicycles as this position is supremely flexible, and I can manage my work schedule by myself. Nevertheless, work at cafés and restaurants in a waitress position as I had experience while I went to United States with a Work and Travel Visa 5 years ago. If I am gaining some pocket money from my part-time job, I will spend my money on travel. First of all, I plan to travel to New South Wale. I plan to visit Sydney Opera House, Harbour Bridge, and Bondi Beach. Sydney Opera House is located on Sydney Harbour. Its unique use of a series of gleaming white sail-shaped shells as its roof structure makes it one of the most-photographed buildings in the world. Bondi Beach is one of Australia’s most well-known beaches, its laid-back coastal style and café culture. Bondi Beach is 30 minutes from Town Hall Station. After that, when I finish my language class, I think my language skill which gains from English class and my experience which had from a part-time job will be improved. I will find a full-time job in a technology role since I graduated from the engineering and technology field. In my last 6 months previously going back to Thailand, I plan to travel to Victoria and Queensland. In Victoria, I plan to visit The Great Ocean Road and Twelve Apostles, Philip Island, and Brighton Beach. The Great Ocean Road and Twelve Apostles is one of Victoria’s most iconic natural attractions and popular for visitors at sunrise and sunset. Admire the Twelve Apostles, limestone stacks located off the shore of Port Campbell National park. Philip Island is home to the Little Penguins and idyllic beaches. The island is well-known for its Little Penguin parade. In Queensland, I plan to visit Lone Pine Koala Sanctuary, Streets Beach, and Wheel of Brisbane. Lone Pine Koala Sanctuary is the world’s first and largest koala sanctuary, home to over 100 koalas and 70 species of other Australian native animals. The sanctuary offers guests the opportunity to get up close and personal with the wildlife in nature. From koala holds to kangaroo feeding. Finally, I will fly back to Thailand around June 2024. These is my roughly plan while I am in Australia. The main reason is to travel to Australia and explore the country and culture. I believe that the Work and Holiday program would improve my language skills since language acquisition is achieved through practical immersion. There is no better place to improve my competence than the countries in which the native speaks language. Also, I can have the opportunity to pick up another language. I can make numerous friends from around the world and numerous various backgrounds. They will give me access to explore various cultures and thus enhance my understanding of the world. I will be gaining skills which allow grow more independent and adjustable. These will be extremely useful later in life in both further education and my career. I will make observations of all the conditions of my visa and will definitely come back to Thailand with it allowing time. I wish I had given useful information for your consideration. Best Regards, Hathairat Pinitsuwan
Dear Immigration Officer My name is Hathairat Pinitsuwan, and I am a
Work
and
Holiday
Visa applicant. I am writing this
travel
plan
to address my objective of going to Australia. I graduated from Srinakharinwirot University, Thailand. I have been doing an engineering position in Thailand for almost 5 years. I
plan
to
travel
around
the
world
, which is my dream. I heard about the
program
two years ago from my
friend
who has been spending her life in Australia with a
Work
and
Holiday
Visa. I
am interested
in joining the
Work
and
Holiday
program
in 2022 due to the fact a
Work
and
Holiday
Visa is a
extremely
inclusive
program
. I can
travel
around
Australia for a
year
. I can have the possibility to
work
to cover my expenses.
Finally
, I can have a by-the-book experience combining
travel
and work. My rough schedule, I
expect
to
get
a visa
around
Nov 2022, and then I will land in Sydney
around
July 2023. I decide to stay in Sydney as my
friend
lives
in Sydney with a student visa. I
plan
to stay in Sydney with my
friend
for the period of 1
year
. In my
first
3 months, I
plan
to take a
language
class
like the General English course or the English for Business course. After
class
, I
plan
to find a part-time
job
, such as delivering food from restaurants to consumers using bicycles as this position is
supremely
flexible, and I can manage my
work
schedule by myself.
Nevertheless
,
work
at cafés and restaurants in a waitress position as I had experience while I went to United States with a
Work
and
Travel
Visa 5 years ago. If I am gaining
some
pocket money from my part-time
job
, I will spend my money on
travel
.
First
of all, I
plan
to
travel
to New South Wale. I
plan
to visit Sydney Opera
House
, Harbour Bridge, and Bondi
Beach
. Sydney Opera
House
is located
on Sydney Harbour. Its unique
use
of a series of gleaming white sail-shaped shells as its roof structure
makes
it one of the most-photographed buildings in the
world
. Bondi
Beach
is one of Australia’s most well-known
beaches
, its laid-back coastal style and café culture. Bondi
Beach
is 30 minutes from Town Hall Station. After that, when I finish my
language
class
, I
think
my
language
skill
which gains from English
class
and my experience which had from a part-time
job
will be
improved
. I will find a full-time
job
in a technology role since I graduated from the engineering and technology field. In my last 6 months previously going back to Thailand, I
plan
to
travel
to Victoria and Queensland. In Victoria, I
plan
to visit The Great Ocean Road and Twelve Apostles, Philip Island, and Brighton
Beach
. The Great Ocean Road and Twelve Apostles is one of Victoria’s most iconic natural attractions and popular for visitors at sunrise and sunset. Admire the Twelve Apostles, limestone stacks located off the shore of Port Campbell National park. Philip Island is home to the
Little
Penguins and idyllic
beaches
. The island is well-known for its
Little
Penguin parade. In Queensland, I
plan
to visit Lone Pine Koala
Sanctuary
, Streets
Beach
, and Wheel of Brisbane. Lone Pine Koala
Sanctuary
is the
world’s
first
and largest koala
sanctuary
, home to over 100 koalas and 70 species of other Australian native animals. The
sanctuary
offers guests the opportunity to
get
up close and personal with the wildlife in nature. From koala holds to kangaroo feeding.
Finally
, I will
fly
back to Thailand
around
June 2024. These is my roughly
plan
while I am in Australia. The main reason is to
travel
to Australia and explore the country and culture. I believe that the
Work
and
Holiday
program
would
improve
my
language
skills
since
language
acquisition
is achieved
through practical immersion. There is no better place to
improve
my competence than the countries in which the native speaks
language
.
Also
, I can have the opportunity to pick up another
language
. I can
make
numerous
friends
from
around
the
world
and numerous various backgrounds. They will give me access to explore various cultures and
thus
enhance my understanding of the
world
. I will be gaining
skills
which
allow
grow more independent and adjustable. These will be
extremely
useful later in life in both
further
education and my career. I will
make
observations of all the conditions of my visa and will definitely
come
back to Thailand with it allowing time. I wish I had
given
useful information for your consideration. Best Regards, Hathairat Pinitsuwan
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