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More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the technology for communicating.

More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the technology for communicating. 3W3dX
Earlier, we can see only business people using globalized technology to interact with one another in a organisation meeting. However, in present days, most of the people, use the modern technology to communicate with others in their social life. This essay outlines both the benefits and drawbacks of this development. There are some compelling reasons for accepting the recent development in the technology. Firstly, arranging meeting online will help people to sit back and relax wherever they are and this makes people to save most of their commuting time to the office. They can also immediately join the conference without any timelapse. Secondly, communicating online will resist many road crashes and waiting time of an individual in the traffic congestion. For instance, if the person need to attend the meeting by 8'o clock in the morning and location of the office is not at his close proximity, he have to run and Chase in the urban traffic. so, if he have a option of attending the meeting on air, then the above mentioned issue will be avoided. Thirdly, in current pandemic situation, it is advisable to work from home so we can avoid spreading of the dealt virus "Corona". Moreover, working in home avoided many people's unnecessary commuting which ended up in decline of air pollution and noise pollution in the environment. We have a latest survey report of june 2021, published by "Times of India" that in the past two years, we have a drastical decline in air pollution in the major cities of India. On the other hand, there are some convincing reasons for drawbacks of the modern technology. First and foremost thing is that the networking issue faced a professional who is residing in the countryside. This was also one of the main cause for unemployment during pandemic situation. To sum, interacting with business professionals may sometime leads to misunderstanding. For instance, if an organisation is explaining a project outine on air, if even a single word in the conversation is misleaded then the organisation will be in pitfall. To conclude, everycoin has its both heads and tails likewise every technology which is either developing or developed may have both positive and negative influence in the society. It is expected to reap the benefits and discard the negative sides as much as possible.
Earlier, we can
see
only
business
people
using globalized
technology
to interact with one another in
a
organisation
meeting
.
However
, in present days, most of the
people
,
use
the modern
technology
to communicate with others in their social life. This essay outlines both the benefits and drawbacks of this development. There are
some
compelling reasons for accepting the recent development in the
technology
.
Firstly
, arranging
meeting
online will
help
people
to sit back and relax wherever they are and this
makes
people
to save most of their commuting time to the office. They can
also
immediately
join
the conference without any
timelapse
.
Secondly
, communicating online will resist
many
road crashes and waiting time of an individual in the traffic congestion.
For instance
, if the person need to attend the
meeting
by 8'o clock in the morning and location of the office is not at his
close proximity
, he
have
to run and Chase in the urban traffic.
so
, if he
have
a
option of attending the
meeting
on
air
, then the above mentioned issue will
be avoided
.
Thirdly
, in
current
pandemic situation, it is advisable to work from home
so
we can avoid spreading of the dealt virus
"
Corona
"
.
Moreover
, working in home avoided
many
people
's unnecessary commuting which ended up in decline of
air
pollution and noise pollution in the environment. We have
a
latest survey report of
june
2021, published by
"
Times of India
"
that in the past two years, we have a
drastical
decline in
air
pollution in the major cities of India.
On the other hand
, there are
some
convincing reasons for drawbacks of the modern
technology
.
First
and foremost thing is that the networking issue faced a professional who is residing in the countryside. This was
also
one of the main cause for unemployment during pandemic situation. To sum, interacting with business professionals may sometime leads to misunderstanding.
For instance
, if an
organisation
is explaining a project
outine
on
air
, if even a single word in the conversation is
misleaded
then the
organisation
will be in pitfall.
To conclude
,
everycoin
has
its
both heads and tails
likewise
every
technology
which is either developing or developed may have both
positive
and
negative
influence in the society. It is
expected
to reap the benefits and discard the
negative
sides as much as possible.
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