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Misconduct of staff members

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Dear HR, My name is Amanj Ibrahim and I am employed by Claibon Property Services. I am writing to you to expose the work environment at The Tower concerning the male staff members namely Peter, Paul, Rashid, Luis, Abdel, Antonio, and Miroslav who act shamefully towards women by displaying sexual aggression such as staring at their body with lust as well as ogling nonstop whether it’s work colleagues (temp staff), residents, visitors, cleaners, letting agents etc. . . The doorman staff members Abdel, Antonio, and Miroslav are constantly on the lookout for any female person to be seen on the premise and aim to stop her by enforcing their ill intentions of having an interaction with her even for a moment. They consider their workplace a sex shop where attractive women tend to be seen daily and as result of that get carried away. There’s no level of professionalism or ethics in place they mix business with pleasure. Not a single employee at The Tower I have worked with has any sort of integrity or dignity in any shape or form. The worst part is all of them are all married and have kids except Peter who has a girlfriend with no kids. I have felt disgusted and enraged at times by what I witnessed during my time at The Tower. Peter and Paul are the two leading figures who watch over any female soul they see on a daily basis. The two of them make inappropriate gestures such as body language to highlight a woman's appealing body parts. No attractive woman could ever stand or talk to the concierge without being visually harassed. It gets even worse; I heard Peter myself how he overheard a resident named Alexandros Kontos apartment 170 on the phone having intercourse with his girlfriend whilst he tried to contact him and shared it with his colleague Luis at that time and they both continued to listen to the act and thoroughly enjoyed it. Peter just like Paul also stares at younger women and makes sexual comments and uses body language to signal his partners in crime Paul and Miroslav that he liked what he saw. Absolutely despicable behaviours. I am lost for words especially someone like Paul who turns 60 years this year and is married and has children. He has no shame at all he hits on younger women, age is completely irrelevant to him apparently. I know that he’s got a daughter who is 28 years of age and I have seen him stare in a very sexually way at women much younger than his daughter, teenage girls as young as 18 years of age. I can name quite a few residents who are being harassed by the staff members such as Paul, Peter, Abdel, Antonio and Luis. One of the standout residents who receives a lot of attention from them is a young Russian lady age 21 in apartment 122 lives by herself. Peter, Paul and Antonio are constantly staring at her as if she's ready and available for any of them. Antonio told me once that she tried to approach him in the past who is over 20 years older than her. That’s the sort of sickening mindset they all have at work any simple polite gesture by a woman is interpreted the wrong way. I know for a fact that the young Russian lady is well aware of it and I noticed that she never engages in any conversation with them she only greets them by saying “hello” and “thank you” while they make sexual comments such as nice tan, nice jacket, nice outfit, you look good today etc. . She doesn't like a single one of them especially Paul who always tries to get her attention even if she isn’t look his way on purpose, he'll say something to her anyway. Peter, Rashid, Antonio and Luis always stare at her in a sexual way and she doesn't like it. But like the majority of women out there she won't mention anything to anyone except her close friends as it’s a sensitive topic who in fact act the same way as her with the concierge which is “COLD and NOT interested in talking to you. ” Furthermore in regards to ethically questionable behaviours from the concierge team, another resident a young lady named Kiana, Paul goes crazy whenever he sees Kiara, talks about her booty how well rounded and beautiful it is he even involves other residents to discuss her standout body features, apartment 205 Minoo Sabet who dresses quite elegantly at times and they stare at her but she ignores them, apartment 100 a young gentleman named Francis who has many young women come visit him and Paul loses his mind whenever he sees one of them he gets off his chair to send them to the apartment, he has no shame at all. I remember an incident last year when he went out of control and almost passed out due to excitement seeing two young ladies flaunt their figure in the lobby and Francis was present at that time as well. The ladies laughed at him for being silly and uncontrollable. I felt embarrassed I wanted to apologise to them and ask them to avoid the concierge in future visit. I was planning to speak to Francis’s friends and advise them to ignore Paul and bypass him using the car park basement lift instead to access the apartment I have also witnessed on numerous occasions how Peter and Paul talk about apartment 60 Natalia and her breast in discreet even while she’s standing in front of them. The moment she looked away they signal each other and even whisper silently as well. Abdel the doorman is chasing any woman particularly the cleaners who got many clients and follows them when they enter the premise and has made his ill intentions well known amongst his colleagues especially the other doorman Antonio who has told me in person that he can get any woman he wants at the Tower. Abdel is apparently looking for his second wife and, in his mind, it could be any woman he encounters at work since he uses his position to get close to a woman and always engages in small talks which I noticed makes some women feel slightly uncomfortable. He harassed a friend of mine from my agency and I emailed the management about it. She refused to come forward and give a statement as she’s shy and lacks the courage to talk about it which is understandable. He targets vulnerable women and he always hangs out in the lobby where he can interact with women rather than stand outside and provide valet parking to the residents which is his job in the first place. But he forces his way to get close to any woman he wants to sleep with in his mind. I spoke to Sylwia who is one of the well known cleaners that manages many apartments at the Tower and told her that Abdel must not follow her under any circumstances and offer her a lift when she enters the building as his job is to STAND OUTSIDE. She thanked me for telling her that as she wasn’t aware of his position at The Tower and the next few days, I paid close attention to his reaction he kept looking at her sexually and wondered why she doesn't talk to him. She knows he's a creep but maybe she didn't want to be rude to him all these times he followed her and insisted to be the one to send her up which was my job or the concierge. My email about him was pin point accurate if he saw it he knows I must have watched him closely as that was a very detailed statement about his character. His accomplices at work know that as well but they will never throw him under the bus because if he goes the rest go with him eventually. The doorman Miroslav and Antonio disappear during the shift for a long period of time and some of the residents on several occasions were annoyed that no one is available to park their car or get the car out for them. All they seem to focus and care about are women if there is no beautiful woman to be seen they vanish it’s as simple as that. That's also a, major factor why they go to work as none of them deliver an excellent service to the residents. They hardly do anything for them and some residents are aware of as well ALL MALE WORKERS at The Tower are sexually driven to meet women I do not understand how, why or who interviewed them as they lack basic ethics such as being respectful and caring for others and their loved ones. Any good looking woman regardless of her age is being watched and talked about it the moment they lay their eyes on her. That place is an absolute shambles no amount of punishment will be enough. I asked my agency not to send me back there ever again because of these horrible events I had to endure. I hope you DO NOT make the mistake by asking your unqualified and unreliable employees if there's any truth to what I have stated because that's how my statement in August was discarded by Frank who shared it with the wrong people that deserve to be sacked with immediate effect. I am pretty sure Frank didn't approach the cleaners to find out if Abdel actually does follow them on a regular basis or even attempted to observe his behaviour for a while before he came to a conclusion. He might as well have gone to Abdel and showed him my email and dismissed it right then taking his word over mine. Only the temps from Claibon or certain residents can be trusted and give you honest feedback. I wish the residents could sew through my eyes the horrendous things I experienced. If only they saw their true nature the very moment someone’s wife, daughter, sister, cousin, friend and girlfriend weren’t facing them and if they were able to watch their reaction and overhear the comments made towards them. Disgrace No Words! There’s justice in this world and I am confident that they’ll get what they deserve. I hope you find someone suitable to take this case. Kind Regards, Amanj
Dear HR, My name is
Amanj
Ibrahim and
I
am employed
by
Claibon
Property Services. I am writing to you to expose the
work
environment at The Tower concerning the male
staff
members
namely
Peter, Paul, Rashid, Luis,
Abdel
, Antonio, and
Miroslav
who
act
shamefully
towards
women
by displaying
sexual
aggression such as staring at their
body
with lust as
well
as ogling nonstop whether it’s
work
colleagues (temp
staff)
,
residents
, visitors,
cleaners
, letting agents etc.
.
.
The
doorman
staff
members
Abdel
, Antonio, and
Miroslav
are
constantly
on the lookout for any female person to be
seen
on the premise and aim to
stop
her by enforcing their ill intentions of having an interaction with her even for a
moment
. They consider their workplace a sex shop where attractive
women
tend to be
seen
daily and as result of that
get
carried away. There’s no level of professionalism or ethics in place they mix business with pleasure. Not a single employee at The Tower I have worked with has any sort of integrity or dignity in any shape or form. The worst part is all of them are all married and have kids except Peter
who
has a girlfriend with no kids. I have felt disgusted and enraged at
times
by what I witnessed during my
time
at The Tower. Peter and Paul are the two leading figures
who
watch
over any female soul they
see
on a daily basis. The two of them
make
inappropriate gestures such as
body
language to highlight a woman's appealing
body
parts. No attractive
woman
could ever stand or
talk
to the
concierge
without being
visually
harassed. It
gets
even worse; I heard Peter myself how he overheard a
resident
named
Alexandros
Kontos
apartment
170 on the phone having intercourse with his girlfriend whilst he tried to contact him and shared it with his colleague Luis at that
time and
they both continued to listen to the act and
thoroughly
enjoyed it. Peter
just
like Paul
also
stares
at younger
women
and
makes
sexual
comments and
uses
body
language to signal his partners in crime Paul and
Miroslav
that he liked what he
saw
.
Absolutely
despicable
behaviours
. I
am lost
for words
especially
someone like Paul
who
turns 60 years this
year
and
is married
and has children. He has no shame at all he hits on younger
women
,
age
is completely irrelevant to him
apparently
. I
know
that he’s
got
a daughter
who
is 28 years of
age
and I have
seen
him
stare
in a
very
sexually
way at
women
much younger than his daughter, teenage girls as
young
as 18 years of age. I can name quite a few
residents
who
are
being harassed
by the
staff
members such as Paul, Peter,
Abdel
, Antonio and Luis. One of the standout
residents
who
receives
a lot of
attention from them is a
young
Russian
lady
age
21 in
apartment
122
lives
by herself. Peter, Paul and Antonio are
constantly
staring at her as if she's ready and available for any of them. Antonio
told
me once that
she
tried to approach him in the past
who
is over 20 years older than her. That’s the sort of sickening mindset they all have at
work
any simple polite gesture by a
woman
is interpreted
the
wrong
way. I
know
for a fact that the
young
Russian
lady
is
well
aware of it and I noticed that
she
never engages in any conversation with them
she
only
greets them by saying “hello” and “thank you” while they
make
sexual
comments such as nice tan, nice jacket, nice outfit, you look
good
today
etc.
.
She
doesn't like a single one of them
especially
Paul
who
always tries to
get
her attention even if
she
isn’t look his way on purpose, he'll say something to her anyway. Peter, Rashid, Antonio and Luis always
stare
at her in a
sexual
way and
she
doesn't like it.
But
like the majority of
women
out there
she
won't mention anything to anyone except her
close
friends
as it’s a sensitive topic
who
in fact act the same way as her with the
concierge
which is “
COLD
and NOT interested in talking to you. ”
Furthermore
in regards to
ethically
questionable
behaviours
from the
concierge
team, another
resident
a
young
lady
named
Kiana
, Paul goes crazy whenever he
sees
Kiara,
talks
about her booty how
well rounded
and
beautiful
it is he even involves
other
residents
to discuss her standout
body
features,
apartment
205
Minoo
Sabet
who
dresses quite
elegantly
at
times and
they
stare
at her
but
she
ignores
them,
apartment
100 a
young
gentleman named Francis
who
has
many
young
women
come
visit him and Paul loses his mind whenever he
sees
one of them he
gets
off his chair to
send
them to the
apartment
, he has no shame at all. I remember an incident last
year
when he went out of control and almost passed out due to excitement seeing two
young
ladies
flaunt their figure in the lobby and Francis was present at that
time
as
well
. The
ladies
laughed at him for being silly and uncontrollable. I felt embarrassed I wanted to
apologise
to them and ask them to avoid the
concierge
in future visit. I was planning to speak to Francis’s
friends
and advise them to
ignore
Paul and bypass him using the car park basement lift
instead
to access the
apartment
I
have
also
witnessed on numerous occasions how Peter and Paul
talk
about
apartment
60 Natalia and her breast in discreet even while
she’s
standing in front of them. The
moment
she
looked away they signal each
other
and even whisper
silently
as well
.
Abdel
the
doorman
is chasing any
woman
particularly
the
cleaners
who
got
many
clients and follows them when they enter the premise and has made his ill intentions
well
known amongst his colleagues
especially
the
other
doorman
Antonio
who
has
told
me in person that he can
get
any
woman
he wants at the Tower.
Abdel
is
apparently
looking for his second wife and, in his mind, it could be any
woman
he encounters at
work
since he
uses
his position to
get
close
to a
woman
and always engages in
small
talks
which I noticed
makes
some
women
feel
slightly
uncomfortable. He harassed a
friend
of mine from my agency and I emailed the management about it.
She
refused to
come
forward and give a statement as
she’s
shy and lacks the courage to
talk
about it which is understandable. He targets vulnerable
women and
he always hangs out in the lobby where he can interact with
women
rather
than stand outside and provide valet parking to the
residents
which is his job in the
first
place.
But
he forces his way to
get
close
to any
woman
he wants to sleep with in his mind. I spoke to
Sylwia
who
is one of the
well
known
cleaners
that manages
many
apartments
at the Tower and
told
her that
Abdel
must
not follow her under any circumstances and offer her a lift when
she
enters the building as his job is to STAND OUTSIDE.
She
thanked me for telling her that as
she
wasn’t aware of his position at The Tower and the
next
few days, I paid
close
attention to his reaction he
kept
looking at her
sexually
and wondered why
she
doesn't
talk
to him.
She
knows
he's a creep
but
maybe
she
didn't want to be rude to him all these
times
he followed her and
insisted to be
the one to
send
her up which was my job or the
concierge
. My email about him was pin point accurate if he
saw
it he
knows
I
must
have
watched
him
closely
as that was a
very
detailed statement about his character. His accomplices at
work
know
that as
well
but
they will never throw him under the bus
because
if he goes the rest
go with
him
eventually
. The
doorman
Miroslav
and Antonio disappear during the shift for a long period of
time
and
some of the
residents
on several occasions
were annoyed
that no one is available to park their car or
get
the car out for them. All they seem to focus and care about are
women
if there is no
beautiful
woman
to be
seen
they vanish it’s as simple as that. That's
also
a,
major factor why they go to
work
as none of them deliver an excellent service to the
residents
. They hardly do anything for them and
some
residents
are aware of as
well
ALL MALE WORKERS at The Tower are
sexually
driven to
meet
women
I do not understand how, why or
who
interviewed them as they lack basic ethics such as being respectful and caring for others and their
loved
ones. Any
good looking
woman
regardless of her
age
is being
watched
and talked about it the
moment
they lay their eyes on her. That place is an absolute shambles no amount of punishment will be
enough
. I asked my agency not to
send
me back there ever again
because
of these horrible
events
I had to endure. I hope you DO NOT
make
the mistake by asking your unqualified and unreliable employees if there's any truth to what I have stated
because
that's how my statement in August
was discarded
by Frank
who
shared it with the
wrong
people
that deserve to
be sacked
with immediate effect.
I
am pretty sure Frank didn't approach the
cleaners
to find out if
Abdel
actually does follow them on a regular basis or even attempted to observe his
behaviour
for a while
before
he came to a conclusion. He might as
well
have gone to
Abdel
and
showed
him my email and dismissed it right then taking his word over mine.
Only
the temps from
Claibon
or certain
residents
can
be trusted
and give you honest feedback. I wish the
residents
could sew through my eyes the horrendous things I experienced. If
only
they
saw
their true nature the
very
moment
someone’s wife, daughter, sister, cousin,
friend
and girlfriend weren’t facing them and if they were able to
watch
their reaction and overhear the comments made towards them. Disgrace No Words! There’s justice in this
world and
I am confident that they’ll
get
what they deserve. I hope you find someone suitable to take this case. Kind Regards,
Amanj
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