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In some countries, small town center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the advantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

In some countries, small town center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the advantages of this change outweigh its advantages? GW99j
Nowadays an increasing number of people are tending to shop at large stores that are located out of towns rather than small shops in the town centre. Consequently, more and more smaller stores are forced to shut down and also people who don't own a car have gotten into trouble for accessing to out-of-town shops. Although there are few benefits I think the disadvantages are much more considerable. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will explain some benefits and demerits of this phenomena. To begin with, smaller stores which are located in town centre are threatened with closure, due to the fact that their previous customers now tend to shop at large multi-purpose shops out of the town. To put it differently, it will damage the economy of nation in long-term. In addition, people who are not in possession a car are put to great inconvenience because most of shops in town centre are closed and they are forced to go to the marginal area to buy their needs. It wastes a large quantity of their money and time which could be used for much more beneficial activities. Another predicament is that increasing car usage will enhance the pollution emitted from cars and make the air more and more unhealthy. On the other hand, however, constructing large shopping malls out of the city may draw the population out of the cities. That is to say, people may be encouraged to accommodate in such marginal areas which is near shopping centres. Subsequently the problem of population congestion in cities may be solved to some extent. To conclude, although constructing large shopping centres out of cities may draw people's attention to accommodate there and this will reduce the demand for housing inside the cities, the drawbacks of this phenomena such as air pollution, wasting time and money and economical damage to local small shops will absolutely outweigh the disadvantages.
Nowadays an increasing number of
people
are tending to
shop
at
large
stores that
are located
out of
towns
rather
than
small
shops
in the
town
centre
.
Consequently
, more and
more smaller
stores
are forced
to shut down and
also
people
who don't
own
a
car
have gotten into trouble for accessing to out-of-town
shops
.
Although
there are few benefits I
think
the disadvantages are much more considerable. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will
explain
some
benefits and demerits of
this
phenomena. To
begin
with, smaller stores which
are located
in
town
centre
are threatened
with closure, due to the fact that their previous customers
now
tend to
shop
at
large
multi-purpose
shops
out of the
town
. To put it
differently
, it will damage the economy of nation in long-term.
In addition
,
people
who are not in possession a
car
are put
to great inconvenience
because
most of
shops
in
town
centre
are
closed and
they
are forced
to go to the marginal area to
buy
their needs. It wastes a
large
quantity of their money and time which could be
used
for much more beneficial activities. Another predicament is that increasing
car
usage will enhance the pollution emitted from
cars
and
make
the air more and more unhealthy.
On the other hand
,
however
, constructing
large
shopping malls out of the city may draw the population out of the
cities
.
That is
to say,
people
may
be encouraged
to accommodate in such marginal areas which is near shopping
centres
.
Subsequently
the problem of population congestion in
cities
may
be solved
to
some
extent.
To conclude
, although constructing
large
shopping
centres
out of
cities
may draw
people
's attention to accommodate there and this will
reduce
the demand for housing inside the
cities
, the drawbacks of
this
phenomena such as air pollution, wasting time and money and economical damage to local
small
shops
will
absolutely
outweigh the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay In some countries, small town center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the advantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

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