leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology had made them less creative, do you agree or disagree?
leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology had made them less creative,  E9drb
It can be observed that nowadays a creativity and enjoyment from the activities during a free time are not perform as in earlier days by most of the population in the world due to the latest technologies though it is a huge industrial upgradation. I largely agree with the given statement about the decline in leisure. My agreement toward this is explained further with appropriate examples.
It is absolutely true that the modern technologies overlapping the useful and entertaining tasks in recent scenario. The first and the most important thing is that the indoor electrical gadgets are making the people very lazy about any physical by keeping them busy and wasting their time. Moreover, it can narrowing people's mind by regular same activity without any changes and other challenges which can not stimulate the thinking process of person's day to day life.
Furthermore, people involving in the computers and the mobile phones activities constantly can be addicted to that person and due to that they are having lack of socialization in several things like communication, sports activities as well as in the personal life. To add to this, they are also having some physical and psychological health problems like stress, ophthalmic issues because of constant light reflections in eyes and stiffness or laziness. For that the reason is one and only one, which is lack of physical activity with more stress on body.
Whereas, some people also think that using a modern technology is beneficial for information update and knowledge gaining about various things.
To sum up with my agreement that the excessive use of technology and technical things can result increasing in adverse effect on person's health with social and personal relationship both. 
It can 
be observed
 that nowadays a creativity and enjoyment from the 
activities
 during a free time are not 
perform
 as in earlier days by most of the population in the world due to the latest 
technologies
 though it is a huge industrial 
upgradation
. I 
largely
 agree
 with the 
given
 statement about the decline in leisure. My agreement toward this is 
explained
 further
 with appropriate examples.
It is 
absolutely
 true that the modern 
technologies
 overlapping the useful and entertaining tasks in recent scenario. The 
first
 and the most 
important
 thing is that the indoor electrical gadgets are making the 
people
 very
 lazy about any physical by keeping them busy and wasting their time. 
Moreover
, it can 
narrowing
 people
's mind by regular same 
activity
 without any 
changes
 and other challenges which can not stimulate the thinking process of person's 
day to day
 life.
Furthermore
, 
people
 involving in the computers and the mobile phones 
activities
 constantly
 can 
be addicted
 to that person and due to that they are having lack of socialization in several things like communication, sports 
activities
 as well
 as in the personal life. To 
add
 to this, they are 
also
 having 
some
 physical and psychological health problems like 
stress
, ophthalmic issues 
because
 of constant light reflections in eyes and stiffness or laziness. For that the reason is one and 
only
 one, which is lack of physical 
activity
 with more 
stress
 on body.
Whereas, 
some
 people
 also
 think
 that using a modern 
technology
 is beneficial for information update and knowledge gaining about various things.
To sum up with my agreement that the excessive 
use
 of 
technology
 and technical things can result increasing in adverse effect on person's health with social and personal relationship both. 
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