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In this era of information explosion, media is a platform that we use every day and spend much time on them especially during the current Covid-19 pandemic. Media are essential, on the contrary learning how to utilize media is even more. Media plays a significant role particularly in expanding access to education: read book, watching videos, communicate with others who have similar educational goals and interests. 2020 is the era of online learning applications such as Zoom, MS Team, Google Classroom. . . Everyone can watch together the content shown on their own screen. This is similar to studying on class with a huge board or even more convenient: people can record the lesson and review it whenever they want, with subtitle, and they can customize speed. However, media isn’t always good thing depending on how it is used and who it is used by. New media may offer disadvantages for education. For example, students use laptops on taking notes, that’s really commendable. But if instead of taking notes, they surfing web, playing game or chatting, then that’s alarmingly though. There’s a standpoint that the Internet is changing a number of aspects of our lives, from communication to education in two areas: memory and attention. Thanks to media, people nowadays can get the answer almost immediately, and we don’t need to learn and remember them on the grounds that Internet has become our collective memory. Definitely this saves us a plethora of timebutfrankly speaking Internet is forcing me to trade my ability to focus and think for information with wide coverage and rapid speed: In order to find an answer for English question, i regularly abused the English translation tools. In contrast, a major drawback of this method is my vocabulary isn’t enriched and consolidated. In the next turn I have to translate it again consequently basically, learning English or any new languages becomes meaningless. Media allows users to multitask, which mean they can do several things concurrently. Just like while reading this article, are you opening 4-5 different tabs at the same time, checking mail and listening to music? Nevertheless, many studies have also concluded that multitasking will reduce work efficiency by 40%. You won’t be able to fully focus on anything, and also be more prone to mistakes and more time-consuming to correct. In an era where time seems to be shortening and workload is increasing, we must learn to respond to multiple messages, to manage massive amounts of information, to make connections, and to decide what is critical. Choose for yourself a smart way of working, instead of forcing yourself to “multitasking”. It can’t be denied that, media is among the wonderful invention of modern life to. With full features to help people connect with each other, process information faster and save more time. Does media can harm us? Unfortunately yes. But does it help us in various ways? Yes, also. So my opinion is we need to learn how to use media properly. “Just as tools, language, and literacy helped early human beings survive long ago, technology may help human beings survive into the future”.
In this era of
information
explosion,
media
is a platform that we
use
every day and spend much
time
on them
especially
during the
current
Covid-19 pandemic.
Media
are essential,
on the contrary
learning how to utilize
media
is even more. Media plays a significant role
particularly
in expanding access to education: read book, watching videos, communicate with others who have similar educational goals and interests. 2020 is the era of online learning applications such as Zoom, MS Team, Google Classroom.
.
.
Everyone can
watch
together the content shown on their
own
screen. This is similar to studying on
class
with a huge board or even more convenient:
people
can record the lesson and review it whenever they want, with subtitle, and they can customize speed.
However
,
media
isn’t always
good
thing depending on how it is
used
and who it is
used
by. New
media
may offer disadvantages for education.
For example
, students
use
laptops on taking notes, that’s
really
commendable.
But
if
instead
of taking notes,
they surfing
web, playing game or chatting, then that’s
alarmingly
though. There’s a standpoint that the Internet is changing a number of aspects of our
lives
, from communication to education in two areas: memory and attention. Thanks to
media
,
people
nowadays can
get
the answer almost immediately, and we don’t need to learn and remember them on the grounds that Internet has become our collective memory. Definitely this saves us a plethora of
timebutfrankly
speaking Internet is forcing me to trade my ability to focus and
think
for
information
with wide coverage and rapid speed: In order to find an answer for English question,
i
regularly
abused the English translation tools.
In contrast
, a major drawback of this method is my vocabulary isn’t enriched and consolidated. In the
next
turn I
have to
translate it again
consequently
basically
, learning English or any new languages becomes meaningless. Media
allows
users to multitask, which mean they can do several things
concurrently
.
Just
like while reading this article, are you opening 4-5
different
tabs at the same
time
, checking mail and listening to music?
Nevertheless
,
many
studies have
also
concluded that multitasking will
reduce
work efficiency by 40%. You won’t be able to
fully
focus on anything, and
also
be more prone to mistakes and more time-consuming to correct. In an era where
time
seems to be shortening and workload is increasing, we
must
learn to respond to multiple messages, to manage massive amounts of
information
, to
make
connections, and to decide what is critical. Choose for yourself a smart way of working,
instead
of forcing yourself to “multitasking”. It can’t
be denied
that,
media
is among the wonderful invention of modern life to. With full features to
help
people
connect with each other, process
information
faster and save more
time
. Does
media
can harm us? Unfortunately yes.
But
does it
help
us in various ways? Yes,
also
.
So
my opinion is we need to learn how to
use
media
properly
. “
Just
as tools, language, and literacy
helped
early human beings survive long ago, technology may
help
human beings survive into the future”.
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