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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishment should parents

It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents Xw63r
Nowadays, to give proper education to kids about what is right and wrong is very much crucial. Because proper knowledge to children about the right and wrong things will lean them to become greater personality in the human society and also provide them respect. But to do so, usually parents and teachers are using the way of giving regular punishments to keep in mind that it will give them discipline. Well, I totally disagree with this opinion. And my justification are in the further paragraph. Early age kids are so much light in mind, on the other way They have not the proper knowledge of the right and wrong things that made by the human brains, as they just started their life and learn the things. For example, when kids comes for the lunch, they don't know that after completing the lunch, their dishes should be putting in the wash basin, this is called manner which usually use them afterwards. But without teaching them proper manner, directly giving them punishment for not doing this things is completely wrong. Even sometimes it will lead them giving bad habit to not put the things to their proper destination as their mind is still in learning phase. They are not enough mentally mature, and parents and teacher have the responsibility to teach them in the right manner Going forward to this topic, Early age is for the children to growing their mental capacity of choosing what is right and wrong to certain level by giving them proper education in each segment by the family members and their teachers. As earlier told, punishment will break this chain. If the early age kids do something wrong, it is their role to teach them right things. Researchers from International Mental Society from USA found out that any bad setbacks by parents or teacher while learning their kids a proper manner of what is right and wrong in society by giving them punishment all the times, those children will become more stubborn and are actually a real threat for the society because the wrong impression will always lasts for younger kids. But there are some punishment which is actually very good for the kids to learn good things like when they usually do something wrong, give there are some punishment which is actually very good for the kids to learn good things like when they usually do something wrong, give them a punishment to clean the house or helping the person or family members compulsarily for a day and it will also give them lesson to do something right always. Also Schools in Japan, teachers usually gives light punishment to themself like not speaking with students for a day if they do something wrong, because that will give students some mental shock to do always right things otherwise their teacher not speaks to them. It is by the way good punishment for the early age kids to learn them the differences. To conclude this topic, I firmly believe that early age students are very less informative about learning differences between human made right or wrong things and so, parents and teachers have to work together by by giving them proper knowledge of right things but not giving hard punishment everytime as it will at the end gives them wrong impression and will become more stubborn to learn right things.
Nowadays, to
give
proper
education to
kids
about what is
right
and
wrong
is
very
much crucial.
Because
proper
knowledge to children about the
right
and
wrong
things will lean them to become greater personality in the human
society
and
also
provide them respect.
But
to do
so
,
usually
parents
and
teachers
are using the way of
giving
regular
punishments
to
keep
in mind that it will
give
them discipline. Well, I
totally
disagree with this opinion. And my justification are in the
further
paragraph.
Early
age
kids
are
so
much light in mind, on the other way They have not the
proper
knowledge of the
right
and
wrong
things that made by the human brains, as they
just
started
their life and
learn
the things.
For example
, when
kids
comes
for the lunch, they don't know that after completing the lunch, their dishes should be putting in the wash basin, this
is called
manner
which
usually
use
them afterwards.
But
without teaching them
proper
manner
,
directly
giving
them
punishment
for not doing
this
things is completely
wrong
. Even
sometimes
it will lead them
giving
bad
habit to not put the things to their
proper
destination as their mind is
still
in learning phase. They are not
enough
mentally mature, and
parents
and
teacher
have the responsibility to teach them in the
right
manner
Going forward to this topic,
Early
age
is for the children to growing their mental capacity of choosing what is
right
and
wrong
to certain level by
giving
them
proper
education in each segment by the family members and their
teachers
. As earlier
told
,
punishment
will break this chain. If the
early
age
kids
do
something
wrong
, it is their role to teach them
right
things. Researchers from International Mental
Society
from USA
found out that any
bad
setbacks by
parents
or
teacher
while learning their
kids
a
proper
manner
of what is
right
and
wrong
in
society
by
giving
them
punishment
all the times, those children will become more stubborn and are actually a real threat for the
society
because
the
wrong
impression will always
lasts
for younger
kids
.
But
there are
some
punishment
which is actually
very
good
for the
kids
to
learn
good
things like when they
usually
do
something
wrong
,
give
there are
some
punishment
which is actually
very
good
for the
kids
to
learn
good
things like when they
usually
do
something
wrong
,
give
them a
punishment
to clean the
house
or helping the person or family members
compulsarily
for a day and it will
also
give
them lesson to do
something
right
always.
Also
Schools in Japan,
teachers
usually
gives
light
punishment
to
themself
like not speaking with students for a day if they do
something
wrong
,
because
that will
give
students
some
mental shock to do always
right
things
otherwise
their
teacher
not speaks to them. It is by the way
good
punishment
for the
early
age
kids
to
learn
them the differences.
To conclude
this topic, I
firmly
believe that
early
age
students are
very
less informative about learning differences between human made
right
or
wrong
things and
so
,
parents
and
teachers
have to
work together
by by
giving
them
proper
knowledge of
right
things
but
not
giving
hard
punishment
everytime
as it will at the
end
gives
them
wrong
impression and will become more stubborn to
learn
right
things.
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