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The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report.

The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report. W61bW
The pie chart displays the proportion of top job position held by people, categorised into five different races. While, the bar chart shows the comparison based on two different sector public and private. Both charts based on a report about South Africa in 2015/16. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, highest proportion of white people were contributing in top management level and over-presented in private job sector whereas the African occupy ytterbium majority of top positions in public sector jobs. The given pie chart depicts that, foreign national, coloured, and Indian people were less interested in top management jobs, which was 3. 50%, 4. 70% and 8. 60%, respectively. Further, African accounted for 14. 3 percent of those jobs. In addition, the most striking feature of this pie chart is that, largest amount of positions in top management level from the white people, which was accounted for 68. 90%. Regarding the bar chart, African took over more than 73% of public job positions and almost equal figure seen for white people in private jobs. Moreover, there was a minority position in private jobs from African individuals as well as white people less contribute in public sector jobs. The Indian, coloured and foreign national citizens least contributed in private jobs. Lastly, the least proportion of foreign nation’s individuals have public sector jobs, it was about 0. 40%.
The pie
chart
displays the proportion of
top
job
position
held by
people
,
categorised
into five
different
races. While, the bar
chart
shows
the comparison based on two
different
sector
public
and
private
. Both
charts
based on a report about South Africa in 2015/16.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
that,
highest
proportion of
white
people
were contributing in
top
management level and over-presented in
private
job
sector
whereas the African occupy ytterbium majority of
top
positions
in
public
sector
jobs. The
given
pie
chart
depicts that, foreign national,
coloured
, and Indian
people
were less interested in
top
management
jobs
, which was 3. 50%, 4. 70% and 8. 60%,
respectively
.
Further
, African accounted for 14. 3 percent of those
jobs
.
In addition
, the most striking feature of this pie
chart
is that,
largest
amount of
positions
in
top
management level from the
white
people
, which
was accounted
for 68. 90%. Regarding the bar
chart
, African took over more than 73% of
public
job
positions
and almost equal figure
seen
for
white
people
in
private
jobs
.
Moreover
, there was a minority
position
in
private
jobs
from African individuals
as well
as
white
people
less contribute in
public
sector
jobs
. The Indian,
coloured
and foreign national citizens least contributed in
private
jobs
.
Lastly
, the least proportion of foreign nation’s individuals have
public
sector
jobs
, it was about 0. 40%.
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