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I suffered from a very raging fever

I suffered from a very raging fever NLqXg
It is well known that “Health is wealth”. Everyone needs a good health and this is the precondition for a happy life. But once, when I was ten years old, I suffered from a very raging fever. If I remember exactly, it was on Monday morning. When I was studying Math at school, I felt severe headache, persistent vomiting, difficulty breathing and so hot. I was so tired that I fell asleep in class. My teacher was nervous, woke me up and called my parents go to school for taking me to the doctor. Then my parents took me the doctor, he measured my temperature was 40, 5*C. My parents were so nervous for me and asked the doctor so much. He said some reasons cause a fever to my parents. The doctor talked them not to be worried. He said that fever was the body's normal and healthy reaction to infection and other illnesses, both minor and serious. It helped the body fight infection. Fever was a symptom, not a disease. When I had a fever, my other symptoms helped me determine how serious my illness was. After listening what he said, my parents became more assured. After that the doctor took my parents some medicines, advices and treatments. We said goodbye to the doctor and came back home. Fever lasted 6 days, came and gone, and gradually reduced over time was usually not a cause for concern. During the entire period of fever, I felt tired, lacked energy, and not ate as much as usual. High fevers was not comfortable, but they didn’t cause serious problems for me. My parents were always beside me and helped me a lot. They fed me like a little kid and did all the other necessary activities. I was completely recovered in the 6th day and could go to school. It was a lesson for me and I have protected my health better.
It is well known that “Health is wealth”. Everyone needs a
good
health and this is the precondition for a happy life.
But
once, when I was ten years
old
, I suffered from a
very
raging fever. If I remember exactly, it was on Monday morning. When I was studying Math at school, I felt severe headache, persistent vomiting, difficulty breathing and
so
hot. I was
so
tired that I fell asleep in
class
. My teacher was nervous, woke me up and called my
parents
go to school for taking me to the
doctor
. Then my
parents
took me the
doctor
, he measured my temperature was 40,
5*C
. My
parents
were
so
nervous for me and asked the
doctor
so
much. He said
some
reasons cause a
fever
to my
parents
. The
doctor
talked them not to
be worried
. He said that
fever
was the body's normal and healthy reaction to infection and other illnesses, both minor and serious. It
helped
the body fight infection.
Fever
was a symptom, not a disease. When I had a
fever
, my other symptoms
helped
me determine how serious my illness was. After listening what he said, my
parents
became more assured. After that the
doctor
took my
parents
some
medicines, advices and treatments. We said goodbye to the
doctor
and came back home. Fever lasted 6 days, came and gone, and
gradually
reduced
over time was
usually
not a cause for concern. During the entire period of
fever
, I felt tired, lacked energy, and not ate as much as usual. High
fevers
was not comfortable,
but
they didn’t cause serious problems for me. My
parents
were always beside me and
helped
me a lot. They fed me like a
little
kid and did all the other necessary activities. I was completely recovered in the 6th day and could go to school. It was a lesson for me and I have protected my health better.
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