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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 0aNy9
I think that it was a positive. Because we could extended when in our big family have many people and it gonna be hard when it was like about more than 30 person live in a house. It gonna be easier for doing work when we live in a small family. When we live in a small family we can traveling a lot of place with just about 5 - 9 people. Dont need to do like the whole big family must go together when anyone celebration a party. We can visit another small family in our big family if we have time to visit them. Even it mean that when we extended our big family so we can't talk or meet each other but we can still call and chatting with a lot of apps or websites. When we going and travel a place we just need to buy ticket for about 5 - 9 people in a small family. We don't need to pay to much. But it gonna be bored than in a big family but sometimes in the big family it wasn't be fun than in a small family. When we extended into a small family it gonna be happier when we celebrate a holiday that everyone see each other in a big family. Because after along time we haven't meet each other so it gonna be happier than everyday we meet everyone and it gonna be bored. I think that we should extended into a small family.
I
think
that it was a
positive
.
Because
we could
extended
when in our
big
family
have
many
people
and it
gonna
be
hard
when it was like about more than 30
person
live
in a
house
. It
gonna
be easier for doing work when we
live
in a
small
family
. When we
live
in a
small
family
we can
traveling
a lot of
place with
just
about
5 - 9
people
.
Dont
need to do like the whole
big
family
must
go together when anyone celebration a party. We can visit another
small
family
in our
big
family
if we have time to visit them. Even it mean that when we
extended
our
big
family
so
we can't talk or
meet
each other
but
we can
still
call and chatting with
a lot of
apps or websites. When
we going
and travel a place we
just
need to
buy
ticket for about
5 - 9
people
in a
small
family
. We don't need to pay
to
much.
But
it
gonna
be bored
than in a
big
family
but
sometimes
in the
big
family
it wasn't be
fun
than in a
small
family
. When we
extended
into a
small
family
it
gonna
be happier when we celebrate a holiday that everyone
see
each other in a
big
family
.
Because
after
along time
we haven't
meet
each other
so
it
gonna
be happier than everyday we
meet
everyone and it
gonna
be bored
. I
think
that we should
extended
into a
small
family
.
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