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If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.

If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. LDJE6

What kind of norms are used to define the boundary of goal of mankind? The dream of Hitler to be a great German empire__can it be said as a goal of worth to attain with any means? To end second world war, dropping nuclear bomb to Nagaski and Heroshima by American airforce__can it be defined as a worth goal by its means? Some animals must not be more privileged than others, if not, the world filled with self serving biases will be like the animal farm in the story by George Orwell. A society cannot stand itself. Some extent of relation__by means of economics or by means of common belief, by mean of defence__ are interdependent. From the onset of civilization, human being have waged heinous wars based on different kind of goals such as political belief, religious belief. AD 11 century, the first king of Myanmar, Anayawtha made a provocative war invading a small nation named Thaton by the reason of spreading Buddhism. He rob so many precious state treasure, moved out numerous professional from variety of sectors and also chain the king and held as house arrest. It is difficult to say that everything we did we want is right because self biases of men is always a best defender. In the name of God, what we do wrong deed, can it not be said a righteous action. A goal that doesn't stain the warfare of other should be attained with any means. But today world, the fashional words, "democracy, human rights, freedom " are abundantly used in many contexts. United Nation, as a prominent example, have used the elite words so many decades. But nothing is vividly achieved except of the statement of concerning. Sooner did its closed meeting open then Russia invaded the sovereign country, Ukraine. Nothing can he do. Within having complicated debate to release a metaphorical hope___ a strong condemned statement, endless Coups have outbreaked across the continent. Nothing can he do. So the colourful goals that is worth or not to comply with any means totally depend on how extent of self interest is applied.

What kind of norms are used
 to define the boundary of goal
 of mankind? The dream of Hitler to be a great German empire__can it be said
 as a goal
 of worth to attain with any means
? To end
 second world war, dropping nuclear bomb to Nagaski and Heroshima by American airforce__can it be defined
 as a worth goal
 by its means
? Some
 animals must
 not be more privileged than others, if not, the world filled with self serving biases will be like the animal farm in the story by George Orwell.

A society cannot stand itself. Some
 extent of relation__by means
 of economics or by means
 of common belief, by mean
 of defence__ are interdependent. From the onset of civilization, human being have waged heinous wars based on different
 kind of goals
 such as political belief, religious belief.

AD 11 century, the first
 king of Myanmar, Anayawtha made a provocative war invading a small
 nation named Thaton by the reason of spreading Buddhism. He rob so
many
 precious state treasure, moved
 out numerous professional from variety of sectors and also
 chain the king and held as house
 arrest. It is difficult to say that everything we did we want is right because
 self biases of men
 is always a best defender. In the name of God, what we do wrong
 deed, can it not be said
 a righteous action.

A goal
 that doesn't stain the warfare of other should be attained
 with any means
. But
today
 world, the fashional words, "democracy, human rights, freedom " are abundantly
used
 in many
 contexts. United Nation, as a prominent example, have used
 the elite words so
many
 decades. But
 nothing is vividly
 achieved except of the statement of concerning. Sooner did its closed meeting open then Russia invaded the sovereign country, Ukraine. Nothing can he do. Within having complicated debate to release a metaphorical hope___ a strong condemned statement, endless Coups have outbreaked across the continent. Nothing can he do. So
 the colourful goals
that is
 worth or not to comply with any means
totally
 depend on how extent of self interest is applied
. 

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