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Designer Babies to Order

Designer Babies to Order 9GrMW
1 / 1 In the year of 2018, Cecile Janssens wrote an article named “Designer Babies to Order” about designer babies. Molly Nash had a disease named Fanconi Anemia; therefore, their parents needed a donor match. Their brother Adam Nash was an embryo in a lab, after they got DNA tested and vitro fertilized, this process did bring a lot of concerns. Designer baby relates to the change of the traits in the baby, however, it never happened, and scientists are not even close make it happen. It will not ever be possible to design and predict the DNA. In 1978, the first IVF baby has born, and the “designer baby” idea got popular. Years after, a clinic offered sex selection. In year 2013, a genomic company granted a patent that predicts likely traits of a baby based on the DNAs of the parents. 3 years later, a women donated her mitochondria to a couple using IVF, it triggered the fear of “unnatural children”. However, no one is questioning is only genes determines diseases and it led to a misunderstanding of how DNA and genome works. DNA usually differs in two ways: with mutations which causes rare diseases with a single cell -without mutations women can still develop breast cancer-; or/and with variations which are changes in the genetic code and they are more common than mutations, however, it only increases the risk of developing a disease, it is not what causing it. “Designer babies” needs so many DNA changes in multiple genes. In addition, “desirable” genes may cause bad consequences because a gene may bring a vulnerability to other diseases. I totally disagree with the statement of “Every parent should have the right to select their child’s gender and traits. As the article reports, it is highly unethical and concerning to intervene the DNA in many ways. To illustrate He Jiankui’s gene edited babies were resistant to HIV, however, they might have increased the risk of West Nile virus and Influenza. Moreover, some genes such as MC1R comes with multiple possibilities. This gene is called “red hair” gene, it increases of the skin cancer risk. Red hair should not be a reason to give children a risk of cancer. Not only in traits, but also gender selection comes with its own risks. For instance, every gender has a different risk profile, women have a higher risk of breast cancer than man. Just because a parent wants to raise a girl, it doesn’t give them a right to add a severe risk to an individual’s life. I believe it is highly unethical.
1 / 1 In the
year
of 2018, Cecile
Janssens
wrote an article named
“Designer
Babies
to Order” about
designer
babies
. Molly Nash had a
disease
named
Fanconi
Anemia;
therefore
, their
parents
needed a donor match. Their brother Adam Nash was an embryo in a lab, after they
got
DNA
tested
and
vitro
fertilized, this process did bring
a lot of
concerns.
Designer
baby relates to the
change
of the
traits
in the baby,
however
, it never happened, and scientists are not even close
make
it happen. It will not ever be possible to design and predict the DNA. In 1978, the
first
IVF baby has born, and the
“designer
baby”
idea
got
popular. Years after, a clinic offered sex selection. In
year
2013, a genomic
company
granted a patent that predicts likely
traits
of a baby based on the
DNAs
of the
parents
. 3 years later,
a women
donated her mitochondria to a couple using IVF, it triggered the fear of “unnatural children”.
However
, no one is questioning is
only
genes determines
diseases
and it led to a misunderstanding of how DNA and genome works. DNA
usually
differs in two ways: with mutations which causes rare
diseases
with a single cell -without mutations women can
still
develop breast
cancer-
; or/and with variations which are
changes
in the genetic
code and
they are more common than mutations,
however
, it
only
increases the
risk
of developing a
disease
, it is not what causing it.
“Designer
babies”
needs
so
many
DNA
changes
in multiple genes.
In addition
, “desirable” genes may cause
bad
consequences
because
a gene may bring a vulnerability to other diseases. I
totally
disagree with the statement of “Every
parent
should have the right to select their child’s gender and
traits
. As the article reports, it is
highly
unethical and concerning to intervene the DNA in
many
ways. To illustrate He
Jiankui
’s gene edited
babies
were resistant to HIV,
however
, they might have increased the
risk
of West Nile virus and Influenza.
Moreover
,
some
genes such as MC1R
comes
with multiple possibilities. This gene
is called
“red hair” gene, it increases of the skin
cancer
risk
. Red hair should not be a reason to give children a
risk
of
cancer
. Not
only
in
traits
,
but
also
gender selection
comes
with its
own
risks
.
For instance
, every gender has a
different
risk
profile, women have a higher
risk
of breast
cancer
than
man
.
Just
because
a
parent
wants to raise a girl, it doesn’t give them a right to
add
a severe
risk
to an individual’s life. I believe it is
highly
unethical.
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