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Civil rights movement - Rosa Parks

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The man’s shoes crunched through the powdered snow. They detonated like Christmas crackers every time his feet hit the ground. The world around him was imprisoned in a glair-white silence Snow steadily descended and glistened the congested streets of Montgomery, Alabama. The lambent lights covered the town creating joy and a sense of euphoria. The man dressed in an all-black dapper suit, squinted, and tired brown eyes with a compact black briefcase on his way back to his work after a brief lunchbreak. Dull and emotionless, Kevin is a meticulous and introverted person, however regarded as ‘the finest lawyer in town’. Kevin has lived his entire forty-four years in Montgomery and is born into a conservative and traditional family. Upper-class and well-educated, Kevin’s family is a high achieving and successful family, well-known throughout the town. Frantically making his way back to his bus stop he takes a moment to stop and read the vibrant graffiti that engulfed the city buses. Racial remarks and racial slurs splattered over the front of the buses. ‘Only whites up here’ A commonly found sentence in Montgomery that truly represented the racial tension within Alabama. Kevin took a seat at the bus stop and checked his Blancpain watch in panic as he was running late for work. Buses proceeded by however, no sign of the 221 bus that he routinely caught every day. Finally, after twenty-five everlasting minutes of waiting the bus finally arrived at the stop. Kevin frantically hopped onto the bus and was greeted by an older substitute driver. ‘Sorry Kevin the bus was late the depot was quite disorganised this morning, take a seat. ’ Kevin replied bitterly; ‘doesn’t change the fact I’m going to be late this morning, does it sir? ’ Added to his vexation, there were no seats available on the bus and was forced to stand. Kevin glanced across the bus and noticed something peculiar, a middle-aged black lady seated on the fifth row of the bus. ‘Excuse me …. lady, the line moves back now as I got on the bus, take your belongings, and head up the back now. ’ The lady replied: ‘No. ’ Her voice echoed throughout the bus as people stare at this lady with wide open eyes that couldn’t shut, complete paralysis in everyone’s eyes. The bus had pulled over and stopped at an instant. Time froze. An unprecedented response. The bus driver sprung out of his seat and flounced down the aisle of the bus as his footsteps thumped down the bus aisle. In raucous voice the bus driver screamed ‘Get up now and move to the back or we will have serious problems, do you understand me woman? ’ The lady stood up and stared directly into the bus driver’s soul with a hostile glare and said; ‘My name is not woman; my name is Rosa. I got on the bus at Prattville and took a seat and that’s not going to change, okay? ’ Tension slowly intoxicated the bus and rage filled the bus drivers face. Rosa pulled out her phone and proceeded to ignore the bus driver blatantly while the bus was halted in complete silence. The bus driver towered over Rosa, fear spread all throughout Rosa’s body and she shrivelled into a prawn. The bus driver aggressively snatched the lady’s phone from her hand and hurled it across the bus, shattering the phone into thousands of shards of glass spread across the bus floor. The situation escalated. Violence jumped into the situation in a flash. Rosa leaped out of her seat darting down the aisle of the bus in desperate rescue of an irremediable phone, but before she could the bus driver yanker her back by her hair. Rosa fell down onto her knees in serious agony. ‘If any person on this bus decides to film this, you too will be in the same boat as this scumbag. ’ Exclaimed the bus driver. As Kevin stands there in complete awe and a guilt-ridden face slowly emerges, the situation escalates rapidly. Kevin had been confronted with racist acts throughout his life but never had he experienced the abuse this lady is facing. ‘That’s enough now, that’s enough’ said Kevin in a shy, timid voice. Rosa lay there covered in a pool of blood, half-conscious and a troubled breathing pattern. Kevin rushed out of the bus in desperate search for local police officers on duty. Thousands of thoughts dashing in his head. Finally, he located a police officer off-duty at the café Kevin was at on his lunchbreak. Leading the police officer to this brutal scene motivated by racism. ‘Sir, sir this lady needs help immediately, hurry. ’ ‘What happened? ’ ‘This black lady was beaten up because she didn’t offer me my seat and now, she’s in a really bad condition. Quick! ’ As Kevin sprinted back to the bus, the officer ambled to the bus in his own time with no sign of concern or rush. The officer greeted the bus driver with a handshake and a look of familiarity. A few words were exchanged under their breath and a small grin ended the conversation. The officer strolled up the bus in a suave manner. Rosa gained consciousness. Slowly reaching her feet she found herself in hand cuffs and a tall white man gripping onto her shoulder. She stumbled down the bus like a drunk person barely holding on. People stood-by and watched as the officer arrested this beaten up, half-conscious lady in broad daylight. Kevin watched on closely and spotted the bus driver look-on with a satisfactory smirk. Behind was the people on the bus, phones in hands, all recording. Kevin knew this would be the spark of change. It was.
The
man
’s shoes crunched through the powdered snow. They detonated like Christmas crackers every time his feet hit the ground. The world around him
was imprisoned
in a glair-white silence Snow
steadily
descended and glistened the congested streets of Montgomery, Alabama. The lambent lights covered the town creating joy and a sense of euphoria. The
man
dressed in an all-black dapper suit, squinted, and tired brown eyes with a compact black briefcase on his way
back
to his work after a brief lunchbreak. Dull and emotionless, Kevin is a meticulous and introverted person,
however
regarded as ‘the finest lawyer in town’. Kevin has
lived
his entire forty-four years in Montgomery and
is born
into a conservative and traditional family. Upper-
class
and
well
-educated, Kevin’s family is a high achieving and successful family,
well
-known throughout the town.
Frantically
making his way
back
to his bus
stop
he takes a moment to
stop
and read the vibrant graffiti that engulfed the city buses. Racial remarks and racial slurs splattered over the front of the buses. ‘
Only
whites up here’ A
commonly
found sentence in Montgomery that
truly
represented the racial tension within Alabama. Kevin took a
seat
at the bus
stop
and
checked
his Blancpain
watch
in panic as he was running late for work. Buses proceeded by
however
, no
sign
of the 221 bus that he
routinely
caught every day.
Finally
, after twenty-five everlasting minutes of waiting the bus
finally
arrived at the
stop
. Kevin
frantically
hopped onto the bus and
was greeted
by an older substitute driver. ‘Sorry Kevin the bus was late the depot was quite disorganised this morning, take a
seat
. ’ Kevin replied
bitterly
; ‘doesn’t
change
the fact I’m going to be late this morning, does it sir? ’
Added
to his vexation, there were no
seats
available on the bus and
was forced
to stand. Kevin glanced across the bus and noticed something peculiar, a middle-aged black
lady
seated on the fifth row of the bus. ‘Excuse me ….
lady
, the line
moves
back
now
as I
got
on the bus, take your belongings, and head up the
back
now
. ’ The
lady
replied: ‘No. ’ Her voice echoed throughout the bus as
people
stare at this
lady
with wide open eyes that couldn’t shut, complete paralysis in everyone’s eyes. The bus had pulled over and
stopped
at an instant. Time froze. An unprecedented response. The bus
driver
sprung out of his
seat
and flounced
down
the aisle of the bus as his footsteps thumped
down
the bus aisle. In raucous voice the bus
driver
screamed ‘
Get
up
now
and
move
to the
back
or we will have serious problems, do you understand me woman? ’ The
lady
stood up and stared
directly
into the bus
driver’s
soul with a hostile glare and said; ‘My name is not woman; my name is Rosa. I
got
on the bus at Prattville and took a
seat
and that’s not going to
change
, okay? ’ Tension
slowly
intoxicated the bus and rage filled the bus
drivers
face. Rosa pulled out her
phone
and proceeded to
ignore
the bus
driver
blatantly
while the bus
was halted
in complete silence. The bus
driver
towered over Rosa, fear spread all throughout Rosa’s body and she shrivelled into a prawn. The bus
driver
aggressively
snatched the
lady’s
phone
from her hand and hurled it across the bus, shattering the
phone
into thousands of shards of glass spread across the bus floor. The situation escalated. Violence jumped into the situation in a flash. Rosa leaped out of her
seat
darting
down
the aisle of the bus in desperate rescue of an irremediable
phone
,
but
before
she could the bus
driver
yanker her
back
by her hair. Rosa fell
down
onto her knees in serious agony. ‘If any person on this bus decides to film this, you too will be in the same boat as this scumbag. ’ Exclaimed the bus driver. As Kevin stands there in complete awe and a guilt-ridden face
slowly
emerges, the situation escalates
rapidly
. Kevin had
been confronted
with racist acts throughout his life
but
never had he experienced the abuse this
lady
is facing. ‘That’s
enough
now
, that’s
enough
’ said Kevin in a shy, timid voice. Rosa lay there covered in a pool of blood, half-conscious and a troubled breathing pattern. Kevin rushed out of the bus in desperate search for local police
officers
on duty. Thousands of thoughts dashing in his head.
Finally
, he located a police
officer
off-duty at the café Kevin was at on his lunchbreak. Leading the police
officer
to this brutal scene motivated by racism. ‘Sir, sir this
lady
needs
help
immediately, hurry. ’ ‘What happened? ’ ‘This black
lady
was beaten
up
because
she didn’t offer me my
seat
and
now
, she’s in a
really
bad
condition. Quick! ’ As Kevin sprinted
back
to the bus, the
officer
ambled to the bus in his
own
time with no
sign
of concern or rush. The
officer
greeted the bus
driver
with a handshake and a look of familiarity. A few words
were exchanged
under their breath and a
small
grin ended the conversation. The
officer
strolled up the bus in a suave manner. Rosa gained consciousness.
Slowly
reaching her feet she found herself in hand cuffs and a tall white
man
gripping onto her shoulder. She stumbled
down
the bus like a drunk person
barely
holding on.
People
stood-by and
watched
as the
officer
arrested this beaten up, half-conscious
lady
in broad daylight. Kevin
watched
on
closely
and spotted the bus
driver
look-on with a satisfactory smirk. Behind was the
people
on the bus,
phones
in hands, all recording. Kevin knew this would be the spark of
change
. It was.
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