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Encourage people to do sports exercises

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this email in response to your letter which I have recently received. Tell the truth, I am blissfully delighted as you are inquiring my point of view regarding how to encourage to do sports exercises. I am going to mention some effective as well as crucial suggestions. From my perspective, the biggest thing we can do to help motivate someone else to exercise is to exercise ourselves. We should set a good example and people will be interested even if they do not let us know that they are. Additionally, we should invite someone to do some exercises with us in whatever way they want. They might feel more comfortable learning a new sport or figuring out how the gym works if you are doing it with them. Besides that, talk about how good we feel exercising. We must show that sport makes us feel happier and stronger. These suggestions which were above mentioned can also be reasons gor young generation to be interested in sport. I would be immensely grateful, if you could take them into confirmation. I am looking for your response at earliest convenience. Yours faithfully. Shahlo Ibrohimova
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this email in response to your letter which I have recently received.
Tell
the truth, I am
blissfully
delighted as you are inquiring my point of view regarding how to encourage to do
sports
exercises
. I am going to mention
some
effective
as well
as crucial suggestions. From my perspective, the biggest thing we can do to
help
motivate someone else to
exercise
is to
exercise
ourselves. We should set a
good
example and
people
will
be interested
even if they do not
let
us know that they are.
Additionally
, we should invite someone to do
some
exercises
with us in whatever way they want. They might feel more comfortable learning a new
sport
or figuring out how the gym works if you are doing it with them.
Besides
that, talk about how
good
we feel exercising. We
must
show
that
sport
makes
us feel happier and stronger. These suggestions which were above mentioned can
also
be reasons gor young generation to
be interested
in
sport
. I would be
immensely
grateful, if you could take them into confirmation. I am looking for your response at earliest convenience. Yours
faithfully
. Shahlo Ibrohimova
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