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Biography of my story in life

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In my opinion, life is a phrase of limited time in which we have to face life challenges, various kinds of feelings and part and parcel of growing up. On the basis of different situations, people might have different kinds of lives as well. Some of the lives may be rather good with full of fun although some can be the worst. For me, my life or my chapter is too simple. I am just a normal girl named Naw Say Say Moo who is trying her best in her life in any situation. I was born on the 10th October in 2002 and I am twenty years old by this year. I have five members of family including me, my father, mother, little sister who is four years younger than me and my grandmother. We all live together in Loikaw which is situated in Kayah State. My dad is an office staff and my mom is a high school teacher but she is currently not working. Although we are not too rich, my parents always support me as they can. I really owe them a lot. As Loikaw is a small town and in hilly region, I don’t think I can get a wide range of experience in relation to the pathway I am really interested in. So, I decided to study in Yangon after I have passed matriculation exam. For school, I attended No. 6, Basic, Education, High School, Loikaw from the class of KG to Grade-11. I had a memorable childhood with my friends here. Some interests I have got are reading books and papers, watching movies and television series, and learning new things. Personally, I am an introverted home-body so I hardly ever go out with my friends. I just love to stay in and do what I like such as reading books, watching movies. Sometimes, I can even binge-watch the whole series that included thirty-two episodes in one sitting. Books can always be true friend and this is how I look upon books. My entire family is Christian so we have a tradition of spending Sunday together. We always go to the church every Sunday and I play the violin at church. Currently, we do not have great time unlike before because of the complicated political situations. People in the whole country started to have their worst nightmare. Loikaw is included in the civil battle area and the citizens have to run away not to be killed by the act of dictatorship. 65% of the area, houses, schools, churches in the State have been deteriorated. I wish this could be stopped as soon as possible. My only ambition is to obtain an opportunity to get into a great university, to be able to set off my education journey and to become a person who can make a great impact for her family, town, country and the world after graduated. So that I can help poverty- stricken people. Moreover, my parents tried very hard to bring their daughters up till today. I think now I have my responsiblities and it is my turn to look after them back. Now, I am studying hard on the way to my priority. To conclude, I am happy about being who I am. Also I feel grateful a lot to God and my parents for the warmth and support. I am not perfect just like anybody else but can tell I will do my best to make my family and country proud of myself. This is why I am going towards achieving my goals with a smile on my face.
In my opinion,
life
is a phrase of limited time in which we
have to
face
life
challenges, various kinds of feelings and part and parcel of growing up. On the basis of
different
situations
,
people
might have
different
kinds of
lives
as well
.
Some of the
lives
may be
rather
good
with full of fun
although
some
can be the worst. For me, my
life
or my chapter is too
simple
. I am
just
a normal girl named
Naw
Say Say
Moo
who
is trying her best in her
life
in
any
situation. I
was born
on the 10th October in 2002
and
I am twenty years
old
by this year. I have five members of
family
including me, my father, mother,
little
sister
who
is four years
younger
than me and my grandmother. We all
live
together in
Loikaw
which
is situated
in
Kayah
State. My dad is an office staff and my mom is a high
school
teacher
but
she is
currently
not
working. Although we are not too rich, my parents always support me as they can. I
really
owe
them a lot. As
Loikaw
is a
small
town and in hilly region, I don’t
think
I can
get
a wide
range
of experience in relation to the pathway I am
really
interested in.
So
, I decided to study
in
Yangon after I have passed matriculation exam. For
school
, I attended No. 6, Basic, Education, High
School
,
Loikaw
from the
class
of KG to Grade-11. I had a memorable
childhood
with my friends here.
Some
interests I have
got
are reading books and papers, watching movies and television series, and learning new things.
Personally
, I am an
introverted
home-body
so
I hardly ever go out with my friends. I
just
love
to stay in and do
what
I like such as reading books, watching movies.
Sometimes
, I can even binge-
watch
the
whole
series that included thirty-two episodes in one sitting. Books can always be true friend
and
this is how I look upon books. My entire
family
is Christian
so
we have a tradition of spending Sunday together. We
always
go to the church every Sunday and I play the violin at church.
Currently
, we do not
have
great time unlike
before
because
of the complicated political situations.
People
in the
whole
country
started
to have their worst nightmare.
Loikaw
is included
in the civil battle area
and
the citizens
have to
run away not to
be killed
by the act of dictatorship. 65% of the area,
houses
,
schools
, churches in the State have
been deteriorated
. I wish this could be
stopped
as
soon
as possible. My
only
ambition is to obtain an opportunity to
get
into a great university, to be able to set off my education journey and to become a person
who
can
make
a great
impact
for her
family
, town, country and the world after graduated.
So
that I can
help
poverty-
stricken
people
.
Moreover
, my parents tried
very
hard
to bring their daughters up till
today
. I
think
now
I have my
responsiblities
and
it is my turn to look after them back.
Now
, I am studying
hard
on the way to my priority.
To conclude
, I am happy about being
who
I am.
Also
I feel grateful a lot to God and
my
parents for the warmth and support. I am not perfect
just
like anybody else
but
can
tell
I
will
do my best to
make
my
family
and country proud of myself. This is why I am going towards
achieving
my goals with a smile on my face.
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