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A HOT DAY THAT TURNED INTO A BAD DAY

A HOT DAY THAT TURNED INTO A BAD DAY kExpK
I like watching the rain and snow. It makes me think about a lot of things in the world, and also makes me read novels and poems in the best way. Even though rain and lightning seem comforting and innocent, some things are not what they seem. I had an experience about it approximately 5 years ago and it totally changed my view about relying on weather conditions. It was a summer day in summer. On that day, we went to our relatives’ house in the village. It was such a bright day that different varieties of flowers and plants were everywhere. After having lunch in the garden, I picked up daisies, poppies, and a few roses to draw. Then I prepared the table in front of the house and sat down. There was is just a little bit of sun on the table because of the roof above me, so I was in a good mood. I placed the flowers and the equipment, then started drawing. It had been four hours since I started drawing. I noticed that the weather began to change. The sun disappeared and the clouds covered the sky. All of them happened as if in a minute. Then I heard a strong thunder. It scared me but not much because I was kind of used to variable weather conditions. Then I heard some other another thunder. This one was really severe. I also saw some a fairly strong and bright light. It was like blinding. Afterwards, it started raining cats and dogs, and it got faster. The water was running from everywhere. I was shocked and scared. Immediately I ran home and watched what happened through the window with everybody. After a while, the rain turned into hail. It was horrible! The pieces of ice were like a tennis ball! It was lightning and hailing in addition to thunder. About five or ten minutes later, everything was gone. The clouds began to separate from each other so the rain stopped. When we left the house to look around, the sky looked clear, but pieces of ice that the size of a tennis ball were everywhere. Later, everybody continued what they were doing, but it took a long time for me to go on what I was doing. After this event, I had other similar incidents, but I couldn’t get used to not being scared from rainy weather. Now, whenever I hear thunder or see some a light in the sky, it scares me rather than comfort me.
I like watching the
rain
and snow. It
makes
me
think
about
a lot of
things in the world, and
also
makes
me read novels and poems in the best way.
Even though
rain
and lightning seem comforting and innocent,
some
things are not what they seem. I had an experience about it approximately 5 years ago and it
totally
changed
my view about relying on
weather
conditions. It was a summer day in summer. On that day, we went to our relatives’
house
in the village. It was such a bright day that
different
varieties of flowers and plants were everywhere. After having lunch in the garden, I picked up daisies, poppies, and a few roses to draw. Then I prepared the table in front of the
house
and sat down. There
was is
just
a
little bit
of sun on the table
because
of the roof above me,
so
I was in a
good
mood. I placed the flowers and the equipment, then
started
drawing. It had been four hours since I
started
drawing. I noticed that the
weather
began to
change
. The sun disappeared and the clouds covered the sky. All of them happened as if in a minute. Then I heard a strong
thunder
. It scared me
but
not much
because
I was kind of
used
to variable
weather
conditions. Then I heard
some
other another
thunder
. This one was
really
severe. I
also
saw
some
a
fairly
strong and bright light. It was like blinding. Afterwards, it
started
raining cats and dogs, and it
got
faster. The water was running from everywhere. I
was shocked
and scared. Immediately I ran home and
watched
what happened through the window with everybody. After a while, the
rain
turned into hail. It was horrible! The pieces of ice were like a tennis ball! It was lightning and hailing
in addition
to
thunder
. About five or ten minutes later, everything
was gone
. The clouds began to separate from each other
so
the
rain
stopped
. When we
left
the
house
to look around, the sky looked
clear
,
but
pieces of ice that the size of a tennis ball were everywhere. Later, everybody continued what they were doing,
but
it took a long time for me to go on what I was doing. After this
event
, I had other similar incidents,
but
I couldn’t
get
used
to not
being scared
from rainy
weather
.
Now
, whenever I hear
thunder
or
see
some
a light in the sky, it scares me
rather
than comfort me.
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